Akdha ss: Lovestory part 4B and 5 COMPLETED 20 oct 24 pg - Page 6

Hello guyz! Thankx to all for liking my SS. I will be updating tomorrow. I will start regular update from tomorrow. I will update all my FFs in this week.

i like ur concept

hey!
please do continue this ss
i'm eagerly waiting for it

Hello Guys! Im really very sorry for the late update. To make it up Im giving 2 chapters. Hope u enjoy it. Plz leave Ur feedbacks. Positive and negative feedbacks are accepted. So here it goes.

Chapter 2

What else did he know except for betrayal, deceit and lying? He was born to lie. He lied to everyone. He cheated everyone. He played with my feelings. I cant believe that he made me fall in love with him. I can never forgive him for what he did to me. Jodha wrote this down on a piece of paper with black ink. Such a fraud he is she thought. Playing around with everyones feeling. She sat down on her king-sized bed and started combing her hair. What is wrong with me? Lets just forget about the past and live the present. O I wish I had Jalals strong arms to support me. What am I thinking? For him I am in this condition. After all the things he had done to me, why cant I hate him? He destroyed my life but still I cant hate him. These things dwelled in her mind and all night she couldnt fall asleep. She just kept on thinking about Jalal. Something similar was happening in Agra. Jalal tossed around his bed. He kept on thinking about Jodha. Sleep was nowhere to be seen in his eyes. Anyone could tell by seeing his eyes how much he loved Jodha. But why did he do this to her. Of course for the evil Maham anga, who was dearer to him more then his mother. The words, which his mother told him, kept ringing on his ears.

Flashback of some hours earlier

Why did you let Jodha go? Why did you do this to her? said Hamida in a worried tone. Jalal then screamed out Because Badi Ammi told me. I can do anything for her. She told me that if I made Jodha fall in love with me and send her back to Amer we could take revenge of every Rajput who tried to conquer our land. It would be a lesson for them. She told me that I would feel better after doing it but now AmmiHamida spoke Now what Jalal? I know you miss Jodha, right? Let me guess Jalal you have fallen in love with Jodha when you were carrying out your plan. Tell me Jalal. Answer me! Jalal was teary-eyed Yes Ammi I miss her! I miss Jodha a lot. But nothing can be fixed now as I have already destroyed her life and she will never forgive me. But its not that I love her Ammi. I can never love he. I only miss her presence in my life thats it! Time will tell Jalal. One day when you will understand that you love Jodha it will be too late. Jalal dont make a mistake. You still have time. Just think about what I told you. Think! By saying this Hamida left the place, leaving Jalal to think.

Flashback ends

Jalal just closed his eyes and tried to sleep when his eyes suddenly opened when he heard a sweet melodious song coming from Jodhas room. Could it be? Was she really here? He quickly dashed out of his room and ran to Jodhas. But to his disappointment nobody was there. He entered the room. He decided that tonight he was going to sleep in Jodhas room. Even though she wasnt there but the room still had her fragrance. Jalal lay down on the bed when he saw Jodha standing in front of him. He just stared at her. What are you looking at? I am not actually here Shehenshaji. I am your dream. Then she disappeared. He kept on seeing her everywhere. Jodha said You must be thinking that why you are seeing me everywhere. There is one simple answer to it. Shehenshaji you have fallen in love with me. Dont lie to yourself. Just listen to your heart. Close your eyes Shehenshaji. Whom can you see? Jalal closed his eyes. Then he saw an image of Jodha. The image when she said that she loved Jalal. Jalals eyes flew open and he smiled to himself. He went to the balcony and screamed out I AM IN LOVE!!! I LOVE YOU JODHA!!! Im coming to get you. No matter what anyone says I will bring you back to my life. I promise that. He went to Hamida and hugged her tightly. Hamida was surprised. Jalal never hugged her so lovingly. She was very happy. She was happier after listening to the news that Jalal told her. Thank you Ammi for making me realizing that I love Jodha. I promise you that I will bring her back in Agra without her I will not enter Agra. I am proud of you my boy. Go and mend the mistake you have made. Go on! Jalal immediately left the place. He didnt inform Raja Bharmaal about his arrival because he wanted to surprise Jodha. On the other hand Maham anga was fuming with anger when she heard that Jalal was going to bring Jodha back.

