FF:she taught me how to live!!!(updated on page 29)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hii everyone this is the 1st time i'm writing an FF and dat too 4 akdha...hope you all like it...
jalal was about to regain his conciousness...he cld smell grass beneath him...he only had bleak memories about wat had happened...he remembered that jodha had removed bullets 4m the gun and to save jodha 4m the attacking tiger he had fought it with his bare hands...aftr sometime he slipped into something like a dream sleep...before losing his concious completely he sensed jodha beside him her soothing hands moving all over his body and wherever she touched he felt like being energised...
he opened his eyes into a new world full of life sun gleaming above him evrything was more clear than before...he tried to get up bt his body restrained him...he felt some clothes binding his wounds...he looked around to see dat he was still in the jungle all alone...a fire ws lighted beside him to warm him up...unawre of the change taking place in him he smiled at fire and checkd his wounds...they were cleaned treated and tied around with jodha's dupatta...they weren't paining now bt was irritating him a bit...he saw his coat neatly folded and kept a little away 4m fire. he slowly removed jodha's dupatta pieces wich cleansed his wounds...he felt happy dat she used her own dupatta to save him and obviously jodha's sanskarr wldn't have let her not to stop anyone 4m dying bt he was happy to have felt her dupatta all over him...he slowly melodiously removed it and was smiling all through while doing this...
he was about to throw it in ground wen his hands stopped by itself...
he couldn't do it why???? he didn't knw...

he knew he shuld be angry at jodha 4 removing those bullets bt no,,,,
he cld understand her gud intentions behind it...for the 1st time he thought he heard his heart beating and telling him what is right...wat has got into him he had no idea...he was completely lost in his own train of thoughts when jodha pulled him out of it...
"shehansha"...he heard jodha calling nt 4m far bt a few feets behing him...her voice so pure so sweet dat it felt like a cuckooo humming to the rising sun...
he turned back to his begum there she stood...dis wsn't the 1st time he had saw her thn why he feel dat an angel have just landed in front of him and her glow was filling his eyes 4 the 1st time...her hair was down covering her chest and her eyes wide with anxiety...she walked close to him...she enquired"are u alright shehanshah??? i was luking 4 some more medicines to traet ur wounds..." then she walked up to him and slowly touched all the wounds deeply carved in his body...she ran her hands through his chest and hands...4 the 1st time jalal felt his wife's care 2wards him he smiled and asked" ur shauhar is alright jodha begum calm down"...4m her luk he cld say dat thn only she realised wat she ws really doing...maybe treating him wen he was unconcious was a way better easy to her than this..."i was just checking"mumbled jodha who blushed and stepped away 4m him...jalal smiled at jodha's this cute expression...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum update...👏
Loved it..
Do cont soon...
N plz do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome FF yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️Really loved it alot.❤️
You have written so beautifully I felt like reading without a stop But 😆
Pls Continue soon. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 2
jodha mocked anger"why did you getup on ur own????? u r not completely alright u shuld rest now"...she saw jalal still smiling at her and cldn't meet his eyes...she wondered why was he stll smiling despite of the fact dat she removd bullets 4m his gun...

jalal was quite impressed with jodha's care. he knew dat he shuld be angry with her 4 she is one who got him almost killed...bt some voice was telling him some or the othr way wat she did was right...thn he wondered wat was this voice telling him wats right and wrong..
cldn'tbe his mind as it wld neversupport jodha thn wld it be his heart...NO WAY!!! he didn't had heart,,,noone believe it exists othr than his ammi jaan who always preach on heart and mohabath...he nevr believd it..bt now...something was changing...
if it really was his heart thn why cldn't his dearest frnd rukaiya find it????why was his heart's voice being 1stly evoked by jodha...???WHY????

jodha now found dat jalal was lost in some thoughts...so she slowly took his hands and made him lye down...she started applying medicines at his wounds.she cld feel his gaze sternly holding her...she really wanted to apologise to him so she finally gathering all her
strength stammerd out..."shehanshah I...I...am really sorry 4 wat I did...i never wanted to hurt u...bt wat i did was completely wrng ...4 saving innocnt animals lives i shuldn't have let urs at stake...watever punishmnt u give me i am ready to take it up"
with these words she started crying...she cldn't control herself...she let out all those tears of her anger(to herself),guilt and pain...she felt a warm hand firm on her shoulders and to relax the burden of her grief she unitentionally hugged jalal...


jalal felt bad to see jodha breaking down in front of him...he never felt like dis...he knew jodha ws innocnt and was sure he was completely right this time as he was listening to his heart which was hitherto untouched...he wanted to make her stop crying so he placed his hands on her shoulders and to his surprise she hugged him...this is the least he had expected but it felt gud...it felt wierd of course bt it felt great to hold her in his arms to have her this close to him to feel her agnst him to feel her heart beating along with his and it felt a way too more ...he was sad dat she was in such a grief bt was happy she had opened her heart to him...
this was completely a new jodha before him..or was she been always like dis and he didn't knw as he wasn't luking through his heart...
he remembered all those moments with her...she was the one whose beauty invaded him in the 1st sight itself, the one who placed sword in his neck ,the one who had courage to stand agnst him and his desicions, the one who never hesitated in stating truth, the one who begged 4 her frnd's life, the one who never tried to seduce him,the one who got him almost killed and now crying on his shoulders nt to save herself 4m punishmnt bt to get herself punished...she is so different 4m all others evn 4m rukaiya...
he heard his heart murmer "she is so pure...and she is urs..."!!!

jodha realised wat she was doing and slowly broke her hug...she was taken abck wen she find dat jalal was consoling her all through...it felt gud to see a new jalal in front of her to have seen a jalal with heart...she without luking back walked into the jungle...
he nevr stopped her and she was happy he didn't...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update..
Thankx for letting me know about Ur FF.
Jalal was so nice and poor Jodha started crying..
Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

CHAPTER 1-PAGE 1
CHAPTER 2-PAGE 2
CHAPTER 3-PAGE 6
CHAPTER 4-PAGE 11
CHAPTER 5-PAGE 16
CHAPTER 6-PAGE 21
CHAPTER 7-PAGE 25
Edited by littoos - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part.. Jalal is realizing some imp fact of his life... Akdha r getting close.. Nice.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was nice. continue soon. and PM me next time
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Very Nice!!! Wowoww!
Loved it!! COngratz dear!
You are amaazzingg!!
Do update soon..👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Lovely update..
Thankx for letting me know about Ur FF.
Jalal was so nice and poor Jodha started crying..

thnx di...it means a lot coming 4m u...

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