Akdha SS/FF:- Dard-e-Ishq Part 2 Updated PG.18

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Important Note:- I'm not a writer at all.Some of you who know me from mb forum must be aware of it.😉 😛 😆

Pls Read Patiently till the Flashback starts as before that Everything is Utter Crappy!! 😆
The main part starts from the flashback.😳

And This Part 1 is just giving you a Main Basic Plot of the Story!!So Pls Be Patient while you read this.

This Story is Just My imagination Guys which really lacks logic at times.😆So Don't try to find logic here pls.😳 😆
Not related with the current track of the show.

I didn't did proof-readings.So pls kindly ignore the mistakes.😊 😳


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Part 1


Jodha was getting ready in her room and combing her long black silky hairs when Suddenly Mainavati and Bharmal entered her room.They were looking really happy as they approached her.Seeing them approaching Jodha stood up from the seat to greet them.
Jodha:- "Namaskar Maasa-Bapusa"
She joined her hands and then touched their feets for blessings.They blessed her.

Jodha:-"Kya baat hai Bapu-sa,Aap dono itni subah yaha humare kaksh me.Sab Kuch kushal toh hai na?!

Raja Bharmal :- "Haan Rajkumari Jodha Sab kuch kushal hai,Hum aako ek khushkhabri dene aaye the!"

Jodha:- "Kaisi Khush-khabri Baapu-sa?!"

Mainavati:- "Badhai ho Jodha.Aapka Rishta Sujaunpur ke Rajkumar Suryabhan ke saath tay ho gaya hai!"

Jodha was shocked to hear that.She thought that her senses were betraying her.She must have heard wrong as Rajkumar Suryabhan was the same Prince her sister Sukanya fell in love with just at one sight in the fair.Jodha was shocked and broken.She don't want to get married and definately not to someone whom her sister loves.

Jodha:- "Hum ye vivah nahi kar sakte hai Baapusa!!"

Raja Bharmal:- "Ye aap kya keh rahi hai Jodha?!Rajkumar Sujamal ka Rajya Sujanpur aur Humaare Amer ke hitt me hai ye Sambandh!!!Iss Vivah se Amer me bhi Unnati hogi aur Mughlo ka mukabla karne me bhi unka Rajya humari sahayta karega!!Humari Sena bhi jyada Majbut ho jaayegi!!
Aapko ye Sambandh sweekarna hi hoga Jodha!!"

Jodha:- "Baapusa Sukanya Rajkumar Suryabhan ko pasand karti hai!!Aap hi bataiye hum apni behan ki pasand cheenkar unke saath apna ghar kaise basa le?!!"

Raja Bharmal:- "Sukanya Suryabhan ko pasand karti hai isse ab koi farak nahi padta Jodha!!Unhe Ek Rajkumari hone ke naate Apni Pasand ko bhulana hoga!Yahi Rajkumari ka dharm hota hai!!Aur Apko Apne Amer ke liye Suryabhan se Sambandh Sweekarna hi hoga!!"

Jodha:- "Par Bapusa..."

R Bharmal(Cutting her in between):-Hum aur kuch nahi sunna chahte Jodha!!Apka Vivah Rajkumar Suryabhan se hoga aur Ye Humaara Akhri Nirnay hai!"

Saying with a tone of finaliy,Bharmal barged out of Jodha's room.
Jodha was shattered and bursted into tears.
Mainavati placed a hand on her shoulder.
Jodha :- "Maasa Aap baapusa ko samjhaiye na!!Hum kaise karle ye vivah jab humari behan Rajkumar Suryabhan ko pasand karti hai..."

MV:-"Hum samajh sakte hai Jodha par Ab Hum Chahkar bhi Apke Bapusa ka nirnay nahi badal sakte.Har Rajkumari ko apne Rajya ke liye tyaag karne padte hai Jodha.Apko bhi karna hoga.Ye Sab toh Peediyon se chala aa raha hai.Hum bhagya ke aage kuch nahi kar sakte!"

Jodha was numb to say anything else.Only silent tears were flowing from her eyes now.
MV:-"Khud ko Sambhaliye Jodha!Waqt ke saath sab thik ho jaayega!!"
Saying this Mainavati kissed Jodha's forhead and left her room.

