Originally posted by: anshfever
wow amazing update π...
plz update soon...
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Originally posted by: anshfever
wow amazing update π...
plz update soon...
Originally posted by: IFRutuja
Awww!!!! How cute update.. Sooo nice π³
Thank u soo much π€
Originally posted by: goldenmoon
hilarious update...
cant stop laughing...
loved it...
Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
Abhi k liye res
That was hilarious Pallavi!!! Loved the update sooo much, was laughing the whole time..thoroughly enjoyed the whole scene.ππ€£
Jalal was simply superb..Moti is a silent Ja-Jo shipper, love her!Absolutely loved the update...do update soon!! You write really well...πDo update soon!π€
Originally posted by: srividhya68
awesome upt
jallal reactions to hamida was superb
cont soon
Originally posted by: AriyaBestLover
Thnk God!
Wat a spectacular update yaar pallu!
Jalal-Moti gesture talk was cute.
AkDha was fantabulous.
Hamida almost caught AkDha!
I'd lyk to quote some lines/speeches-
Jalal:- ab kya kare...ya khuda...ya khuda...ya khuda...is baar bacha le...dobara esa kaam kabhi nahi karege... .(jodha gave him an angry stare...he quickly corrected his sentence...)...are humara matlab hai din me nahi karege...magar ab
kare kya ...hume to kuch samajh me nahi aa
raha...
{This literally made me fall from my bed!}
(moti looked at the curtain and then at
jalal...whose face had turned so terrified due to
fear by now...jalal silently nodded his head
sideways in a no...signaling moti...not to tell
hamida about it...now it was confirmed to moti
that its jodha only...but still she asked to confirm) Moti:-(looking at jalal...in a mute voice...asking him...signaling towards the curtain) ...jodha???? (jalal nodded his head in a yes...with an extremely bechara wala face ...this made moti smile ...moti giggled a bit covering her face with her hand ...jalal never felt that embarrassed before ...but he had to find a way out...suddenly an idea came into his mind...he looked at
moti...made a pitiful face...requesting her to help
them out...signaled towards hamida with his
eyes...moti assured him by blinking his
eyes...smiling)
{This was a rofl wala scene}
Hamida:- nahi jalal...koi galat fehmi nahi hai...hume lagta hai...wahan parde ke piche koi hai... (and she moved towards the curtain and was about to
remove it...when not getting what to do...jalal
suddenly caught her rist and hugged her tight
thus causing her to move away from the curtain...hamida found it really very strange...) Jalal:-(in an emotional yet loud tone) ammi jaan...aap kitni achhi hai...kitna khayal rehta hai
aapko humara...hum kitna tanha mehsus ker rahe
the...aap humse milne aayi hume bahut achha
laga...aap chinta mat kijiye ammi jaan...jodha mil jayegi... (hamida got really irked and surprised with his gesture...she pushed him away...) Hamida:- choriye hume jalal...ye kya ho gaya aapko achanak se...utni der se hum kamre me
hai...tab mauka nahi mila aapko shukriyada karne
ka...ab to wakai hume lagta hai...aapki tabiyat
sachmuch nasaaz hai...phir se hakim ko bulana
padega lagta hai...ghav ka asar jism ke sath sath
dimag per bhi malum pad raha hai...chalo moti...
{This was like a child had never got such attention frm his mom. And indeed it is true in both show and story.}
Jalal:- ab is muskurahat ki wajah jaan sakte hai hum...jyada khush hone ki zarurat nahi hai...baal
baal bache hai hum dono... Jodha:- ek baat kahe aapse...(giggling) Jalal:- haan bilkul...humari tariff karne se kabhi kisi ko nahi rokte hum... (She looked at him lovingly...raised her hands and
pinched his cheeks really hard...) Jodha:- aap bahut pyare hai...(pulling his cheek) (first he was surprised at her gesture but
later...this made jalal blush really heavily...he
couldn't meet her eyes for a moment...he got up
from the bed...facing away from her...jodha too
quickly got up and followed him...came and stood
in front of him... ) Jodha:- Sharma rahe hai kya...dekhe to... (this made jalal blush even more harder...he again
faced away...feeling really shy...) (jodha started teasing him...giggling and
taunting...jalal had got enough of her...unable to
handle anymore...he held her wrist...and pulled
her towards him...she twirled and landed up on
his chest with a bang...jalal held her hand behind
her back and pressed it lightly...jodha's laughter stopped with it...and she got a little scared...now
jalal started teasing her...)
