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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
love your writing style,beautifully written and trust me I was totally sunk in the contents of your writing,brilliant.

Mallu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS! You portrayed the scenes and emotions so beautifully. Sometimes, it is difficult not to think of the movie when the writers sometimes show similarities but it is refreshing when they dance the line between the familiar and own creativity. You have done the same. When you mentioned Jodha's toes peeking out and manner in which Jalal takes off his taaj, I was reminded of the movie but then the emotions of the characters were completely different. Simply beautiful. I hope you make this into a longer story or come up with a new SS/FF. You are a wonderful and talented writer and I hope to read more of your work.

Best,

Simi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ady148

Amazing os madonna. I think u got it who i am lol

is that you deepak??
please tell me I am right
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for stopping by shreya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ForbiddenFruit

Aahan! I like it! Thank goodness u wrote a non-Madhubala story!
This ma cherie was such a historic piece! I don'treally follow d show much...but Ilike ur story. I knw its a OS...but continue dis into a ff? Pretty please? With a chocolate covered strawberry on top? Puh-lease????? Poooleeej???? Am ready to pout,whine,scream,threaten in grand RK-ishtyle if u don't!
Btw...at first Ithought u wer writing an OS on d movie Jodha Akbar wher Hrithik played Akbar. Haaye...Hrithik makes a damn hawt Akbar,no??? Don't u dare say no!
P.S: plzzz continue dis? Wah...wah...wah! *baby crying*

I heard your cries, dear reader😆
There are days when I skip the show but that is because it is Ekta. Even if I come back months later, I would still know whatever the heck went on while I away.
There is another FF (actually more than one) I am writing over at writers' corner so, I may not find time for this forum atleast for long term commitment. Can't nobody tie me down😉
Just gimme a pm, I will send you the links but I just can't. Plus, see shwetzy above your comment, she will kill me.
Yes, Hrithik was near perfect.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey


is that you deepak??
please tell me I am right

yes madonna ji hwz u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: ady148

yes madonna ji hwz u

I am well. When did you decide to appear out of the bushes Mr. M.I.A.?
Are you still over at the forum or have you found greener pastures now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever

Awesome yaar! It was really good. Make another part. I know it's gonna be awesome.

Thanks love.
I know it is but I am knee deep in other stuff. Maybe later?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DevilClan

Did it happened in reality or is it also a fiction.

I don't know jack about Jodha's real life or the lack thereof. Plus, you know what they say history is what the writer wants it to be. So, let's just say this piece is a figment of my imagination
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Well i am now a college student new place so rarely gets tym to come here. i spend tym at bollywood forum. Entertainment

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