~**~|| Three Shot : Jaane Bhi De...||~**~(Chapter 3 , pg-11) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

so i think finally today i m getting an update...thanx in advance yaar...


Yaaa by sunday I think...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aiting...

Originally posted by: Arya75



Yaaa by sunday I think...😆😆



Okk...will be waiting dear...plz a long one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEY TODAY IS SUNDAY AND ITS EVENING DEAR...WAITING FOR UR UPDATE...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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'To saboot dijiye apni mohbaat ka' said Jodha looking away from Jalal
'Yeh kya keh rahi hain aap'
'Sunna nehi aapne'
'Magar'
'Kya'
'Kuch nehi'

Jodha went away...

The whole day he was thinking about Jodha what can he do to for Jodha he kept on thinking. But it was time for Diwan-I-Aam

'Baa Adab Ba Bulaiza Hoshiyaar Shehensha-E-Hindia Badsha Jalal ud din Mohmaad padar rahe hain' said the speaker.

Jalal entered there sat on the throne and the people were brought to him with their problems.

A couple cam there.

'Yeh Begum Fatima hain aur yeh unke Shauhar Abdul hain Shehensha' said Agtah Sahab
'Aur'
'Inki fariyaad hai ke inke Shahar ne shaadi ke ek saal ke baad apni mohbaat nehi jati aur yeh unse talak chahti hain'
'Inti si baat ke liye talaakh'

'Itni si baat nehi hai Shehensha ek aurat apne shahar se sirf mohbaat chahti hai par humare shauhar humse mohbaat karte hue bhi jatate nehi hain aur fir humari saas humse ghar ka waris mangti hain ab aap hi bataiye hum kya kaarien'
'Kya' in full shock and he starts thinking about Jodha what will be she thinking right away the same..??? So he decide to propose her.

He stands up and leaves the darbar . First time ever in his life he had done only for our Jodha rani.

He immediately goes to Jodha's room.

Room

He arrives without that loud bgm. He silently enters there. He tells Moti to leave without letting Jodha know,

'Jodha hum abhi kanha ke liye fool late hain' says Moti
'Par abhi kaaf fool hain Moti' says confused Jodha
'Arrey jane do na'
'Thik hai'

Moti leaves...

'Paarrr' Jodha sits down next to kana's morti and starts the puja

Now Jalal really very slowly goes near to Jodha and sits beside her with out letting her know. While Jodha is praying with closed eyes Jalal comes and sits beside her to which she gets shocked and all the diya oil falls on her.

'Shensha yeh appne kya kiya' shouts Jodha.
'Teel gira diya' with a cute foolish smile.

Jodha turns away and is about to go that Jalal stops her and asks 'Kyan ja rahi ho ab tum'
'Hamal karne'
'Hum bhi aayen'
'Shehensha' she shouts

Jodha with an angry face goes to have a bath.

'Ab to hum aayenge hi' with sweetest smile someone could give


Bathroom

Jodha was taking bath that Jalal come in all the maids went out. Jalal slowly came and sat on the boundary of the tub. He poured milk over her shoulders and massaged her all over her shoulder and down her breast [not on it DIRTY MINDS] Jodha couldn't say a word on it. But suddenly se realized its too much now.

'Shehensha' she shouted
'Kya hua Jodha Begum' with a naughty smile
'Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain'
'Kya hua abhi tak too aap inta aanand le rahi thi ab kya hua' with a proud smile
'Hume aapse yehi umeed thi'

Saying this she stand out of the water and goes to her room to change in normal.

Room

Jodha had changed and was drying her hairs and then Jalal came there.

'Ab kya hai aapko'
'Kuch nehi'
'To yahan kya kar rahe hain'
'Hum aapke shauhar hain'
'Humari badnasibi'

Jalal jumps on the bed and sings


Dagabaaz re haaye daghabaaz re
Tore naina bade dagabaaz re
Derena derena derena...

Ho tore naina... haaye
Naina naina naina haaye

They share an eyelock

Kaahe khafa aise Chulbul se Bulbul
Kaahe na tu maane batiya haaye

He stands up maintaining the eyelock. And comes near to Jodha and creases her face. And share and intense eyelock but Jodha breaks it and moves out. Jodha walking and Jalal behind her. She turns and sings.

Kaahe pada peechhe jaane de bairi
Main jaanu kya tori khatiya haaye

Both facing each other and Jalal.

Zindagi apni hum toka daan deyi de
Muskura ke jo maange praan deyi de
Kal mile... ho kal mile haaye
Kal mile ee humka bhool gaye aaj re
Haaye dagabaaz re, haaye dagabaaz re
Tore naina bada dagabaaz re
Derena derena derena... dere na
Tohre naina daga daga daga dagabaaz re
Hai dagabaaz re, naina re

And then he bends on his knees.

Darta jahaan humse, hum tose darte
Ee sab jaane mori Raniya haaye

Jodha with a fakesmile

Maska lagaao naa chhodo ji chhodo
Samjhti hai tori thaniya

She moves forward that Jalal hold her hand and pulls her to his side.

Iss ada pe toh hum kurbaan gaye jee
Tohri naa naa mein haami hai, jaan gaye jee
Kal mile... ho kal mile haaye
Kal mile ee humka bhool gaye aaj re

Jalal keeps a kss on her check from back side. Jodha gives up and turns and hugs him tightly.

Dagabaaz re, Dagabaaz re
Tore naina bade dagabaaz re
Dagabaaz Dagabaaz Dagabaaz re haaye
Tore naina bade dagabaaz re...



Edited by Arya75 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Amazing! They singing dagabaz re was the best part 4 me! Thanks 4 the pm dear. Will wait 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
awesome update...wat a proposal style...loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Very interesting very sexy just read 1st chapter. Where r the other two shots ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bamonforever

Very interesting very sexy just read 1st chapter. Where r the other two shots ??


In this same thread yaar...!!!!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
very nice dear...lovely...
finally u updated...thanx dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
this is my first comment...
it is really an awesome story...
nd the concept is outstanding...
jalal in love with jodha...wow!!!!
kep updating and update soon...
plz plz pm it to me plz

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