OS: Falling In Love

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

.GrangerMalfoy.

@.GrangerMalfoy.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

u surely do not suck...ur a nice writer boss...

and HUG adham khan!!!!!

she must be too much happpyyy😉

Thank you:)
she IS very happy!!! After all she's with her Shehshah!

Quote

Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome OS dear...Love the way you had portrayed Jodha and Jalal's feelings 👏

Please continue 😳

Priya

PS your FF will be added in FF center

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

.GrangerMalfoy.

@.GrangerMalfoy.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: yoga23priya
Awesome OS dear...Love the way you had portrayed Jodha and Jalal's feelings 👏

Please continue 😳

Priya

PS your FF will be added in FF center

Thank you! :)
but its a one-shot not an ff, so i wonlt be contiinuing it!

Quote

Alakh

@Autumn_Rose

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nice OS.. but try using pargraphs next time.. Its hard to read a large block of text.

Do continue👏

Quote

.GrangerMalfoy.

@.GrangerMalfoy.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Autumn_Rose
Nice OS.. but try using pargraphs next time.. Its hard to read a large block of text.

Do continue👏

I did use paragraphs. I don't know what the hell happened. It was fine till a while ago! I'll try n edit it.
Done :) thank you by the way!!! :)

Edited by blahblah26 - 12 years ago

Quote

Alakh

@Autumn_Rose

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: blahblah26

I did use paragraphs. I don't know what the hell happened. It was fine till a while ago! I'll try n edit it.

😆 Happens.

Quote

Asandhimitra

@LadyMacbeth

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wow , I must say if this is your first OS writing , then you've done a good job .

But it was not clear how come Jodha's hatred n Jalal's all consuming notion of revenge change into liking for each other , well I guess it's not possible to write that up in a small os .

Your language is fluid n has quaint air about it , in short , lovely ! 👍🏼

Quote

diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

what hap? not continuing? i was waiting to read more.

Quote

@--Janvie--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

This was Just an Brilliantly Awesome OS!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it to the core.❤️
Aww..She can hug Adham khan too 😲 😲 😆
I want Jodha to confess her feelings for Jalal yaar...He deserves to know it. 😳
And Again I will say you are an Awesome and Fantastic Writer...You described everything so well. 👏 👏 ⭐️
Pls Continue this OS dear...I request you Pls do Continue. 😊 😳 😳
And Pls PM me when you update.😊 😳 😳