OS-2 part COMEDY in 21st century-Mr.Jalal, Mrs.Ruqaiyya & Nanny Ma

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: minnie2308
🤣 Fun...
Amul gold homogenized toned milk🤣

A pleasure toppling you down in laughter so...thanks sweetie😃

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Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

One of the most brilliantly written story ever!👏 I love your food analogies.😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Thanks minoo 🤗

Originally posted by: KDR81
🤣OH GOD...Really...the best Part...
" Amul Gold homogenized toned milk"🤣

P.S.It is wonderful...but in case u decide to let ur imagination free again in this venture...pls pls pls do us a favor in getting Jodha darling in whatever funny avatar as u please ,as it is kind of torture for us to imagine Jalaal without her...😃

I'd find it difficult including our historical Jodha in this modern venture for some reason...Akdha is very close to my heart and I'd find it very difficult to come out of that with something funny like this..but, if I get ideas I'll try...

Thank you so so so so much once again for your kind words...😃

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: baubles
Awesome...that's all i can say!!🤣
Amul Gold Homogenized Toned milk!!!lol🤣🤣👍🏼

Thanks sweetie...😃

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ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

u know i was not going to read this because it was not Akdha and I do not like to read anything with a story of jalal and ruq and no jodha but then i saw u were the writer so i had to at least try and i read 1 para and then gave up but then i was like lashy wrote it so there must be something good about it.
I was glad i read it. I loved the spin of 21st century and how u included ruling mind, amul homegenized milk etc and then loved the part when jalal knew what was going on with ma and ruq and was giggling when i read one women down and other to go.
i hope u continue the ss in which jodha and jalal were talking in silence about wearing joda and jalal leaving for war. I LOVED THAT SCENE.sO, I hope u continue that one into ff.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: baubles
Awesome...that's all i can say!!🤣
Amul Gold Homogenized Toned milk!!!lol🤣🤣👍🏼

Thanks sweetie for braving yourself and reading it...

Glad I could bring a smile to your face...😃

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ashpat
u know i was not going to read this because it was not Akdha and I do not like to read anything with a story of jalal and ruq and no jodha but then i saw u were the writer so i had to at least try and i read 1 para and then gave up but then i was like lashy wrote it so there must be something good about it.
I was glad i read it. I loved the spin of 21st century and how u included ruling mind, amul homegenized milk etc and then loved the part when jalal knew what was going on with ma and ruq and was giggling when i read one women down and other to go.
i hope u continue the ss in which jodha and jalal were talking in silence about wearing joda and jalal leaving for war. I LOVED THAT SCENE.sO, I hope u continue that one into ff.

Thanks ayesha for braving it and reading it 😆 I knew this OS would not be really welcomed in the forum...but, was meant to be a satire...you know a spoof (funny take) on the characters of ruq and ma in the serial ...in this one jalal cannot be manipulated...

Obviously, I didn't want to do a satire with Akdha in it...LOL😆I'm too partial to them...

Thanks dear...😳

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known as KAI, name is Jasmine

@Kai.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Lashy!! 🤗 you cheered me up buddy..i was in grumpy mood on Friday!😛

OS - 1

i was reading this it like a new novel without any idea about the story or character, Didn't want to kill the suspense or humour!

Introduction bit got me curious, i was wondering if it was Jodha till i read the smoking cigarette ( i know i know...u did mention it was abt ruku...i didn't pay attention😆)

why is it called JA JA group of steel ...1 JA stands for Jalal akbar what's the other "JA"?

Mrs Ruqaiyya Jalal-ud-din Mohammed - probably the longest name of a person in the 21st century! 😉

oh Maham! I was trying my best to imagine her in the white saree. For some strange reason i could only picturise her as Jigyasa from Kasam Se!😈

Amul Gold homogenized toned milk - lolz jallu shd have been a poster boy for this product!😛 i loveee Amul Utterly Butterly Delicious Amul!

Jallu could do an ad campaign, "what's the secret of your glowing skin??"

Jallu " drink Amul Gold Homogenized toned milk 3 times a day"

Maham in the back drop with the milk carton! 🤣 "Also gives you sparkling white teeth"😃

back to the OS, Maham's repetition was hilarious!! Steel Steel Steel...Madam Madam Madam... Adham Adham Adham🤣🤣 i love this Maham!

awww loved the modern Jallu i-phone 5, hands in the pocket! ☺️

he looked at his nanny with an unconvinced frown - quickly realizing that it was yet another of their tiffs he was being dragged into.

poor Jallu, always get's caught b/w his nanny & nagging wife!😈

..since JA JA Group ignored the news meet last time, I'm sure there are going to be many disgruntled journalists and embarrassing questions! We better BRACE ourselves for it!'

OMG Lashy! 😲 what a clever way to incorporate the real life drama!!🤣🤣

There! Both women down! what a charmer!! 🥳

'Ha!' he thought to himself. She was always under the impression that she ruled his mind when it was in fact the other way around. He'd given her a 100-page task -just like he'd done many times in the past - that he knew she would NEVER complete. Not because she wasn't capable of doing so, but because she never put in the effort required. What with all of her spare time taken up either shopping for jewellery or playing ridiculous games like Angry Birds and Crossword puzzles with her page 3 friends- while they sat and gossiped about boyfriends and husbands! His Empire was safe from her, for now!

