FF *Ishqzaade* Chapter 27 updated on page150*THREAD CLOSED* - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for update dear... i hope nw ur exams must hv been over...
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Az3003

We love you too Di!!!!❤️🤗

I love you all darlings!!!
😃😃
ANd Pallavi Update plz..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully written
amazing updates
loved it
thnks for pm


srry for late comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pallavi meri Sherni..plz. update😳😡😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Pallavi meri Sherni..plz. update😳😡😳



YUP PLZ BABY UPDATE SOON...MISSING UR UPDATEEE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello everyone...😊
i am back with the update...😃
sorry for the extreme delay...😭
but my pc has recovered its state yesterday only...😡
here it is⭐️

Chapter 15:-

(jalal and hamida entered in jalal's room and what they saw was a bit unusual for them...they found the hakim sleeping on jalal's bed...this sight terrified hamida bano a bit...she got worried that jalal wont like this ever...he might get angry...she turned towards jalal to convince him not to punish that hakim...but what she saw gave her a utter amazement...instead of getting hyper he was smiling at the hakim...this made hamida a bit relieved...but she couldn't control her curiousity...)

Hamida: - (surprised)...jalal...aap muskura rahe hai...hume to laga tha aap naraz ho jayege...

Jalal: - (with a question mark expression on his face) naraz aur hum...lekin kis baat per...

Hamida: - ab itne bhi masum banne ki koshish mat kijiye jalal...hum hakim sahib ki harkat ke bare me baat kar rahe hai...

Jalal:- harkat...hahaha...aap bhi na ammi jaan...ab agar ek thake hare insaan ki bhul se aankh lag gayi to iske liye hum uska sar to kalam nahi kar sakte na...hum kyu khafa hone lage bhala...

Hamida:- lekin jahan tak hume pata hai...koi bina izazat aapki chize istemal kare ya unhe chu bi le...ye to aapko bilkul bhi gavara nahi hua karta tha na jalal...aur isiliye hume lga ke aap hakim ko...

Jalal:- (interrupting her) beshak ammi jaan...esa tha aur aaj bhi hai...lekin pata nahi kyu aaj hume kisi bhi baat ka bura nahi lag raha...aur mausam bhi to kitna khusnuma hai aaj...pata nahi kyu per hume gussa aa hi nahi raha to hum kya kare...balki hume to hansi aa rahi hai...bechare hakim sahib...ab jaldi chaliye...varna kahin hakim sahib itni gehri nind me na chale jaye ke unhe uthana hi namumkin ho jaaye...

Hamida:-(to herself) hume to aapke mizaz kuch zyada hi khushnuma malum ho rahe hai jalal...aur iski wajah bhi hum bakhubi jante hai...bus aapke kubool karne ka intezar hai hume to...(smiles)

(They approached the hakim...jalal took out his shamshir and placed it at hakim's neck...hamida got astonished...she put her hand on jalal's shoulder...)

Hamida:- jalal...(amazed)

Jalal:- shhh....(signaling her to keep quite...by putting his index finger on his lips...giggles)

(the slight touch of shamshir caused the hakim to wake up...he slowly opened his eyes...and what he saw ...left him scared like hell...he saw jalal holding his shamshir looking at him with fiery looks as if he will eat him up in no time for using his bed without his permission...he quickly got off the bed ...fell in jalal's feet...)

Hakim:- hume maaf kar dijiye shenshah...pata hi nahi chala kab aankh lag gayi...hum jante hai humse bahut bada gunaah ho gaya hai...per yakin maniye zill-e-elahi humne janbujhker esa bilkul bhi nahi kiya...ye gustakhi phir kabhi nahi dohrayege...bus is baar maafi de dijiye...(and he goes on and on...)

(jalal held his shoulders and made him stand on his feet...hakim was scared like hell that what hewill do now...)

Jalal:- are are hakim sahib ...shant ho jayiye...hum to sirf mazak kar rahe the...aap khamkha hi dar gaye...hum kuch nahi karege aapko...aur aapse koi gunaah nahi hua hai...galti humari hi hai...humne hi aane me kafi der kar di...aur aap humse umr me bade hai...aap humse maafi mange...ye aapko shobha nahi deta...

(Hakim was feeling relieved now...)

Hakim:- shukriya shenshah...hum to ghabra hi gaye the...aapka dil sachmuch bahut bada hai shenshah...

Jalal:- isme bade dil wali koi baat nahi hai hakim sahib...aaj humari zindagi ka bahut hi khaas din hai...aap ki jagah koi aur bhi hota to hum use bhi koi saza na dete...

Hamida:- ab agar aap dono ke gile shikve dur ho gaye ho to...jalal ki sehat ki or bhi thoda gaur farma liya jaaye...

Hakim: - ji marium makani...hum abhi dekhte hai...

(jalal sat on the bed and hakim opened the dupatta tied at his shoulder... it was indeed a serious injury...he quickly picked up a pen and paper...and mentioned the necessary medicines on it...handed it to hamida bano...)

Hakim:- jaldi se in jadi butiyo ka intezaam karwa dijiye...marham ke liye inki zarurat hogi...

Hamida:- ji hum abhi mangvate hai...(and she turned to leave...)

Jalal:- are ammi jaan...aap kyu taklif kar rahi hai...kisi bandi ko bhej dijiye ...wo le aayegi...

Hamida:- nahi jalal...jab baat aapki sehat se judi ho to usme koi bhi kotahi nahi barti jayegi...hum khud apni nigrani me marham taiyar karvayege...hum abhi aate hai...

(And she took their leave and left the room...)

Hakim: - shenshah...zara apna jama utariyega...dekhe to...kahi zakham zyada gehra to nahi...

