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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for bieng late, Actually It was my exams goin on...Finally this is completed but BEWARE it didn't turned out, what was expected
I warn you it is utter crap
She clapped her hands toghether
Servants entered with Big things covered in Blue cloth, Jalal was curiously inspecting each, trying to guess what is inside.
"Ab aap mujhe batayiye isme kya hai?"Jalal was getting impatient
"Sirf ek nahi, kayi cheeze hai aapke liye Shehen Shah"Jodha was smiling.
Jalal smirked.He liked Abundance of things, and was pleased hearing there were many things for him.
"Pehele Yeh"Jodha pointed to the first thing covered.
Jalal went to open that...
"Rukiye"
"Kya hua"
"Ise aap nahi khol sakte"
"Kyun"
"Har kapde ko uthane se pehele aapko uski keemat deni hogi"
"Kitni mohre chahiye aapko?"
"Hame mohre nahi chahiye"
"Phir?"
"Har kapde ko uthane ke Badle aapko ek-ek pakshiyo[Birds] ka pinjraa khulva ke unhe azzad karna hoga"
Jalal smirked.He remembered a few days ago he was lectured on the "Right to Live freely" "We have no right to capture them" when Jodha saw the caged birds.
She knows to use the situation in her favour.
Beside the Duo. The other Queens were also giving Truimph looks.The day Jodha stepped in, they were relieved that no Longer Ruquiya is the chaheti Begum.
Every one could see in the eyes of Jalal, It displays just one word "Jodha!"
And Besides them, there was Ruquiya, who was furious and recalling what Maham-Anga told her
"Kisi din koyi aur ladki aa gayi, aur Shehen Shah ka Dil le gayi, to aap ka yeh rutba mit jayega"
Jalal removed the first cloth.
Out came a beautiful array of Sword covers. Jalal liked Swords, The way he kept his Sham Sheer.Jodha knew
And here were very esquisite and beautiful covers for his Big sword collection. Impressive!
"Yeh sab..."
"Hum khareedenge"
Now Jodha had a Big"O" mouth, He didn't gave a chance to explain.
"Thik hai aage dekhiye"
... Everything Jalal saw on that stall amazed him, all the things kept were choosen keeping him in mind, him! Jalal!
And he had buyed everything Jodha showed him, as He really was amazed by the creative skills of his Wife and the ability to choose the right things for the particular person.
She knows him only in 2-3 months, while his Begums, specially Ruquiya who are knowing him for years didn't impressed him this much.
"Shehen Shah yeh aapke liye sabse khaas cheez jo humne banayi hai"
Saying that she removed the last piece of cloth and...
It was a Potrait of Jalal-uddin Mohammad Akbar
So Brilliant, so Beautiful It was like Jalal is looking into the Mirror!
Jodha is so Talented he never knew.
Now he had the "O" with him struglling to hide it.
The Backgroung was red. Was it a symbol of something? That he has a heart or he can Love?
What he is thinking?
He and Heart?
But..
He looked at Jodha
So Cheerful, showing the things she made for him...
Maybe he had a Heart!
Maybe...
And it will start beating again when...
When... Jodha will Smile!
"Hum isse bhi kharedenge...isse hamere kaksh me lagvaya jaye"
"Agle Meena-Bazaar ka hume besabri se intezaar rahega"Jalal smirked
And also noticed a ting of red on Jodha's cheek which made his Heart to do summersaults
Maybe he was falling in LOVE, AmmiJaan was right,Maybe he had a heart...
Maybe Jodha was falling in Love with him too❤️
"Abdul Meena-Bazaar roj nahi lag sakta?"
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Lol for last line...

And thanks for updating and is your hand now...??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
nice one.. Really loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Arya75

Lol for last line...


And thanks for updating and is your hand now...??

Well it is OK !!
Thankx for showing concern..😛
Updated as Tough Exams are over...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Awesome update. Just totally loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
really good one. but it's too short, dear. know u had ur exams. but now since u r free, do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Luvly update dear.. 😊
Well done.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
really nice! <3 well written! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
It was far from the word crap and close to the word amazing..
So so well written..Loved it completely ;)
I so want it to actually happen in the serial..
And the last line was absolutely hilarious ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awesome!!!
loved it especially last line 😊

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