^^ 👏😛 YES!! so Jallu is in Ctrl of Ruku's mind!! me likes this Jallu! 👍🏼

'Badi Ammi...Badi Ammi' he continued. Now, SHE was a different ballgame altogether. She thought he knew not what she was up to, but he was no seven year old now. He had great regard for her, but he'd known about her lofty intentions for a while now. She was growing too old for this game and Jalal was certain she was fast losing it too. Why, he'd even caught her doing strange things in the recent past - talking to her reflection, laughing to herself, crying to herself and even talking to something in her closets! He realized it wouldn't be long before she'd forgo her sanity completely! His Empire was safe from her too!

wow!! this guy has learnt his lesson from his past life!👍🏼 🥳

'Let the women in your life THINK they are winning, and then you've ACTUALLY won half the battle already' his trusted professor, Bairam Khan had advised him. He never failed to follow those priceless instructions!

haila!! BK!!😎 what a progress from Royal Adviser to Professor! 😉

thanks Lashy, me loving these 21st century people more than 16th century ones! they have evolved and learnt some valuable lessons! except for some females!🤣

thank you!🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

@ Kai🤗

You cheered me up buddy..i was in grumpy mood on Friday!😛

Awww was it by any chance due to your lappy?

I was reading this it like a new novel without any idea about the story or character, Didn't want to kill the suspense or humour!

How sweet 😳

Introduction bit got me curious, i was wondering if it was Jodha till i read the smoking cigarette ( i know i know...u did mention it was abt ruku...i didn't pay attention😆)

Hukkah translated into cigarette obviously 😆

why is it called JA JA group of steel ...1 JA stands for Jalal akbar what's the other "JA"?

JA JA steels basically just a misnomer of our largest steels in India today TATA steels 😆

Jallu could do an ad campaign, "what's the secret of your glowing skin??"

Jallu " drink Amul Gold Homogenized toned milk 3 times a day"

Maham in the back drop with the milk carton! 🤣 "Also gives you sparkling white teeth"😆😆😆 true...JA has made us look at doodh ka karz through a whole new angle...😆 the Amul idea I have to give it to Alakh though..we'd made a whole thread on it...

back to the OS, Maham's repetition was hilarious!! Steel Steel Steel...Madam Madam Madam... Adham Adham Adham🤣🤣 i love this Maham!

Thanks...well that's what she does do in the serial too..Adham Adham Adham..Jalal Jalal Jalal...

awww loved the modern Jallu i-phone 5, hands in the pocket! ☺️

Jallu is Jallu

poor Jallu, always get's caught b/w his nanny & nagging wife!😈

😆 its been the case whatever the era

..since JA JA Group ignored the news meet last time, I'm sure there are going to be many disgruntled journalists and embarrassing questions! We better BRACE ourselves for it!'

OMG Lashy! 😲 what a clever way to incorporate the real life drama!!🤣🤣

Thanks sweetie...😆

There! Both women down! what a charmer!! 🥳

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^^ 👏😛 YES!!Wow!! this guy has learnt his lesson from his past life!👍🏼 🥳 so Jallu is in Ctrl of Ruku's mind!! me likes this Jallu! 👍🏼

Yes...I like guys who are in control..😎...is it that obvious?

Haila!! BK!!😎 what a progress from Royal Adviser to Professor! 😉

Royal advisor in 16th century translates to professor in 21st na...

thanks Lashy, me loving these 21st century people more than 16th century ones! they have evolved and learnt some valuable lessons! except for some females!🤣

Oh nooo that was not my intention though 😆 me still loyal to the 16th century versions...😆

thank you!🤗

No, thank you sweetheart!🤗

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known as KAI, name is Jasmine

@Kai.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: lashy
@ Kai🤗
You cheered me up buddy..i was in grumpy mood on Friday!😛
Awww was it by any chance due to your lappy?

yes, it's the lappy problem that made my weekend went bad. I stay alone and without TV my lappy is my only saviour during weekends (Fri & Sat)
Week days i am engrossed in work from 5 am to 5 pm - call me a workaholic!

why is it called JA JA group of steel ...1 JA stands for Jalal akbar what's the other "JA"?
JA JA steels basically just a misnomer of our largest steels in India today TATA steels 😆 oh TA - TA so JA - JA...😉

Jallu could do an ad campaign, "what's the secret of your glowing skin??"
Jallu " drink Amul Gold Homogenized toned milk 3 times a day"
Maham in the back drop with the milk carton! 🤣 "Also gives you sparkling white teeth"😆😆😆 true...JA has made us look at doodh ka karz through a whole new angle...😆 the Amul idea I have to give it to Alakh though..we'd made a whole thread on it...
Autumn is smart girl! 😊 it was the best part too!

back to the OS, Maham's repetition was hilarious!! Steel Steel Steel...Madam Madam Madam... Adham Adham Adham🤣🤣 i love this Maham!
Thanks...well that's what she does do in the serial too..Adham Adham Adham..Jalal Jalal Jalal...
i love her interactions with her stupid son!😆 she leaves no opportunity to show him the mirror! 😆

^^ 👏😛 YES!!Wow!! this guy has learnt his lesson from his past life!👍🏼 🥳 so Jallu is in Ctrl of Ruku's mind!! me likes this Jallu! 👍🏼
Yes...I like guys who are in control..😎...is it that obvious?

me too! i hate mommy's boys!😡
Haila!! BK!!😎 what a progress from Royal Adviser to Professor! 😉
Royal advisor in 16th century translates to professor in 21st na... hmm right. If you get time next OS please elaborate on BK!😃 some pearls of wisdom⭐️

thanks Lashy, me loving these 21st century people more than 16th century ones! they have evolved and learnt some valuable lessons! except for some females!🤣
Oh nooo that was not my intention though 😆 me still loyal to the 16th century versions...😆
nah ba-baah! was kidding. 16th century are unique and that's what keeps us hooked to JA!😳

thank you!🤗
No, thank you sweetheart!🤗 how i wished i could hug you through my screen! 😳