OS: Wedding Night - Page 3

love your writing style,beautifully written and trust me I was totally sunk in the contents of your writing,brilliant.

Lovely OS! You portrayed the scenes and emotions so beautifully. Sometimes, it is difficult not to think of the movie when the writers sometimes show similarities but it is refreshing when they dance the line between the familiar and own creativity. You have done the same. When you mentioned Jodha's toes peeking out and manner in which Jalal takes off his taaj, I was reminded of the movie but then the emotions of the characters were completely different. Simply beautiful. I hope you make this into a longer story or come up with a new SS/FF. You are a wonderful and talented writer and I hope to read more of your work.

Best,

Simi

Originally posted by: ady148

Amazing os madonna. I think u got it who i am lol

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Nice One.

Originally posted by: ForbiddenFruit

Aahan! I like it! Thank goodness u wrote a non-Madhubala story!
This ma cherie was such a historic piece! I don'treally follow d show much...but Ilike ur story. I knw its a OS...but continue dis into a ff? Pretty please? With a chocolate covered strawberry on top? Puh-lease????? Poooleeej???? Am ready to pout,whine,scream,threaten in grand RK-ishtyle if u don't!
Btw...at first Ithought u wer writing an OS on d movie Jodha Akbar wher Hrithik played Akbar. Haaye...Hrithik makes a damn hawt Akbar,no??? Don't u dare say no!
P.S: plzzz continue dis? Wah...wah...wah! *baby crying*

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

is that you deepak??

please tell me I am right

yes madonna ji hwz u

Originally posted by: ady148

yes madonna ji hwz u

Originally posted by: Ashvikfever

Awesome yaar! It was really good. Make another part. I know it's gonna be awesome.

Originally posted by: DevilClan

Did it happened in reality or is it also a fiction.

Well i am now a college student new place so rarely gets tym to come here. i spend tym at bollywood forum. Entertainment