SS-'JODA AKBAR LOVE JOURNEY' CHP16 PG37 UPDTD SEPT 22nd - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: kiran_89

WOWWW AMAZING😛👏

i must say ur ff in much more good than show
10/10 4 this update⭐️


Not really
Thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
👏wow ... lovely update dear😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Very nice update. Loved it too much. Bas, now give us the next chapter.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Wow amazing
Loved it
Awesome
Pease update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
My heart fluttered a bit after reading this.
Really wanna see this onscreen😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: worldequalsyou

Wow amazing
Loved it
Awesome
Pease update soon :)


Thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ameilia

My heart fluttered a bit after reading this.

Really wanna see this onscreen😳


O really
Thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
CHAPTER 6


JALAL - he and KAN baba catch ADHAM khan red handedly

ADHAM KHAN - since he is caught ...with the help of his followers he escapes from there ...

AKBAR - am sorry KAN baba for not trusting u first ...but I couldn't believe one can stoop so low , that to whom I call badi ammi 🥱

KAN BABA - I can understand ur feelings JALAL ...

AKBAR - he calls MAHA manga and shouts at her " why did u do this badi ammi " ??

MAHA MANGA - because I hate that Rajput princess who is influencing u , u stopped taking advice from me ...

AKBAR - don't u dare dare to talk about her ..don't forget that she is my begum and Mallika Hindustan hai ...

MAHA MANGA - I don't want that child to be born wh has Rajput blood in him

AKBAR - bass karo abh 😡 Not a word ... How dare u talk about my wife and child ...don't forget that it's my child and future heir ... My blood ...don't u date to think about them again

MAHA MANGA - she lowers he head ...

AKBAR - had it been any other person I would have get them killed by now ...since u raised me am leaving u ...never show ur face to me again ...ur staying out of Agra ...

MAHA MANGA. - JALAAL!!!!

AKBAR - don't call me like that ...u lost da right wen u thought of killing my baby ...guards take. Her away

KAN BABA - he puts his hand on akbar's shoulder . He orders guards to catch ADHAM khan

AKBAR - he leaves . He goes to joda harem

JODA - she is waiting for her husband . As soon as she see's him coming she goes towards him asks " kya hua "

AKBAR - he just looks at her and hugs her so emotionally

JODA - she comes out of embrace and make him sit on bed beside her and take his face into her hands and ask wat happened

AKBAR - he sleeps in her lap and narrates the whole story ...he tells that he was scared of the thought of anyone harming joda ..." I can't live without u joda " . He kisses on her tummy .

JODA - kuch nahi hoga Hume jab thak aap ho humaare saath

AKBAR - he also feels bad for wat MAHA manga has done

JODA - she consoles Akbar ...and pats his head

AKBAR - slowly he falls asleep in her lap

JODA - she looks with love into her husbands sleeping face and kisses him on cheeks and she to sleeps leaning towards the pillow . Akbar sleeps like that only in her lap

AKBAR - in the midnight Akbar wakes up and realises that he slept in her lap and finds joda sitting and sleeping like that only ...HE lays her on bed slowly n sleep beside her .

JODA - she sleeps aside as she is in deep sleep .

AKBAR - he kisses her on her shoulder and hugs her an sleeps

JODA - she smiles in her sleep .

NEXT DAY IN THE MAHAL .

ADHAM KHAN - he enters PALCE with his 8 people and attacks bhairam khan and kills him

ALL PEOPLE START RUNNING HERE AND THERE IN THE PALACE ...GUARDS START CHASING HIM .

GUARD - he informs Akbar about it

AKBAR - he orders to catch ADHAM and rushes to KAN baba

KAN BABA - in his last breath ...hugs JALAL ...And dies

AKBAR - he sheds tears and angrily take sword and go for ADHAM khan

ADHAM KHAN - he enters female quarters

AKBAR - he rushes towards female quarters with guards ...some of ADHAM khan followers were already caught and killed

JODA - MOTHI yeh kya ho raha hai ...y there is so much of nice ...she comes out of harem and finds Akbar and few guards running with sword

ADHAM KHAN - he is few meters away from joda , behind her

JODA - she doesn't notice him . She is only staring at Akbar thinking wat is going on in palace

AKBAR - he notices ADHAM khan coming from behind to attack joda

ADHAM AKHAN - he moves towards joda ...killing the security guards over there

MOTHI -she shouts " rajkumari bachiye "

JODHA - he turns and finds ADHAM khan coming towards her killing the guards ...she immediately takes a sword from da guard

ADHAM - he puts sword on joda

JODA - she fights back with her sword ... But she is a bit weak as she is pregnent ...she doesn't have that energy to jump and move fast ...

ADHAM - he fights vigorously ...

JODA - she looses grip of her sword and drops it down ...she holds her stomach and closes her eyes tightly ...

AKBAR - he stops the sword of ADHAM and gurds come and catch ADHAM . JALAL hugs joda out of fear ..." joda ur fine "

JODA - she already started sweating out of fear ...trembling " am fine "

AKBAR - he stabs ADHAM khan ...and kills him and pushes down from that floor

JODA - already she is feeling so weak ...looking at that ..she feels giddy and losses her conscious

MOTHI - she holds joda from falling down

AKBAR - he immediately comes and lifts joda and call for daai and take her inside harem ...and makes her lie on bed ..