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The news of Jodha's marriage with Suryabhan fled in the Palace and Sukanya was shocked and angry on Jodha.She rushed to Jodha's room in anger.
Jodha was silently sitting on the bed when Sukanya entered like a storm.
Sukanya :- "Waah Jodha,Waah,Aaj apne humse humare pyaar ko bhi chin liya"

Jodha:- "Sukanya humari baat"

Sukanya(cutting her in betwn):-"Sunne ke liye bacha hi kya hai Jodha!!Bachpan se tumne badi behan hone ka fayda uthakar humse sab kuch china hai.Sab tumhe apni palkon par uthkar rakhte hai.Tumse sabse zyada pyar karte hai.Tumhari samne koi hume puchta tak nahi aur Aaj tumne humari pasand bhi humse chin li!"

Jodha(in tears):-"Nahi Aisa nahi hai Sukanya humne Bapusa se unka nirnay badlne ke liye prayas kiya tha parantu..."

Sukanya(cutting her in betwn):-"Parantu kya?!Sab Tumhara Natak hai Jodha.Tum toh bahut khush hogi ye itna bada rishta humse cheen kar.Tumhare jaise behan bhagwan Dushman ko bhi naa de!!"
Hum nafrat karte hai tumse.Jodha Nafrat!!"

And Saying this Sukanya ran away in anger.

Jodha was completely broken.First a marriage against her wishes than her sister cruel words brutually wounded her heart.
Her vision was blurred with tears as She ran towards the Kanha temple on the other side of her room and fell on her knees in front of the temple.

Jodha:- "Ye Sab Kya ho raha hai Kanha?!
Humne toh kabhi apne behan ka kuch chinna nahi chaha phir bhi woh bachpan se humse itni grhina karti hai.Aur Ye Vivah!!!
Kaise karle hum ye Vivah Kanha?!Jab Humaare Dil pehle hi kisi aur ka hai.Hum Sirf Ek Vyakti ko apna pati maan sakte hai aur Wo hai humaare Shehzaade.Aur Hume Pura yakeen hai Woh Apna Vaada Jarur nibhaynge.Hume lene Avashya lautenge woh.
Jodha said,her lips curling into a faint smile ,her tearful eyes lighten up with a glint of hope as memories came flooding in.

**FLASHBACK**

Jodha was 10 yrs old when She used to go for fair and for playing outside everyday with her Daasis and Guards.But Diverting the Daasis and Guards everytime and almost threatening them to leave her alone for sometime,She used to go near the lake.It was quite a deserted area near the lake not much ppl used to come there.But Even Jodha's guards were aware it was a very safe place and knew how strong and brave Jodha was in sword-fighting and could easily manage alone as She even go outside the palace along with her sword handed to one of her loyal friend Moti.Moti and some two-three guards used to be just a little distance away at the entrance of the lake to guard Jodha.Though They cannot really see her or her activities from there.Jodha used to go and practice Sword-fight near the lake.And Then sit near the lake and enjoy the beautiful natural surroundings.It used to give her a lot of peace.
One day When Jodha reached the grounded area near the lake She found a young boy just about of her age,practising with his sword,And She was shocked,As This was the only place She could practise freely and spend some peaceful time alone;and here this boy was taking her right!!
Jodha cleared her throat,declaring her presence and to grab his attention.
It was none other than Little Shezaade Jalaludin Mohammad who was practising his shamsheer there.He stopped his sword and turned around to face her.He was surprised to see a girl in such a deserted place with a sword in her hand and giving him angry glares.
Jodha noticed as He stared at her surprised,his little chocolate brown eyes widened in confusion and the hair falling on his forehead with the wind making him look as cute as an angel.
Jodha(in anger):- "Kaun hai aap?!Aur yahan kya kar rahe hai?!"

Jalal looked at her amused!

Jalal:- "Hum ek Mughal Shezaade hai aur Agar Aap dekh nahi sakti toh Hum batana chahenge ki Hum apni Shamsheer ka Abhyas kar rahe the,Par Apne usme khalal daal di!"

He was getting angry as well.

Jodha:-"Acha,Toh Aap ek Mughal hai!!"Par Aap yaha Kyu Abhyas kar rahe hai,Is sthaan par hum pratidin apni talwar ke saath abhyas karte hai parantu aaj apke karan...!!"
She spoke disappointingly when Jalal cutted her in betwn,
"Kya Aap ek kanya hokar talwarbazi karti hai?!"He was shocked as He have never heard or seen any Mughal girl doing that.

Jodha:- "Kyu?!Kanyayein kyu talwarbazi nahi kar sakti shezaade aur Ek Rajputani Rajkumari ko apni talwar ka upyog avashya aana chahiye!!kya pata kis shan avashyakta pad jaaye?!"She paused and then added "Aur Ye kanya Apse Jitne ki puri kabiliyat rakhti hai!"
She spoke indirectly challenging him.