The journey to Amer was quite lengthy and tiring. But Jalal finally reached Amer. The news of Jalal coming to Amer quickly spread across the city and soon the palace. Raja Bharmaal and Mainavati were delighted by the news. But when the news reached Jodhas ears she became angry. She was fuming with anger. I wont go back. Am I toy for him! I will not go back to that Jallad. Jalal with his soldiers came in front of the palace gate. Mainavati did Jalals aarti. All the time Jalals eyes were searching for his Queen, Jodha. Where is she? Doesnt she know that I am coming to take her back? What am I thinking why would she come to me when I have cheated her. Jalal thought to himself. Jalal entered the palace. Everyone there was looking at Jalal with a smile on his or her faces. As he entered the palace he saw a group of girls, their faces were covered with ghoonghat, staring at him from balcony. Giggling and talking. Only one of the girls was just standing there. Not talking to anyone. This brought a smile to Jalals face as he had the feeling that the girl was His Jodha. Jalal kept on staring at that girl.

Indeed that girl standing quietly was Jodha, who noticed Jalal staring at her, was fuming with rage. Jodha grew angrier when he was smiling at her. Raja Bharmaal broke Jalals thoughts. Rani Mainavati go and bring Jodha. Dont let Shahensha wait. Mainavati nodded and left to bring Jodha. Jodha ran back to her room. She laid on the bed and shut her eyes. Mainavati entered her room. Jodha wake up dear. Shehenshaji has come. He wants to meet you. Wake up. Jodha replied, Maasa I am not feeling good. I have a headache and I need to sleep for a while. Please Maasa try to understand. I am not fit enough to go in front of the Shehensha. Okay beta. I will inform the Shehensha about this. You rest.

Scroll down

Chapter 3

Mainavati went downstairs. Jalal was looking at her and his eyes were searching for Jodha. Mainavati noticed this. Mainavati said to Jalal Actually, Shehenshaji Jodha is unwell. She has a headache and she wants to rest. She said once her headache is gone she will come to meet you. She says that she is in an unfit position at the moment. Jalal face showed that he as disappointed which he actually was because he knew that Jodha was pretending and is making excuses to avoid meeting him. But he was not going to give up so easily. He had made up his mind that he would meet Jodha. He replied, No problem. I will meet her like that. She is my wife and a wife is never unfit in front of her husband. If she is really sick to even get up from her bed then I will go and meet her in her room. I have the right to because I am her husband above all the things. He sounded a bit desperate. He actually was. It had been a couple of weeks that he did not see Jodhas face. He did not care whether he sounded desperate or not. The only thing he wanted was to meet Jodha. Mainavati gave a smile to him Sure you can meet her. You have the right to. Let me guide you the way. Jalal had a huge smile pasted on his face. He was finally going to meet her. Both of them came in front of Jodhas bedroom door. Mainavati This is Jodhas room. You go inside. I am going downstairs. Jalal slowly opened the door. There she was, lying on the bed.

Jodha heard the door open. She knew that it was her mother. It couldnt be Jalal, as he did not have the guts to face her. She spoke out Maasa, I already told you that I am not feeling well and I cannot meet him now. Dont force me to get up and go downstairs to meet Shehenshaji.