LADY DOC - sh examines joda

AKBAR - he is so worried . Kya hua ...is everything fine ? Joda teek hai ??

DAI - she is fine SHEHENSHA ...

AKBAR - aur bachaa ???

DAI - both mother and child are fine ...due to shock and weakness she fell down . Nothing to worry , I gave medicine ..due to which she will be in sleep for few hours ...then she will be perfectly fine

AKBAR - he feels relieved ... He orders everyone to leave

JODA - she sleeps like that only for 3. Hours

AKBAR - he sits beside joda from 3 hours and watch her . He doesn't leave her even for a minute .

JODA - in her sleep she remembers ADHAM khan coming to stab her in her tummy and suddenly waked up holding her tummy ...shout " mera bacha "

AKBAR -he hugs joda and tell " joda ... Am here don't panic , nothing happened ...baby is fine "

JODA - she leaves Akbar and looks at her tummy and hold it with tears in her eyes .and tell ..." isne kisi ka kya bigada ... Kyu SAB Iske Jaan ke peeche padgayi. "

AKBAR - he gets tears in his eyes and hugs joda and tell " aage Se Aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga ...no one will dare to think about harming the child ...don't u trust me ..I'll protect u both at any cost ..atleast as long as I survive nothing can harm u both "

JODA - I trust u more than anything this world ... She hugs him strongly ...

AKBAR - he feeds her and gives medicine and ask her to take rest

JODA - as she is also disturbed , she sleeps .

FROM THAT DAY ONWARDS AKBAR TAKES SPECIAL CARE OF JODA AND DOESN'T LEAVE HER ALONE . HE INCREASE HER SECURITY AND KEEPS ALL HIS TRUSTWORTHY GUARDS AS HER SECURITY . EVERYDAY HE DOES BRAEKFAST LUNCH AND DINNER WITH HER AND SLEEP IN HER HAREM ONLY AT NIGHT ...


IT'S BEEN TWO MONTHS SINCE THE INCIDENT OCCURED AND JODA IS 6 MONTHS PREGNENT NOW .


AKBAR - though he had few works out of Agra he dint leave joda and go . Bahgawandas took care of his works out of Agra .

BHAGAWANDAS - trust worthy person for Akbar and joda's own brother . He is a higher rank official in Akbar court .

JODA - it's her 6th month . She is feeling BAby kicks and movements now .

AKBAR - he is so excited WENEVER baby kicks . He puts hand on joda tummy and. Feels it . every day he sits with joda and waits for da baby to kick or move . Everyday after eating sweet baby used to kick ...

JODA - she is also very happy as everything Is going SMOOTHELY

AKBAR - that day it's been 2 hours in the night and the baby doesn't kick . He is waiting for baby to move .

JODA - SHEHENSHA ji kya hua aap kyu nahi soraha hai ...do sleep

AKBAR - joda every night after dinner baby kicks but today he is not kicking ... Why??? am so worried ...is baby ok ...

JODA - she smiles and looks at his worried face ..." beacuse he kicked many times in the evening before dinner ...u were not there at that time shehensha ji ...think baby is sleeping ..."

AKBAR - might be ur right ... K sleep joda ..it's too late

JODA - she sleeps on his chest ...

AKBAR - he puts his hand around her belly . He pretends to sleep but he doesn't sleep ...he keeps on waiting for baby to move ...he is so worried ...

JODA - she is in deep sleep

AKBAR - its early morning and he is still waiting for baby to move ...suddenly baby starts moving

JODA - she moves aside

AKBAR - he gets up and smiles ...gets so excited " thank god he is moving finally "

BABY IN WOMB - it starts kicking and moving here and there ...

AKBAR - he feels so happy and talks to baby " ur such a naughty kid ...u scared daddy ...I was waiting for u to move ...u took such a long time baby "

JODA - she hears the conversation and wakes up ...and looks at her husband and smile " tho aap raath bhar soya nahi "

AKBAR - not exactly joda

JODA - don't try to cover SHEHENSHA Ji ...I heard ur conversation with baby ...u dint sleep and was waiting for baby to move ...I really wonder if ur da same JALLALUDIN Mohammad Akbar , king of hinduthan ...

AKBAR - haa am da same ...y ??

JODA - these days ur acting so WIERD ... Almost like a child ... Ur awake through out night ...am surprised ...

AKBAR - joda donno but I got so worried ... I don't want to take any chance , am. Not feeling good from that incident has OCCURED

JODA - she keeps a WIERD expression

AKBAR - kya hua

JODA - I think am feeling hungry

AKBAR - 😆 Wat u want ????

JODA - badam milk ... With saffron

AKBAR - he orders maid to get it

MAID - she gets it ...Both joda and Akbar have bada milk and sleep ...

JODA - she wakes up in da morning and doesn't find her husband beside her ...there is a note on da bed left by JALAL ...it's written " good morning begum sayaba , am leaving to near by village on some important work ...don't wait for me ...I'll come by tomorrow evening, will miss u both ..MUAHHH ❤️ "
After reading it ...joda smiles





Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
RES

UNRES...
me first yipee...🥳🥳it was superb...
so khan baba is dead and jalal behaving like a kid...
superb epi...love akdha...continue soon
Edited by allseasonrain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Woww... Beautifully written dear..👏 ... Luvd it...😃

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