Jalal(Amused and Smirks):- "Toh Phir Hum bhi Aapki Kabiliyat dekhna chahenge Rajkumari!!"
He accepted her challenge.
They both started with the fight.Their swords collided with each other from time to time.It went on for almost an hour.
Jodha was tired till then but was not giving up.Jalal noticed it and getting an oppurtinity strikes his sword towards her making her almost settled on the ground and He was about to attack with his striking sword when Jodha rose up defending his stroke and counter-striking him with her sword.She made a comeback,stronger than ever,determined to win and show the arrogant prince what is Girl-Power!!Soon Jodha make an agressive strike and Jalal's sword fall on the floor and She cornered Jalal on a pillar-wall nearby, placing the sword on his neck.
Jalal was shocked as No one can defeat him in sword-fighting but only his Khan-baba who have himself taught him the very art of sword-fighting!!

Jodha:- "Dekha Shehzaade,Is kanyaaa ne aapko Shikast de hi di!!"She smirked and said taunting him stressing on the word "kanya"

Jalal(amused by her tactics):- "Maana padega Apko Rajkumari!Kuch toh baat hai aapme warna Hume Shikast dena har kisi ke bas me nahi hai!!"
He smiles and Jodha removes the sword from his neck and backs off.

Jalal:- "Kya aap humari mitrata swikar karengi Rajkumari?!"Jalal spoke out of the blue.He wanted to know more about this young fearless princess.

Jodha was shocked at first and hesistant too as He was a Mughal Prince.
Jodha:- "Parantu Aap toh Ek Mughal Shehzade hai,Hum aapko mitra kaise maan sakte hai!"

Jalal:- "Hum aapke shatru bhi nahi hai Rajkumari,Aur Jis tarah aap ne is jung ko shuru kiya hume chunauti dekar,Hume aapse mitrata ka prastav bhi nahi dena chahiye tha Par Hum Ladna nahi chahte hai aapse!!

Jodha thought for a while.He had got a point.Why should they stay as enemy,when They can just be friends.And Anyhow a little prince was no harm to her.She found the boy very sweet and innocent,especially his eyes.

Jodha:- "Ap Sahi hai Shezade,Bewajah ki jung se behtar hogi ek nayi dosti!!
She gave him an innocent smile.He smiled back.
Jodha :-"Hum Amer ki Rajkumari Jodha hai aur Aap?!"

Jalal was silent for a minute,as He got lost in a thought;before finally speaking up
Jalal :- "Hum aapko apna naam nahi bata sakte Rajkumari!"
He spoke unhappily.

(Continued in next post below)
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Jodha:- "Par kyu?Abhi toh aap humse vishwas aur dosti ki baatien kar rahe the,Aur ab khud hi!"

Jalal(cutting her in betwn):- "Hum Chaahte hue bhi nahi bata payenge Rajkumari!Hum yaha Amer me Chipkar Sharan liye hue hai,Humaari Sultanate me jung chidi hai aur Jab tak waha ke haalat thik nahi ho jaate humaare Abbujaan ne hume yaha unke Wajeer yani humaare Khaan-baba ki nigrani me rakha hai.Wohi hume jungi-taaleem bhi de rahe hai aur unke hi karan humari shamsheer par pakad ban payi hai.Jab tak hum yaha hai,Khaan-Baba ne Humse Vaada liya hai ki hum kisiko yaha apni asli pehchaan aur apna naam na bataye kyunki iss se humare praano ko khatra ho sakta hai.Aur Hum apna Vaada kisi bhi kimat par nahi tod sakte Rajkumari!!

He spoke as sadness and gloom covered his till now cheerful and happy face.
Jodha understood the situation and felt really sad for him.He was staying away from his kingdom and family,parents,How sad was that?!

Jodha:- "Hum Shama chahte hai,Hum nahi jaante the ye sab hua hai apke sath varna hum kabhi bhi..."

Jalal (cutting her in betwn):- "Uski koi zarurat nahi hai Rajkumari,Apki koi Galti nahi hai isme!"
He smiled at her assuringly.

Jodha smiled back relieved.

Jodha:- "Parantu aapne hume itna sab kuch bhi kyu bataya Shehzade,Aur ye bhi ki aap ke Mughal hai jabki aapka vaada...!"

Jalal:- (cut her in betwn)Humne vaada nahi toda Jodha,Aap humare baare me jyada nahi jaanti bas yahi ki hum Mughal shehzade hai!!Naam bhi nahi jaanti hai aap humaara.!!Aur Humne aapko yeh sab isliye bataya kyunki hume aapse koi khatra mehsus nahi hua!!Aap par vishwar kar sakte hai hum!!Aap hume dhoka nahi dengi, Hai naa?!!