(jalal removed his kurta by opening the doris present at the right side of it....*omg...me drooling...oh la la oh la la...tu hai mera jallu...*)

(hakim observed his wound very closely... )

Hakim:- ya khuda...ye to kafi gehra zakham lagta hai shenshah...taanke lagane padege...

(Till now jalal was all lost in his own thoughts again...he dint pay much attention on what the hakim said...)

Jalal:- thik hai...jaisa aap sahi samjhe...

(hakim cleaned his wound out with a piece of cotton...put the thread in the needle...and started stitching the wound at his shoulder...the first stitch left jalal with a sigh)

Jalal:- ahhh....(but with that sigh...he closed his eyes and a beautiful picture emerged from the dark in his mind...that converted all his pain into pleasure... )

*bg starts...*

*JIYA DHADAK DHADAK... (KALYUG MOVIE)*😳

(He was in his own dreamland...he tried to recognize the person...he saw two beautiful eyes that were way too expressive...capable of making anyone to be drown in them very easily...sometimes they were naughty...playing with his heartbeats...but sometimes they looked so innocent as if they never ever saw anything wrong or never done any mischief.. ... )

*tujhe dekh dekh sona...*

*tujhe dekhker hai jagna...*-2

(her lips like a budding rose flower...whenever she opens them up to speak... it seems like two perfectly shaped red rose petals colliding with each other softly...adding more charm to her magical voice...they don't require any color to be applied on them...as god has already colored them in rosy pink...every time they turn into a curve...steals his heart away always)

*maine ye zindgani...sang tere bitani*

*tujhme basi hai meri jaan...hayye*

*jiya dhadak dhadak ...jiya dhadak dhadak *

* jiya dhadak dhadak jaaye...*-2

(Her cheeks...that can display every color of emotion...sometimes they go red with the color of blush...sometimes they are rosy pink as if they are naturally like that...she is none other than his angel...his love...his life...his jodha...it brought a cute smile on his face...every time the needle entered his wound...he thought of her angel...and the pain was vanished in no time...)

*lagta hai ye kyu mujhe...*

*sadiyo se chahu tujhe...*-2

(with every stitch...his smile was growing more and more wider...a slide show of jodha's images was going on in his mind...and the sudden pinch was working like a click for it ...he remembered all his sweet memories with her...the way they were walking together smiling at each other...the way they used to fight over each and every small thing...that night in jungle...how blissful it was...the way she fell over him...her innocent face as if she dint know what happened... )

*Mere sapno me aake*

*apna mujhko banake...*

*mujhpe tu kar ehsaan hayye*

*jiya dhadak dhadak ...jiya dhadak dhadak ... jiya dhadak dhadak jaaye*

(the moment when he realized his feelings towards jodha...and confessed it to her...the moment when ran to his arms...banged on his chest...showered her love on him and confessed it...those words of her "hum bhi aapse prem karne lage hai shenshah...hum bhi apko bahut chahne lage hai...hum aapke bina ek shan bhi jivit nahi reh sakte..." echoed again and again in his mind...he never ever imagined that someone can make him feel that much happy...she completed his life...gave him the biggest ever gift...yes...she gifted him his heart...his feelings...his happiness...his love...)

*ankhiyo se sun le kabhi...*

*baate labo pe likhi...*-2

*inko tu sun le aaja *

*chahat ke rang chada ja...*

*kehna kabhi to mera maan haaye...*

* jiya dhadak dhadak ...jiya dhadak dhadak ...jiya dhadak dhadak jaaye... *

(Meanwhile someone has already entered his room and was observing his gestures standing at the entrance...)

(finally the moment when he touched jodha's lips with his...appeared in front of his eyes and the soft ever touch caused him to come back in his senses...he opened his eyes and smiled at his dream...blushed lightly...)

Note:- i know this update is not up to date unfortunately...actually wrote after a long time...so flow pakadne me thoda time lagega yaar....i m ready for all jutta, chappal and critisizm...with open arms...🤗will try to update the next part tomorrow...😃

love u all...😳 Pallavi😃

Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

WHat??? Prank?? You pagal Sherni.. You took my jaan nearly.. apne kaan khicho abhi ke abhi...😡😡😡 Dear Sherni..u don't know how much I love u and ur FF.. Its to die for.. I love it so much.. Pranky girl.. For now..I'll forgive..ok...And mY best wishes to u for examz... Uske bad jaldi jaldi udate karo...!!!😳😳


heheheh...wo to already kheench chuki hu dear...
love u my jadugarini...ummmaahhh😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_pooja

hey!
extremely sorry dear for late reply, as i was not feeling well
i must say one thing that u really played nice prank on us
but it really scared us
as i love u & ur beauiful ff
this time i'm going to excuse u for this prank
& now cmng to the update, it was awesome dear as always
please try to update next part soon, after ur exams
& all the best for ur exam😃


dont be sorry yaar...😃
mai hi kaun sa bahut jaldi update karti hu dear...heheh😆
thanks for the love...⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Az3003

This was a superb update Pallavi👏👏👏 I love the detail that you went into about how Jalal kept threatening KS so that she treats Jodha properly👏👏👏

Maham almost fainting was classic😆😆😆 Why never let Jalal be a second late so that annoying hag could hit the floor???😡
lol the highlight for me though was Hamida scolding them and bringing Jalal and Jodha back to earth after they were so lost in each other😆 I had a smile on my face the whole time😃 Too sweet😳😳😳 Ab jaldi update karo na😭 I can't wait for the confession you amazing writer you😳😳😳

whoaa...😛
what a comment...😃
loved it...⭐️
glad you like it baby...😳
thanks azra😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Update plz...😛 and I loved Azra's review ! she's a darling yar..😊😊

🤣
ye hai teri prem kahani😆

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