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Hi mitrams , i am back with part-8 ... its very long , hope you mitrams bear it 😆 .


Part-8

Jeannie wakes up in a forest type area is shocked to see herself fully disfigured but as she glances at her exploded spacecraft , she knows the reason behind her disfigured look , she sighs "Lord Dras !! Where i have landed ?? It doesn't look like a part of 13-MN ..."
(Lord Dras , mein kaha pahunch gayi ?? Yeh 13-MN ka hissa toh nahi lagta)

...

Saying this she wanders in the forest hoping to find help , on her way through she comes across many of the rare species such as the orangutans , the tiger snake and many more...Suddenly she hears a loud booming sound which scared off all the animals which she have seen .

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She makes herself invisible by wearing her 'special' ring , then she discovers that it was a hunter who was trying to shoot a duck which escaped luckily , she sighed a relief "Oh...so it was this hunter's gun which scared the hell out of me."
(Oh...toh yeh iss hunter ke gun ki dhamaaka tha jisne meri jaan nikaal di thi)

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At Zunoon's secret room

As Zunoon walked , his green & yellow cape swept across the floor , he reached a box which was huge as a treasure box and it was majestically carved with gold , as he opened the box with such ease , it felt that the box will be reduced to ashes by his mere touch .

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As the box was opened , it revealed a precious yellow gem which shone with almost blinding light , Zunoon carefully held it in his hands , he roars aloud "This is the golden Hercules , the gem which has the power to hypnotize the whole universe !! As soon as i devour the agent from 5113-J , i will get this gem inserted in my nervous so i will be the controller of the world , then no one else will be more powerful than me , hahahaa !!! "
(Yehi woh golden hercules hai jisme saari duniya ko vash mein karne ki shakti hai , jaise hi mein uss 5113-J ki agent ko khatam kar doonga , mein iss nag ko apne dimaag se jod dunga tab saari duniua par meri hi hukumat chalegi , mujhse zyada shakti shaali pure jahan mein koi nahi hoga )

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Meanwhile Vicky who is near the forest (In which Jeannie is wandering around for help) is in deep thoughts about his flaws , he sighs with frustration "Urgh ! Why its so hard to be perfect ?!?"
(Urgh !! Perfect hona itna hard kyu hota hai ?!) He recalls the incident which happened with him today at office .

*Flashback*

A conference meeting is held on with everyone present in it , there's a VIP client Mr. Wangdo from China who's visiting India to sign an important deal with them . Boss is in confusion as he have to decide one employee to go and pick up the client from the airport and the other to impress him by telling about PA's successful history .

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Boss decides that it will be Vela who will be picking up Mr.Wangdo and Vicky will be the one to impress him by telling him about PA . Priya raises an objection to it , she sarcastically disapproves "Dad , Vicky can't even speak without being nervous , how will he speak in an eloquent way to impress Mr.Wandgu , huh ?"
(Dad , Vicky bina nervous huye baat bhi nahi karsakta , woh Mr.Wangdu se kaise ache se baat karega jisse woh impress hojaaye , huh !?)

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Rahul points out the play incident and says that Vicky isn't the right person for this . Vicky tries to convince Boss to give him the chance "Sir , that was just a play , believe me sir ...i will surely impress Mr.Wangdu with my determination."
(Sir , woh sirf ek play tha , mujh pe bharosa kijiye , mein apni determination se Mr.Wangdu ka dil jarur jit jaunga.)

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Boss after brooding over finalizes "Vicky , i know you are sincere and hardworking but Priya & Rahul are right too , i really don't wanna to take a risk ...this deal means a lot for PA's success . So its decided that Rahul will be the one to impress Mr.Wangdu by his talks"
(Vicky mein jaanta hu ki tum sincere aur mehnati ho par Priya aur Rahul bhi jalat nahi hai , mein koi risk nahi lena chahta...yeh deal PA ki kaamyabi ke liye bahut myne rakhti hai , toh yeh decide ho chuka hai ki Rahul Mr.Wangdu ko apni baaton se impress karega)


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Vicky gives a sad glance to Priya who rolls her eyes on seeing him and an angry one to Rahul doesn't react it , Vicky leaves to complete another works in his cabin , while Priya takes Johnny with her to a restaurant for dinner which instantly made Johnny flash his dreamy smile .


*Flashback ends*


Vicky was too lost because of this incident that he didn't noticed a feminine figure staring at him with great curiosity . She approached him and kept staring at him till Vicky asked her "Who are you and what do you want ?"
(Kaun ho tum aur tumhe kya chahiye ?)

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Jeannie (Feminine figure according to Vicky) says "I want help as i am in great trouble..."
(Mujhe help chahiye , mein bahut badi musibat mein hu) Vicky asks her what she meant by 'great trouble' Then Jeannie says him the whole truth about her being an alien agent from planet 5113-J and her mission to travel MN-13.

