friends i need ur opinion pls

hello friends , i have one request i know this is out of topic but i had to ask this.. some days back i had posted this msg on board and most of u have read this and replied also and i had mentioned that this was made by my daughter who is aspiring to be journalist and i know many of u r good writers so if u kindly give me ur opinion on this piece how she did it it wud be really helpful

i appreciate ur answers

thank u

the ps part was written by me.. i have copied the msg for u to make it easy to reply thanks again

Dear Diary: Wonder what's in Jassi's diary?

So while the 'wedding of the year' may have come to a crashing end, Mona Singh a.ka Jassi has another reason to frown. Her real- life diary was found by an unnamed source on the sets of ' Jassi Jaisi koi nahin'. He spilled the beans on her- including her real life animosity with co-star Armaan Suri and her secret crush on the guest star T.J.While her diary was returned later; for her fans, it is more than clear that Jassi Jaisi koi nahin, not even Jassi herself!

P.S THE ABOVE IS MEANT FOR HUMOR PURPOSE ONLY AND NOT TO BE TAKEN SERIOUSLY AS ITS FIGMENT OF SOMEONES IMAGINATION ONLY,. THOSE WHO BELIEVE SHOULD DO SO AT THEIR OWN RISK😛

The language is good friend, how old is your daughter?

A small suggestion:- When you talk about unnamed sourse, please do not disclose even his/her gender. 😃

too good dear.. Tell ur daughter to write more.. She will be a good jouranlist, if U support her.......

hey frend
he has a very decent language yaar... 👏

hey frend
he has a very decent language yaar... 👏 [/QUOTE

hello the writer of that post is my daughter she created that bit and i jst posted it and i m female also incase u r confused abt my gender ok😉

and thanks for ur comments too

it's a lovely piece of writing....you should ask her to pursue this professionally 😊

It's a delightful piece of humor which has the hallmarks of potential. Of course, my opinion really depends upon you daughter's age. So. Do tell.