Akdha ff Noor-e-mohabbat pt 6 pg 18

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: janvie
Res.😊😳😳

**Edited**
Yippie Sona! Thankyou so much for writing and dedicating it to me.😃Aah...I know I said won't be thanking you anymore.😳But Still.❤️ 🤗 🤗
And Woah Man!!Awesome Prologue!!👏👏⭐️I loved it alot.❤️

You have exactly taken My request to show the Possesiveness and that make it a treat to read for me.😉😃😳

Ooh And The Title "Noor-e-Mohabbat"is Mashallah (going by the Mughal tone😆)as well!!❤️ 😳 😳

Now I'M eagerly but still patiently waiting for an update.😉😊😳So Pls Continue Soon.😊😳😳

And Thanks for the PM.!!😃🤗 🤗



P.S.:-If you are waiting for a good response here,Then I guess you should first continue Nazre-Karam as that OS was so Beautiful and got a Superb response too.😛 😳So Do Continue that when you get time and according to me before updating this (as you are waiting for a good response)You should continue that one...I think some readers already asked you for the same thing here.😉 😳 😳

surely dear mishu ji! ..pehle usiko continue karungi..

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Anu

@Angelic.x.Chaos

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome start...

Continue soon and do pm me plz

:)

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I m turning this os to an FF as my SIS MISHu wished...THIS FF is dedicated to Janvie aka Mishu😳

PART 1-_

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The palace of Agra was crowded. It was a very blissful atmosphere where for the first time Shahensha Jalaal has married a hindu princess.

Peoples were curiously gathering in front of palace to have a glimpse of the new Begam. But the news burned cracker in the minds of too cunning but powerful lady of Shahensha's life. Maham anga and Ruqaiya were burning in anger at this new tuning point of their life.

One the other side Shahensha Jalaal was feeling something unusual. One side he was angry on Jodha (the new Hindu Begam), and other way he was getting addicted to her slowly slowly.

Jalaal's room-

"ye kya hai Jalaal aapne us hindu shehzadi ko apni baandi banana ke wajaye apne Begam ka darja kyun dediya?" Ruqaiya asked with a little agitation.

"Dekho Ruqaiya tum shatranjme bhale hi maahir ho par siyasatko abhitak nahi jaan payi, Hamne Jodha se nikaah karke unko apna gulaam banaya hai. Duniya le najro me to woe k begam bani rahegi par hamare saath use wo har jillat sehna parega jo uske abbu ne hame diya tha.Isiliye hamne use apne haato se saja dene keliye apna begam banaya hai."

" Kya yehi wajah hai Jalaal?" Ruqaiya was unconvinced.

" Haan bilkul. Tumhe apne sohar pe yakeen nahi hai!" Jalaal was trying to convince her.

"thik hai Jalaal, aapke liye ham use bhi jhel lenge." Ruqaiya left from there with irritation.

But Jalaal was feeling something weird. He went to practice his Shamsheer war, but nothing was easing his mind. He was dying to have a glimpse of his newly wedded wife. The agony and the hatred was mixed with a addiction whuch was attracting him towards Jodha.

PLS comment n like..

thanks

Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago

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@--Janvie--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey Sona!!Main tere Scrap aur PM se pehle hi read kar liya tha!! 😆 Guess how?!😉
You turned this into FF!!!!😲 😲 😆!Great yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
Tune Mujhe hi apne Bday pe gift de diya itna bada!! 😃 😆 Toh Ek bada wala Thankyou to you😃 🤗 🤗(Thanku banta hai!! 😛 😉 😳 )

So Jalal is giving fake excuses to Ruqu and everyone already just to keep Jodha close!! 😲 😆 Way to go Jallu baby!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ 😆
And He is already feeling a pull towards Jodha!!☺️ ❤️ 😉Great looking forward to see more of his addiction to Jodha. 😳
And Next time jab bhi update karegi toh thoda bada update karna pls!! 😳 😳 Yeh bahut jyada chotu update tha!!
😭 😆 But I'm really happy ki tune finally update kar diya and Woh Bhi FF banake aur Mujhe Dedicate karke.😃Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou Sonu.🤗 🤗 🤗
Love ya loads big sister!!❤️ ❤️ 😳 🤗

Aur Sabko PM send kar jaldi,Sirf Mujhe akele kyu send kiya hai?! 😡 😕 😆

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: janvie
Hey Sona!!Main tere Scrap aur PM se pehle hi read kar liya tha!! 😆 Guess how?!😉
You turned this into FF!!!!😲 😲 😆!Great yaar!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
Tune Mujhe hi apne Bday pe gift de diya itna bada!! 😃 😆 Toh Ek bada wala Thankyou to you😃 🤗 🤗(Thanku banta hai!! 😛 😉 😳 )

So Jalal is giving fake excuses to Ruqu and everyone already just to keep Jodha close!! 😲 😆 Way to go Jallu baby!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ 😆
And He is already feeling a pull towards Jodha!!☺️ ❤️ 😉Great looking forward to see more of his addiction to Jodha. 😳
And Next time jab bhi update karegi toh thoda bada update karna pls!! 😳 😳 Yeh bahut jyada chotu update tha!!
😭 😆 But I'm really happy ki tune finally update kar diya and Woh Bhi FF banake aur Mujhe Dedicate karke.😃Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou Sonu.🤗 🤗 🤗
Love ya loads big sister!!❤️ ❤️ 😳 🤗

Aur Sabko PM send kar jaldi,Sirf Mujhe akele kyu send kiya hai?! 😡 😕 😆

i will updt it several times in week but ye short updt hi de paungi...sorry...iffc se ake tired hojati hoon na..par week me 4 times updt dungi to it will be fast naa!

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

thank you for updating- it is a nice beginning- thank you to janvie too- thx for making into off. 👏

thx for the pm.

Edited by ashpat - 12 years ago

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

hye!
nice update, d0 continue soon
& thanks for the pm

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

nice part dear.. Really looking forward for more. Thanks for pms..

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

lovely + some jealousy feeling in ruqaiya
happy akbar give some respectful position to jodha , waiting how both lovely couple fall in love with each other
thanks for pm & continue soon