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Vicky laughs it off and says "I am not a fool to believe in your superman tales , neither aliens exist nor another life supporting planets do"
(Mein buddhu nahi hu ki tumhaari superman ki kahaaniyo mein aa jaonga , na aliens hote hai na life ko support karne waale planets)

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Jeannie furiously glares at him and uses her alien powers to vanish and reappear , Vicky is dumbstruck and then he finally says a yes to help her ...then Vela's and Johnny's voice is heard
"You wont be helping her alone , even we will join in to help her...!!"
(Akele tum uski help nahi karoge , hum bhi tumhaare saath uski help karenge)

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Vicky exclaims "You guys here !?! But why ?"(Tum log yaha pe !? Par kyu ?) Vela and Johnny both were speaking at the same time , so Vicky told them to stop and said Johnny to tell it . Johnny answers "Pandey ji , we were worried about you as you just left off after finishing your work , that's why me and Vela ji came to search for you."(Pandey ji , hume aapki fikr ho rahi thi kyuki aap kaam khatam karke turant chale aaye , iss liye hum aur Vela ji aapko dhundne aagaye)

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Vicky :- "Oh that's so sweet of you guys !! And now lets start out mission that's to help Jeannie and we will start it by repairing her spacecraft"
(Oh that's so sweet of you guys !! Ab hume apna mission 'Jeannie ki madat' shuru kar deni chahiye aur hume uska space craft repair karna chahiye)

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PA , corridor

Rahul and Gia cross each other's paths but this time Gia just 'Hmphs ' and leaves towards the opposite direction . Rahul wonders "Why she just did that 'hmph' ? Never before she gave that kind of gesture to me but why it concerns me , i should just think about my work of impressing Mr.Wangdu ."
(Usne mujhse muh kyu fer liya , pehle toh kabhi aaisa nahi kiya pat mujhe kya yeh sab se , mujhe bas apne kaam pe concentrate karna chahiye jo ki Mr.Wangdu ko impress karna hai)



That was all for now my mitrams ,
please comment , suggest or criticize , everything welcomed with open arms .

Xx..Sumi..xX


Note :- I know it was JeaVi - mission centric but for the next update , i promise that it will be a balanced one ...btw for your easy imagination , i will post Zunoon's pic

Zunoon




Part 9

Edited by -Have.a.dream- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

its fab loved it god job ... need next update very soon 😆 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
wow yar awesum.👏. i loved mission jeannie ki madad n how velu jhonny jin her, zunoon is evil bt perfect!⭐️ the pic.. waao too good, hollywood mvis ka feel horaha hai. great going sumi, excited for nxt part.. keep dem cuming~ 👍🏼
luvv ya loadz❤️. thnx a ton for this super awesum update..🤗 you rock👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
@ Mena and Shamma :- Thank you very much sweeties 😃 , glad u liked it .

@ Tina :- Thank you soo much dear , it means a lot 😳 and yeah soon will update it within a few days 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: -Priyam-

wow yar awesum.👏. i loved mission jeannie ki madad n how velu jhonny jin her, zunoon is evil bt perfect!⭐️ the pic.. waao too good, hollywood mvis ka feel horaha hai. great going sumi, excited for nxt part.. keep dem cuming~ 👍🏼
luvv ya loadz❤️. thnx a ton for this super awesum update..🤗 you rock👏



OMG Thank u thank u thank u thank u sooo much my yaara 🤗 🤗 , update itna bura tha phir bhi itna lovely feedback 😳 and thank you sooo much , glad u liked that pic...lol and yeah dear and love u loadz my jaani ❤️ 🤗 and aww... ntnsim and it means a lot ❤️ and aww Jaani you stun ! ⭐️

and Jaani m eagerly and desperately waiting for your update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
ntnsim my sweetz.. of course i luv this story... n i luv the ET effect u give to it, ur description ideas r fab.. n u deserve those applause. yea.. i knw... my dad says typing is also an excercise for mah fingers :P so hopefully i vl update soon, awee so sweet of ya my jaani.. luvv u loadzz, always❤️ stay blessed🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Priyam-

ntnsim my sweetz.. of course i luv this story... n i luv the ET effect u give to it, ur description ideas r fab.. n u deserve those applause. yea.. i knw... my dad says typing is also an excercise for mah fingers :P so hopefully i vl update soon, awee so sweet of ya my jaani.. luvv u loadzz, always❤️ stay blessed🤗



Aww..and m soo glad that u like it and *blush* itni taarif 😳 and aww its true 😳😳 and yeah Jaani , now waiting for part-12 😉😳 and aww.. same 2 u sweetz , love u loadz n keep smiling , stay blessed ! 🤗

Have a rockin day ! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
tareef yeh bhi tho sach hai kuch bhi nahi... :D

Love ya too my sweetz, ntnsim yara.. u derserve tthe accolades.. love u mmuuaahhh!

p.s. jaldi updt milega aapka? :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
keep smiling n stay blessed u too meri jaani :) have a wonderful dayy!❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Priyam-

tareef yeh bhi tho sach hai kuch bhi nahi... :D

Love ya too my sweetz, ntnsim yara.. u derserve tthe accolades.. love u mmuuaahhh!

p.s. jaldi updt milega aapka? :P



aww jaani thts so sweeet of u 🤗 and love ya loadzzz sweety and aww m flattered 😳😳 n love ya loadzz muahh !! n ya aaj milega for sure 😛

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