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bluelotus

@bluelotus

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Posted: 19 years ago

TEARS

It rains

Unrelenting

Over the tiled roofs

Of my home.

A nightjar is crying.

My companion sleeps

Innocently

His heartbeats rhymes

With the music

Of falling rain drops.

But my tears

Have no music

No rhyme

It flows in a stream

Voiceless

Colourless

And of course,

Dreamless.

Why am I crying?

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LESLIE

@ALICE

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Posted: 19 years ago

👏 gr8 gr8 bluelotus 👏 👏

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 19 years ago

wah wah wah wah laajawaab....im still waiting for your first publication 😉

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Anindita Sengupta

@Rumi

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Posted: 19 years ago

👏 .blue, my friend , after a long time i am reading your poem.

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sumeet_here

@sumeet_here

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Posted: 19 years ago

whoa tht was cool maan...i just know twinkle twinkle little staar 😆 😆 😆 ....this so advanced stuff ...gr8 job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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Kamila Rajwani

@peaches

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Posted: 19 years ago

Very Very nice Blue. 👏

Can you give me one interperatation of the poem? I believe you are comparing tears with the rain drops falling outside. 😊

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J Prasad

@jprasad

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Posted: 19 years ago

😭 oh thank you Blue, I have been waiting for so long for one of your poems. That was so beautiful!!! Somehow it reflects my feelings to the "t" even though it is not raining here. Perhaps I am just sad, because Jassi and Armaan died.

Again, thank you, Blue for your beautiful poem. I really needed it. 😊

Have a wonderful weekend!!!!