OS: humein aap ki zaroorath hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys after getting spoilers from promo and adhams attack on jalal in episode thought of this short OS

Its after the tiger attack


Jalal just killed the tiger but he was totally injured

jodha was shocked and terrified to the core, to see the badly injured husband walking towards her, she dont know what to say to him, is she suppose to ask him sorry and ask his forgiveness, or is she suppose to hug him for saving her suhaag from the mouth of predator, is she suppose to call her kanha for saving her suhaag, is she suppose to thank jalal for saving her life,????

she is in dilemma, but she is speechless, Jalal with full of anger just walks up to her, his legs are out of control...he has gone weak and tierd after fighting a life and death war with the predator...


he just comes close to jodha and falls down due to weakness due to loss of blood


jodha just tries to hold him, and she and jalal fall on ground as she is not able to hold the heavy man in her arms, Jalal is unconscious, jodha makes his head rest in her lap, too scared about his life, and shouts at him, please open your eyes, ask him foolishly what happened to you, why did you save me, its my mistake and my sin that i put my husbands life in danger, i am not worth for my life, being a wife how can i let my husbands life in danger, if anything happens to you what will i answer to ammi jaan, how can i live without you...


Jodha has realized that its his life that is more important to her, and his non existence in her life will lead to no meaning in her life now...

she just sees the dead tiger once more and cries, she caress his cheeks and his head...

and thinks that this time is not to shed tears but to fight with destiny and save her husband...
she takes some plant leaves and mud and grind them and put a medicine to jalals wound so that it will stop the blood loss ( forset is full of medicines )

later she brings the water from near by lake and makes him drink and washes his face which is full of blood...and wipes with her dupatta, and hugs him...


and she keeps on shouting for the help from her lost army...


she roams all over the forest and finds the army of her, and takes the unconscious jalal to the tent


and aftagh khan tells jodha to take care of shehenshah as he will go to the doctor ( dont know what they call) who is just nearby forest and bring him by morning till than its jodhas responsibility to take care of jalal

and he instruct the army to keep an eye on jalals safety untill he returns,

Jodha just nurses him all night and prays to god to save him for her sake its the first time she is praying for his life, and she knows the mistake what she is committed cannot be forgiven but he is her husband and only reason for her life, if he is not there her life is worthless,

Jalal gets his consciousness and listens what she just prayed to god, jodha realizes jalal got his consciousness and feeds him water and covers him with blanket and asks him does he need anything...

jalal could not answer and looses his consc once more..

jodha sees him again and curses her life for doing the mistake which cannot be forgiven...

meanwhile she realizes that some people are moving around the tent and she just realizes that they are attacked by enemy..

she realizes that their life is in danger once more, but jalal is unconscious and its her responsibility to save his life now..

she just takes jalals shemsher and cover her face with dupatta and prays god to save her suhaag and hides jalal and goes out fo tent

...

the enemy attacks jodha and her army they have a fight ... jodha fights with full courage and her army supports her ...

one of enemy attacks jodha and she hurts her arm, and meanshile jalal gets his concious and sees himself in the bundle of clothes and blanksheets, he just realizes their is war going on and realizes jodha begum is not near him, and looks for his shemsher and realizes may be its jodha begum who took that shemsher
and goes out and finds a shemsher of dead mughal army and pulls it and sees jodha is surrounded by the enemy and his anger raises to the core and he remebers his allah

and he just puts his shemsher when one of the enemy was about to kill jodha and jodha sees jalal protecting her and both share a eye lock ...

jalal and jodha both fight with the enemy and jalal keeps protecting jodha ...

and meanwhile aftag khan comes with the doctor he too joins the fight and they kill all the enemies...

Jodha could not answer or utter a word, jodhas dupatta is out of place jalal goes near her , and takes her dupatta and places on her head...jodha could not see his glare and she is ashamed for her mistake, and aftagh khan asks jalal to rest in tent and the doctor gives jalal treatment and jalal asks doctor to treat his wife too who has got cuts in the fight...

aftag khan praises jodha begum who saved jalals life by fighting with enemies, jalal smirks at jodha ( jodha wont understand whether the smirk was of anger or for a thnk you )...

after everyone left Jodha goes to jalal, jala sees jodha standing infront of him, he just glares at her, jodha is shamed but her eyes are speaking to him, and bends her head down, jalal realizes thaat she wants to apologize to him,

jodha begum there is no need for you to ask me sorry, please remember never to repeat the mistake, now you are hurt please go to your tent and rest lets return back to agra tomorrow morning,...

jodha wipes her tears and just goes from him...





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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Ausome dear... 👏
hope so in show also it happen like this👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
its awesome 👏
and so cute 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Ur awesome in writing!
Very nice 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one. It would be good to see a brave and smart jodha use the sword , instead of giving too much Gyaan and only mouthing ghrina 😆. Jalal getting conscious at the correct moment would also be a good scene 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dear...
hope so in show also it happen like
this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow- i like jodha saving jalal by fghting with his enenmies. they should bring this in the show
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very well written and hope something will be added on monday scene from your FF...Superb👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
Do you think it would be greedy of me if i ask for a part two
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Posted: 11 years ago
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arey yaarre omggg fabulousss..
pls sbmit ur script to cs
dammnn i wnt thiss scenee in d shw
so cuteee nd romntcc

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