He spoke with a genuine voice.

Seeing the sincerity of his words and the geniuneness on his face and voice,Jodha's heart melted for him.

Jodha(extending her hands):- "Dost banenge humaare?!"She asked innocently

Jalal(smiling amused):- "Hamesha ke liye!"And with that He extended his hands to join her and shaked it.

Both of them unaware that they just marked the start of an epic friendship which will have a great impact in their future.

Jodha:- "Parantu Hum aapko Kya kehkar bulaayange Shehzade?!"She asked confused.

Jalal(thinking for a second):- "Sirf Shehzaade!"He smirked

Jodha(impressed by his smartness):- "Hmm!!Ji Shehzade!"

She giggled and Jalal just smiled astonished at her innocence.


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Their friendship grew stronger and beautiful with each passing day.They both used to meet at the lake everyday and be together for almost 2 hours.This was unknown to everyone but Jodha's trustworthy friend Moti and Jalal's loyal friend Abdul.
Jodha and Jalal used to talk,sit,and swordfight regularly.Sometimes Jodha emerged as a winner and at times It was Jalal.But with each match,each stroke against each other,their bond grew more stronger.
Jodha used to share all the things about her family,her brothers and How Sujamal taught her sword-fight,every pain and happiness with Jalal.But He used to be silent whenever It comes to the word "Family"!Other than her sister whom He loves alot,He never talked about anyone else with Jodha.She many times asked about his parents,But He always kept quiet and tried to divert the topic.He oneday clearly told Jodha to not talk about his parents,And understanding the senisitivty of the matter Jodha never tried to open or discuss on that topic again!!But Still the beauty of their pure and innocent friendship was so soothing for both of them.One glimpse of each-other and both forget all their pains and worries.


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[Jalal and Jodha are of 13 yrs age in the scene below in flashback only]


"Humari choti behan Sukanya humse ghrina karti hai Shehzaade!"

Jodha said sobbing,Today again Sukanya foughted with her.

Jalal could not see her in tears.It stabbed his heart to see Jodha in pain.He holded her by shoulders trying to pacify her and cupped her cheeks with his hands,wiping her non-stop tears.

"Aap janti hai hum aapki aankho me aansu nahi dekh sakte Rajkumari,Ye aankhe sirf shararat karte hue achi lagti hai aansu bahate nahi!!
Aur apki behan bhi ek din jarur samjhengi ki aap kitni achi hai aur aapka dil kitna saaf hai! Tab Woh Khud aapse maafi maangegi aapko yun takleef dene ke liye,Dekhiyega Jodha!"

He said to her in an assuring tone,And Jodha just looked at him astonished,tears flowing more widely now,but this time due to happiness.She never understood,How he always manage to take away all her pain just like that with the magic of his innocent words.She feels blessed to have him as a friend.And Cannot tolerate to seperate from him ever.He makes her feel the happiest and safest person in the world whenever She is with him.
Jodha knows that She loves him but never voiced it out.

"Ab bas Rona band kariye warna hum naaraj hojayenge aapse!"
Jalal said threatening her to stop crying,his temper rising.

Jodha wipes her tears with her duppata and gave him a big smile,
"Nahi royenge hum,Bas!Par Ab Aap Naraj mat hoiye humse Shehzaade!"

She gave her most innocent smile and make a puppy face and Jalal's anger melted away instantly.

"Apki Iss Beshkimti Muskan ke liye humaari Jaan bhi haazir hai Rajkumari!"
He spoke with affection.Jodha smiled widely.
He actually can give his life for just her one smile.He don't know what it was He feels for her,But He possesses Jodha more than his own life.

"Hum bade hokar aapse Nikah karenge Rajkumari!"
Jalal said innocently shocking Jodha.


"Par Yeh kaise sambhav hai Shehzaade?!Humaare baapusa kabhi humara vivah ek Mughal se karne ke liye nahi maanege!"
She spoke unhappily,her face well down.

"Hum kuch nahi jaante par Hum aapke bina nahi reh sakte Jodha.Aap humari Aadat ban chuki hai!! Apka Vivah humse hi hoga aur Aap humari Begum bankar humare hi Mehel me aayengi,Yeh Vaada Raha Apse!"
He spoke with a tone of finality and Jodha was speechless.What does He mean by that?!And Does He feel the same way She does?!

