||~Aashiqui~|| An Akdha FF [Chapter 1 Pg 3] - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing, love the modern take. 😊
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Nice one..
Waiting for the next one..
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nice precap ab plz jaldi update kardo.
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love da concept...
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Ahan!! Nice Concept Arya!! Loved the Character sketch and Precap!!❤️❤️ Keep Going!!👏👏
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Mere Bina tu


'Stut up Jac shut up...!!!' shouted Jenny

'Hume maaf kardi jiye Jen' said in an imotional tune and tear out of his eye

'Don't try to fool me with your bloody fake tears like you fooled me with your fake love'

'That wasn't a fake love Jenny'

'Oh now you even think that I am deaf, dumb hoon yeh to tumne prove kar hi diya hai' with a tear out of her and giving a file to Jac

'Whats this..???'

'Kyun khud hi padh loo'

'What the...F'

' Kya kaha tumne'

Jac pauses


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' Voh to hai hi beep ka beep' laughed Jac

'Kya kaha tumne...???' smile disappeared from Jen's face and in a serious tone

'Jo tumne suna'

'Itni rudeness'

'Sahi to kaha voh hai hi Big beep...'

'Can I have a your promise from you'

'What promise'

'Ok yu are promisin Jacob Khan that you will never abuse anyone in life chahe voh bade se bada voh na ho'

'Achaa baba' and keeps his head on Jen's lap

'Kya kar rahe ho'

'Romance pata nehi hai ya' and turns and kisses her forehead and hugs her. They both smile.

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'Kahan kho gaye tum..??'

'Kkkuch nehi, but yeh divorce papers divorce kyun...???'

'Because a man like you is not diserved by me...!!!!! Meri kya aukad ek chote se aam insaan ki beti...tum jaise ko diserve nehi karti...continue with Ria after your plan will be sucessful' then she took her bag and left for her house in her car. Inspite of everyone stopping her she never turned to them.


Till then Jac was a statue not tears nothing. He was shocked he never thought of fake love. Who did it, why he did it, but moreover who told that to Jen. He just sat on his king size bed. Took his Jen's pic and creased it sticked it to his heart and cried his heart out.


Jen in car silently cryid and remembered her moments with Jac.


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Rajvanshi Palace
'Maa maa I am going' shouted Jen
'No pehle doodh khatam karo' said Mommy
'Maa aaj mujhe Bamanoli ki land pe jana hai'
'To kya hua dodh to khatam karo'
'Maa aapko pata hai vahan ke kisano ki land kharidi jaa rahi hai aur vo bhi kam price par.'
'Tum hamesha doosron ka kyun sochti ho kabhi apne bare mein bbhi soch liya karo'
'Aare mom wahan ke farmer ke saath galat ho raha hai and that is one that I cannot see. Injustice to anyone'

Khan Mansion
'Injustice is the only think that helps us to become The Paras. Mom' said Jac
'Ya Jac I hope this case settles today itself' said
'Ya sure mom aur aaj mein builder se bhi baat karloonga about the construction'
'Inshalah Jac'

Rajvanshi Palace
'Well I am leaving for the Bamanoli land' saying this he left
Jen finishes her milk
'Achha baba achha'
'Ok by mom'

Land

Jac was on the podium and farmers facing to him in a crowd just like an assembly.
'Hum aap sabko batana chahte hain ki aap sabko 1,00,000 rupye milenge '
'Bas itne paise...' said a farmer

'Aap sab ko koi haaq nehi hai inse ladne ka yeh aapke sartaaj hain' said MM
'Kyun nehi hai ' a voice echoed, a girl in anarkali suit...with attitude ego walked out of a BMW...
'App kaun' said MM with confusion
'Hum kasun hai isse kya matlab aapko humein Jacob Khan se milna hai'
'Excuse me ho kaun tum aur Jaacob Khan se koi bhi yun hi nahi mil sakta'

Jac was listning this while standing there he saw her and thought 'Who is she...?? Looks not so bad...attitude hai...hotness hai...hmmm'

'Koi baat nehi Badi Ammi let me hangle her' sang this he move forward with giving heavy smirks he moved forward

'Par...thik hai' saying this she moved behind.

'Bolo kya problem hai tmhari'
'Dekhiye in sabki is zameen se kai yadein imotions and bahut kuch jude huye hai. Aap inke sath asisa nehi kar sakte' said Jen in an influencing tone. [She did more dailogue baazi wich I can not write so think what she would have said.]
Jac just kept smirking on her and siad 'Thik huminke liyee kuch na kuch zaroor karenge'

He turned to the audience and he said 'Chaliye hum aap sabke liye aur in mohtarma ka zid ko dhyaan mein rakhte huye aap sabko 5 lakh ki rakm aur humare mil mein kaam karne ka prasthav. Allah Hafiz.' saying this he goes out.

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The night past with two hearts crying tears of blood.

Next morning
'Utho na' she kept her head on his head
'Kya aur der sone do na' he said
She sprinkled her wet hairs on his face and said 'Utho utho'


Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.

Who is she...???

Guess guess...

Till that time do visit my gallery...||~~**Arya's Writings Collection For JA**~~||

Edited by Arya75 - 11 years ago
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Nice... ❤️ ur a big fan of Taylor Lautner..
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Nice... ❤️ ur a big fan of Taylor Lautner..


Haan Yaar...

Die hard fan...

Kam hot nehi hai voh...😉😉

And Jalal and Jac rhyme...
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awesome yaar like it update soon
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auwsome update dear... continue soon...

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