{This was really awsme}
Jodha:- (in a husky voice) ...kya kar rahe hai shenshah...choriye na... Jalal:-(put his chin on her shoulder...sniggling her from her shoulder to neck...)...kyu...aapko pasand nahi aa raha...hmm... Jodha:- sachmuch...bahut vilamb ho raha hai shenshah...jane dijiye hume... Jalal:- sach me ...itni der ho rahi hai... (smirking...lightly kissed on her neck...he ran his
fingers on her back and held the dori in his
hand...)...to kya ese hi bahar jayegi aap... (he tied the dori at her back...touching it sensuously...then
whispered in her ear...)...dori khuli thi aapki... Jodha:- choriye na...lajja nahi aati aapko kya... Jalal:- sharm to humari usi din khatam ho gayi thi...jis din aapke ishq me giraftaar hue the hum... Jodha:-(a little annoyed) to aap kya kehna chahte hai...ke humne aapko besharm bana diya hai... Jalal:- (still lost) humne esa to nahi kaha... (jodha turned with a jerk...looked at him
angrily...) Jodha:- acha to ab aap ye kehna chahte hai ke hum jhut bol rahe hai... Jalal:- (amazed at her sudden and unexpected anger) khuda khair kare jodha begum...ache khase mahaul ko jang ke maidan me tabdil kar
diya aapne to...sach me...nikaah jab bhi hua
ho...per biwiyo wali harkate to ab shuru ki hai
aapne...
{It was really another rofl wala scene}
I hereby end my review.
Arshaya
Originally posted by: shahbhavini
βοΈβοΈβοΈAwesome!!!!!!!!!!!! Hillarious is the correct word for this chapter !!!
Yaar tune to dil bag bag kar diyaI love u for this chapter!!!! we all needed to cheer up from current track!!! πππPallavi is the best!!!!!!βοΈβοΈβοΈ Loved it so much!!! I was laughing and blushingπ entire chapter!!!πππHamida part was really awesomeπππThanks U for this happiness!πUpdate soonπππ
this was most hilarious chapter of ur ff. i loved it and their romance too too. thx for pm.plzz update soon.
Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Lolll!!! πππ WOW!!! My SHerni...You are justtt amazinggg!!!πβοΈπ Hilarious is all I could say this was!! πππ³ Wow..First if all I bow down to the greatest dialogue writer I have ever seen! π³πβ€οΈBeautiful !π³β€οΈ Your updates are so0o0 resplendent,β€οΈ they surpass the excellence level with much easiness!β€οΈ You write like an angel !π³π³ β€οΈYour FF has touched so many hearts, mine includedπ³β€οΈ I have gone mad for this storyβ€οΈ,, ππ³πYou are a stroke of genius my pallavi Darlingβ€οΈ! All the chapters have been sheer brilliance.πβοΈβ€οΈ.The way you write is so artistic and realisticπ³β€οΈπ! I can easily imagine everything in front of my eyesβ€οΈ ..It so involving..π³β€οΈπ I get engrossed like I am mad for it.πβοΈ.Itna dhyan se If I study, I'll pass out with Distinctionπ β€οΈThis chapter was where on one side Hilariousππ, β€οΈon other side It was wonderfulβ€οΈ! The AkDha you portray in your story just blow me away!πβ€οΈπ³ The love,β€οΈπ³ the dialoguesπ³β€οΈ, the beautiful scenesπ³ and amazing creativity of yoursβ€οΈπ³ is beyond comparison my Jaaneman Pallavi!π Keep Rocking!βοΈ You are seriously a brilliant writer I have seen! β€οΈβ€οΈKeep it up!πβοΈ Love ya always!π€
I salute you for writing amazing Long chapsπ³π³ ..but trust me..I never get enough of them.π.I am so addicted you see!ππ³π³ So I wanna Say...Update Plzzz π€£
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