"Shehzaade kya aap hume pasand karte hai?!"

"Haan Jodha,Hum Bahut pasand karte hai aapko aur aap humaari dost bhi hai,aapse behtar begum koi aur nahi milengi hume!"

"Par Apka vivah toh aapki ek bachpan ki saheli se bhi ho chuka hai na?!"

"Haan Wo humaari Begum rahengi,Par Aap janti hain na Rajgharano me kai shaadiya hoti hai aapke Shehzaadon ki Aur Hum Mughlo me bhi Parantu aapse jyaada khaas humaare liye duniya mai koi aur nahi hai Rajkumari Jodha aur na koi ho sakta hai!"

Jodha was just at loss of words.She was blushing vigorously,her cheeks turned a shade of crimison red.Jalal noticed it.

Jalal(smirking):-"Ab itna bhi mat sharmaiye Jodha,Aaine me dekhti toh apko pata chalta ki apka chehra is waqt kashmir ke seb se bhi adhik laal ho chuka hai!"

He teased her in an innocent tone and Jodha stared up at him, her face half red with embarassment and half with anger.

Jodha:- "Jaiye Shezade,hum aapse baath nahi karenge"

She turned her face away from him in anger.
Jalal went in front of Jodha and get down on his knees holding his ears.

Jalal:- "Ab Hume Shama bhi kar dijiye na Shehzaadi,Dekhiye Isbaar hum apne ghutno par bhi aa gaye aapke liye!"He said innocently.

Jodha looked at him in astonishment.Whenever She gets angry or upset bcoz of him He always holds his ears but this time even went to his knees only for her.She smiled.

Jodha:- "Thik hai Isbaar Apko Maaf kar dete hai Shehzaade parantu ek shart par ki aap dubara hume aise tang nahi karenge!"

Jalal(innocently):- "Par ye to nainsafi hai Jodha,Agar Ap Humari har baat par yu Seb ki tarah laal ho jayengi toh hum aur kya karenge?!
He winked and smirked.
And Jodha this time was blushing more than before and was shocked seeing this naughty side of her Prince.
Jalal was chuckling silently inside his throat,without letting her know.😆

Jodha(angry):- "Aap kitne Nirlajj ho chuke hai Rajkumar!!"

Jalal(controlling his laughter):- "Hum mazak kar rahe the Jodha!Bas Yeh Akhri baar hai,Sach!!Ab Maaf bhi kardijiye na hume!"He said make a cute puppy face and looking so cute. 😊
Jodha's anger melted away seeing his cute gestures.😳

Jodha:- "Thik hai Yeh Aakhri Baar hum apki shaitaniyo ke liye Maaf kar rahe hai aapko!Iske baad agar apne aisa kiya toh hum apki baat bhi nahi sunenge!"😡

She said in a serious tone but then herself bursted into laughter.😆And Jalal who was controlling his laughter for so long joined her in.
The atmosphere lightened up with their chuckles.
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[Last scene of the Flashback-Jalal and Jodha are 14yrs of age]


Jalal:- "Hume kal hi Amer se jaana hoga Rajkumari,Yudh me humaari avashyakta hai!"

Jodha(scared):- "Par Shehzaade!!Aap toh Abhi chote hai na?!Agar Apko kuch ho gaya toh?!?! aur Hum,Hum kaise reh paayenge aapke bina.Hum bilkul akele ho jaayenge Shehzaade!!Aur Apne toh humse kaha tha aap hume chodkar kabhi nahi jaayenge!!"

She said frightened of losing and letting him go and bursted into tears.
Jalal's felt shattered seeing her crying like this.He holded her shoulders to steady her and cupped her cheeks.

Jalal:- "Aap Shant ho jaiye Rajkumari!!Kuch nahi hoga hume,Hum apni suraksha karna ache se jaante hai aur Yudh me humaari avashyakta hai!!Aur kisne kaha ki hum aapko akela chod kar jaa rahe hai?!Humaare Abbajaan aur Mughal Sultanate ko humari avashyakta hai Isliye waha jana humara farz hai parantu Hum aapko lene wapis jarur ayenge,Vaada karte hai aapse Rajkumari!!Aur Iss ek Vaade ko nibhaane ke liye hum har chunati ka samna kar sakte hai!!
Uss Yudh ko hum hi fateh karenge aur Sahi waqt aane par hum Amer lautkar aapse Vivah ka vachan bhi pura karenge!!Aap humari hi Begum banengi Jodha!!Sirf aur Sirf humaari hongi aap!!!Aur Yeh Vaada hai aapke Iss Shehzade ka Rajkumari Jodha,Sirf Aap se hi nahi balki khud se bhi!"
He said with a passion and confidence in his eyes,reassuring Jodha and himself of his safety and comeback for her.