Jalal smile grew wider because after so many days he heard her voice, His Jodhas voice. He replied in a cool tone But I can come to your room to meet you right Jodha? Jodhas heart skipped a beat. Could it be him? But how? She immediately sat down on the bed. Then there he was standing right in front of her eyes. Jodha got really angry and it was also visible on her face. Jalal looked into Jodhas eyes. He could see anger in them. She looks so beautiful when she is angry. He thought to himself. Jodha broke the silence when she said Why are you here? You didnt want to see my face right? Then why are you here? Hugh? Answer me! Jalal just stared at her with a smile on his face and without any words. This made Jodha furious What the hell is your problem? Why are you staring at me like that? Am I joker that you are smiling at me? This made Jalal burst into laughter. Jalal finally spoke Jodha you look beautiful when you are angry. I am here to take you back home, Agra. Jodha spoke again Home? Which home? What home? Whose home? Jalal then said Why our home Jodha. You are my wife Jodha and my home is your home. You will come with me to Agra. Wife?? What wife? Your wife Jodha died that day when you cheated her. She is already dead. I am not that Jodha who loved you. I am starting my life afresh. I want to forget about my past and live the present. I want to start my life with someone else. Who will actually love me. This triggered Jalals anger. He had enough. No one in this world could take Jodha away from him. He gripped Jodhas hand very tightly, He clenched his teeth and spoke Jodha, dont forget that I am your husband. You cannot talk about other men in front of me. You will never say things like that. No one, I mean no one in this world can take you away from me! You are only mine! MINE! A teardrop ran down Jodhas eyes. This teardrop was enough to melt Jalal down. He realized what he had done just now.

He pulled his hand away from Jodha and saw that he had left a mark on her hand. Guilt struck him. Why did I loose control of myself? What if she starts hating me more? I have to fix this. Jalal thought. Jodha kept staring at the ground and tears were flowing from her eyes. Jalal felt so bad. He had promised himself that he would not hurt her ever again but he did it again. She was crying because of him. He wanted to hug her tightly and never let go. But this would hurt her more. He thought it would be easy to pacify Jodha and take her back. It is way more difficult then he had thought. He sat down beside Jodha. Looked at her and said I am sorry for whatever I had done that day and for today. Please forgive me Jodha. I am truly very sorry. I have realized that I cannot live without you. My life is empty without you. You are the reason I breathe. I thought after sending you back I will feel really good and relaxed. But the opposite thing happened. I spent sleepless nights. Imagined you everywhere around me. I missed your presence in my life. I did this all because Badi Ammi told me so. She told me that it was for The Mughals good but she was actually wrong. Jodha I am deeply madly in love with you. I k now that you love me too. I can see that in your eyes. I will do anything to prove my love to you. I will not return to Agra without you. Jodha continued staring on the ground. Then she finally spoke up Whats the proof that you really love me? That you are not lying this time? Do whatever you want but I am not going to return. Jalal smiled at her Jodha enough of the talking you rest now. You told Maasa that you are sick so relax and lay down. I am right beside you. Jodha at least act in front of everyone that you are happy with me. Jodha nodded. Now Jodha I am very tired after the journey and I also need to rest. Can you move a little bit? I need to sleep. Jodha frowned. Jalal Dont expect that I am going sleep somewhere else. Its not the first time that we slept together. Come on Jodha. Rest. Jodha lay down. She turned her face away from Jalal, who was staring at her. After about an hour, Jodha turned to face Jalal who was fast asleep. You will never achieve for what you came here. Jodha was about to get up when Jalal put his hand around her waist. She couldnt move. So she had to stay there. She also fell asleep.

Jodha woke up and found the other side of bed empty. Where was he? Why do I care? She thought. She got up and went to the balcony. She saw Jalal showing off his fighting skills to Maan Singh. An unknown smile crept on her face. She kept staring at him when she finally realized that she was staring at him. She went away from there before Jalal could notice her staring at him.

After the practice Jalal came back to the room to find Jodha missing. Maybe she has gone to her mothers room. But I really need a shower now. I stink! Jalal wiped the sweat from his face and entered the bathroom. AAAHHH! Jodha was inside the bathtub and she screamed. What r u doing here? Leave! Jalal was first shocked and when he realized the situation, he smirked and said May I join you my lady? he winked at her.

Jodha (with an O expression): No way!!! What are you looking at? Leave!!

Jodha covered herself with a cloth. Jalal winked at her again and said Im leaving for now but one day you will want me with u in this bathtub. I can promise you that. Jodha Keep on dreaming SHAHENSHAJI! Jalal then left.

Precap: Akdha kiss.

Two parts in a single go!! Good work Tahni partner😃

thanks...loved the updates...it as really great

Awusome... Very nice
Luvd it

Cont soon n update fast...

very very nice 1..:-).you move fast than the soap..;-).update soon