Jodha gave him a faint smile.And Jalal wiped her tears.
Jalal:- "Aapko humpar bharosa hai na Rajkumari?!"

Jodha:- "Swayam se bhi jyaada bharosa hai aap par Shehzaade!!Hum jaante hai aap hume kabhi bhi dhoka nahi de sakte!Kabhi nahi!"
She said,her eyes glistening up with confidence and trust on him.

Jalal:- "Toh phir Apki in khubsurat aankho me ye aansu kyu hai Jodha?!Hum aapko khush dekhna chahte hai!!Jaane se pehle ek baar humaari Rajkumari ki Beshkimti Muskarahat dekhna chahte hai hum,kya hume woh avsar bhi nahi dengi aap?!"

He asked innocently giving her a dimpled Smile and Jodha could not help but smiled back at him.
She hugged him tightly for one last time,as tight as She could!She wished,She could hold him like this in her arms forever and never let go.

Jalal hugged her back with equal passion but soon He found her grip on him becoming too tight.
Jalal(choking up from her tight grip):- "Jodha,Aapka Yudh se pehle hi hume maarne ka irada hai kya?!"
He said coughing.And Jodha realised what She was doing and parted from the hug embarssed and concerned.

Jodha(embarassed):-"Maaf kijiyega Shehzaade!!Aap thik toh hai na?!

Jalal:- "Ji!"And He chuckled.
Jodha blushed and hit him lightly on his chest.

Jalal:- "Jodha Hum aapke bharose ko kabhi tutne nahi denge!"He smiled.

Jodha:- "Hum jaante hai Shehzaade!"She reassured him and added.
"Hume aapki bahut yaad aayegi!"And Her face fell down with sadness.

Jalal:- "Hume bhi aapki bahut yaad aayegi Jodha Parantu hum aapse ek vaada chahte hai ki Aap humari yaad me vyarth nahi royengi balki apni Shamsheer ka abhyas karengi!!Bataiye humare vaado ke badle ye chota sa vaada kar sakti hai aap humse?!!"

Jodha:- "Acha hum vaada karte hai Hum Apki yaad me Shamsheer ka Abhyas karenge aur Agar ho saka toh pratidin yaha ayenge!!"Jodha smiled assuringly,Jalal smiled back a bit relieved.
But then She added after a pause
"Parantu Hum Royenge nahi,Yeh vachan nahi de paayenge aapko!"

Jodha smiled and then giggled.

Jalal stared at her in disbelieve.

Jalal(Defeated and giving a sheepish smile):- "Aap kabhi bhi nahi badal sakti Rajkumari!"

Jodha(Proud of her victory):- "Ji Nahi,Hum kabhi nahi badalne waale aur Hume yakeen hai ki Aap bhi kabhi nahi badlenge Shehzaade!"
She said and then chuckled.Jalal was left amazed at her tactics yet again.

That Day,Both Jalal and Jodha spend some last memories with each other before Jalal went for the Battle the next day,away from Amer.

Both of them were sad and broken from inside with the sudden seperation but still happy and had an hope to meet again one day soon;Unaware of what the future holds for them.

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Present (Jodha and Jalal both are 23yrs age,9yrs of Seperation)

[{Scene continued with Jodha crying in front of her Kanha ji}]

Jodha's face was fully wet with tears in front of her Kanha.The memories of the past shooked her to the core as She remembered her Prince.She loves him more than anything and still have hopes that He will come back.But When?!was the Question as her marriage is already fixed with Suryabhan!!!😔

"Hume pura yakeen hai ki Humare Shehzade hume lene jarur lautenge kaanha,Bas Untak Humare Vivah-Sambandh ki khabar pahucha dijiyega Aap,Hume pura yakeen hai woh hume kisi aur ka kabhi nahi hone denge!"

Her lips twirled into a hopeful smile as Jodha's faith on her love was as strong as on her Kanha ji.

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Agra Palace

In Diwan-e-khaas

The Shenshah-e-Hindustan,Jaluliddin Mohammad was seated on his throne,His jaws clenched as One of his minister,Sharifuddin announced his presence in the court,
"Shenshah ka iqbal buland ho!"
He did the Adab action respectfully to Jalal.

Jalal(in anger):- "Aap jante hai Shenshah ko diwan-e-khas me intezar karvane ke jurm me abhi issi waqt apka sar kalam kiya ja sakta hai?!
Iss deri ki wajah jaanna chahte hai hum?!

Sharifuddin(Scared by Jalal's temper):- "Hum Maafi Chahte hai huzoor,Woh Hum Diwan-e-Khas me tashreef laa hi rahe the ki humaare ek khaas Sainik se hume bahut zaruri khabar mil gayi!!Isliye hum samay par yaha nahi pahuch paaye!!"

Jalal's eyebrows raised with curiousity!!
Jalal:- "Kaisi khabar Sharifuddin?!Farmaiye!!!"

Sharifuddin :- "Ji Huzoor!Pata chala hai ki Amer waalo ne humse muqabla karne ke liye apni Rajkumari ka vivah Sujaunpur ke Rajkumar Suryabhan ke saath teh kiya hai!Iss se Amer ke Raja Bharmal apni fauj ko majbut kar payenge,Sujanpur ke saath hone se unke hathiyaro ka bal badh jaayega!!

Jalal was not interested in the Raja or Rajkumar,niether to know about the armed forces of Amer!!His Mughal Armed forces are more powerful than anyother armies in the country.
Even The armies of these two states together are nothing in front of the Mughal Army!!
Jalal was only curious to know the name of the princess of Amer whose marriage was fixed with Suryabhan.

Jalal :- "Aapne Rajkumari ka naam kya bataya?!"
He asked more curious than ever.

Sharifuddin :- "Huzoor!,Rajkumar Suryabhan ka vivah Rajkumari Jodha ke saath hone waala hai!"

That was enough for Jalal to bear.His eyes shot up with an undefinable expression as He heard the name Jodha!!His Jodha!!!And How Dare this Sharifuddin,to take the name of his Princess with someone else?!Jalal's hand automatically went to his sword tugged at his waist and He wanted to rip off Sharifuddin's head the very moment for taking the name of HIS Jodha with someone else.But He controlled himself remembering He is supposed to behave as an Emperor!!

Sharifuddin:- "Shenshah Hum soch rahe the ki Amer par aaj hi humla kar dete hai!"

Jalal stood up in extreme rage and shouted on him:-
"Sochne ki koi Jarurat nahi hai aapko Sharifuddin,Uske liye abhi hum yaha par Maujud hai!!!
"Aur Galti se bhi Humare Aadesh ke bina Amer par humla karne ki Gustakhi mat kijiyega warna Anjaam bahut bura hoga aapka!!"
He said in a dangerous rage.

And shouted again,
"Diwan-e-Khaas Raddh kiya jaata hai!"

Jalal dismissed the Diwan-e-Khaas and walked away in anger giving a deathly glare to Sharifuddin!!

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Jalal's Chamber,in Evening,

The Shenshah was lost in a deep thought as He sat unmoved on his bed,The thought of Jodha with someone else was stabbing his heart.But Jalal reminded himself,He don't have any heart,It died along with his innocence which not only faced violent blood-shed at the mere age of 14 in that battle but himself became a part of it.His heart died the day He himself witnessed the cruel site of his enemies cutting off his father's head in front of him and He remained helpless!!That day Jalal was changed from inside.!!!He have realized the importance of power in life and thus rule over almost the whole of India today,already ripped off the enemies with his own hand!! who killed his father and were none other than his own ppl, the brother of his father who even tried to kill Jalal for power.If It was not for Maham Anga who have not only saved him at the age of 8,but even took his responsibility as his own son,something his own Ammijaan never did!His Badi Ammi and Khan Baba,two most important ppl to Jalal have made him what He is today,A ruthless,and stone-hearted,heartless Emperor for the World.The little innocent boy who knew how to live and enjoy life was lost long back in that war.And Now just exists an Arrogant King who knows how to rule!!
But then Why,whenever He thinks of Jodha,the dead hearts starts beating?!Jalal never understood the connection between them in these years.Whenever He thought about her,his lips escaped a smile.He don't know what It was He feels for her,But For him,Jodha is his most prized possesion.Someone which belongs only to him and is precious to Jalal even more than his own life.In all these years,She has become an obsession for Jalal which can make him do the worse at times.Well,Wanting to Rip off Sharifuddin's head just at the mention of His Rajkumari with another Man was just a faint side of the obsessive and possesive Jalal for Jodha.!!

He have missed her alot,all these years,But was waiting for the right moment to fulfill all the promises He had made to her!She is "His" alone and He will get her back into his life very soon now.

Jalal's chain of thoughts got disturbed as He heard the voice of his most loyal childhood-friend and an High-ranked minister in his court,Abdul,approaching him.

Abdul:- "Shehnshah ka iqbal buland ho!"
"Apne hume yaad kiya huzoor?!"

Abdul asked him.

Jalal(angry):- "Abdul, hume kitni baar aapko batana hoga ki Diwan-e-khas ke bahar apko hume Shenshah kehne ki zarurat nahi hai?!Aap hume Jalal kehkar pukar sakte hai!Aakhir bachpan ke dost hai aap humaare!!"

Abdul:- "Maaf kijiyega,Hume Aadat ho chuki hai Shenshah!"He paused to look at Jalal who was giving him an angry glare.
"Jalal!"Abdul finally said defeated by his stubborn friend and Emperor!!

Jalal(Proudly Smirking):- "Behtar hoga ki aap apni aadat sudhar le Abdul!"

Abdul(sighed):- "Ji Shehen...Jalal!"
"Waise aapne hume yaad farmaya,koi khaas wajah?!"

Abdul looked curious.

Jalal(getting up from his bed):- "Bahut khaas wajah hai Abdul.!!Hum chahte hai ki aap aaj raat ko hi Amer ke liye prasthan kare!!
Aap wahan ek Rajput sainik ke rup me Raja Bharmal ke Mehel me dakhil honge.Aur Rajkumari Jodha ke har ek kadam par nazar rakhenge!"

Abdul was kind of shocked.
Abdul:- "Par Jalal,Rajkumari Jodha par nazar kyu rakhwana chahte hai aap?!"

Jalal:- "Hum jaanna chaahte hai ki Kya Wo aaj bhi apne Shehzaade ko yaad karti hai ya nahi?!"
Aap do din ke liye waha Rajput Sainik ki tarah Rahenge,Humne intezaam kar diya hai Woh log aapko Rajkumari Jodha ke ek bimaar sainik ke jagah par rakhenge aur Iss bahane aap unke har ek kadam par nazar rakh payenge!"

"Aur Jab Aap yaha Agra wapas aakar hume Rajkumari Jodha ke vishay me khabar denge,Tab hi hum Amer par Aakraman ka Aadesh bhi jaari karnenge!"

Jalal said in a firm tone.

Abdul(boldly):- "Maaf kijiyega Jalal,Par Aap bhi jaante hai ki Rajkumari Jodha bachpan se aapse hi prem karti hai!Phir ye sab kyu?!Kya aap ko unpar bharosa nahi hai?!

Jalal(turned to stare at him):- "Bharosa hai Abdul,Hum Jante hai Rajkumari humse prem karti hai par Hum Ek baar unke dil ka haal jaan lena chahte hai!!Isliye aapka waha jaana zaruri hai!!!"

He said with a tone of finality to it.

Abdul understood Jalal's reasons for it.Jalal wants to assure himself that Jodha loves him and him "Alone"!!

Abdul:- "Ji Jalal,Apka hukum saraankhon par!"
"Ab hum izazat chahenge!!"

Jalal nodded, giving his approval for Abdul to leave!!And Abdul left for Amer the same night!!!

Jalal on the same night was unable to sleep.The thoughts of his princess disturbing him.

Jalal(to himself):- "Ab bahut ho chuka hai Rajkumari,Na jaanein humari kitni raatein aapki yaadon me chali gayi hai!


Jalal got up from the bed in restlessness and came to stand near the huge window of his room.
The cool breeze was swaying swiftly,It touched Jalal's face and make him feel at ease

Jalal:- "Aap Sirf aur Sirf humaari Amanat hai Jodha aur Ab waqt aa chuka hai aapse kiye har vaade ko nibhane ka!Aapse Vivah karke humare Mehel me laane ka!"
He paused for a moment,
"Bas farq itna hoga Ki aap Shehzade ki Begum nahi balki Shenshah-e-Hindustan ki Mallika banengi!"

He spoke with an unusual affection as his lip twirled into an arrogant yet mesmerizing smirk getting lost into the thoughts of his fiery princess,yet again.

[Ishq hai woh ehsaas-Playing in BG]

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Ok Guys,This idea struck me like a lightining 2-3 nights before,And I couldn't sleep or concentrate at anything bcoz It was disturbing me like Hell!!So I thought to write it out!!!😊 😳 😆

Well I know It must have been too horrible for all of you to read My Crap So I'm ready for all the Atom-Bombs you Guys want to throw at me. 😆


P.S.:- "I'll try to continue it,If I get a good response.So Do tell me your views.😳

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I'm glad you liked the story!! 😛 😳
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