VOTING: Vday Poet. Cont. ADDED #5 ENTRY!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Voting: JandA Vday Contest!!!



Hey friends 😊
Sorry for the delay in presenting our entries
for the Valentine Day Contest.
But finally we have our entries set together for voting! Before you vote,I just want to give a huge thanks to those who participated!
👏
You guys are the ones who keep our forum going. It doesn't take skill to do something for people you love. If you do it with love, the skill and hardwork come along with it 😳

Rules: Please vote for one only.

👏👏👏 Presenting the entries 👏👏👏

Entry #1
tujhe dil kahun, tujhe jaan kahun
tujhe apni mehbooba kahun
uthake haath maangi thi kabhi
jo kubul hui wo dua kahun
tera pyar hai meri zindgi
tera khayal meri bandgi
teri arzoo hai har ghadi
tujhe darde-dil ki dava kahun
tere aanese ae humnashin
meri zindgi men bahar hai
dile bekarar ka karar tum
tujhe zannat-e-jahan kahun
meri zindgjka tum hi tum
aghaz bhi anjaam bhi
tujhe paake ae meri humsafar
tujhe kaaynaat-e-khuda kahun

Entry #2
Sparrow with a broken wing
You flutter before me
The wing that I broke
With my errant arrows
Dare I hope
That you will trust me again?

You gaze mutely at me
Your eyes full of questions
A million whys
That I cannot answer
All I give
Is my poor, misguided self

I promise you nothing

For I am incomplete

I give you no hope

A hollow man's promise

Is just that

A vow of no substance

Against my stubborn will

My heart became your slave

My pride resisted

This invasion of me

I didn't know

That this truly was freedom

Little bird, come to me

Nestle against my heart

It needs you as much

As you need my shelter

In this night

Enchanted, let us be one

Entry #3
Love is a beautiful feeling
that sends our hearts reeling
into the world of each other
and spend the rest of their lives together.

Love does not need a special day
To show love in any way
As Love needs no particular day
To say what we want to say.

Yet the world rejoices
On this very day
To honor and celebrate love
Come what may.

I just want to say
love and peace is the best way
To keep hatred away at bay
Wishing all the loved ones
A Very Happy Valentines Day.

Entry #4
The first time I met you,
I fell In love with you,
The second time I fell in love with u was,
when i looked deep in ur eyes
The Third time i fell in love
was when u smiled at me
After that when I kept seein u I fell in love with you,
You may think that that i'm crazy,
but the truth is that i'm truely lazy in ur love,
but the true question is do u really deserve my love?
you say u love me but u act as if i'm ur serevent..

Entry #5 (ADDED)

She danced on my palm:

A rainbow shaft;

Making me believe, foolishly

That this would last.

I closed my hands over her gentle beam,

She flitted away lightly, mocking me for my dream.

She crashed over me:

A tsunami of mirth;

I drank in her laughter, thirstily

For all I was worth.

I thought she would take me to a rainbow shore,

She left me to the mercy of the ocean's roar.

She smiled in my sleep:

A dream of rapture;

I dared to think, ardently

Of this vision to capture.

She dissolved into nothing as the daytime broke,

I was a madman, grasping at what left as I woke.

She was a winged fancy

Brushing against my skin;

In her trust I saw, resolutely

A gossamer heart to win.

I held my fingers out for her butterfly kiss,

She fluttered away shyly, giving them a miss.

She was a precious secret

Nestled in my heart;

I rejoiced too soon, naively

I thought we could never part.

She wrenched out of my eager hold,

Our secret to the world she told;

She kicked aside our past like an empty shell

Not knowing I was inside, in my living hell.

Okay guys, it time to start voting...
and all of you guys are a winner!!!👏

Edited by momogrl21 - 18 years ago

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laddoo598 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
Wow all of them are fantastic 👏
My vote goes to entry #2. 😊 Really well written poems everyone 😃
veekay thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
Can participants vote too 😉
& why only four entries 😒
blyton thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Momo, plz empty your Pm Inbox. I need to check something urgently.
laddoo598 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: veekay

Can participants vote too 😉
& why only four entries 😒

I think you can,but not for your own entry😈😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
omg..all of them are so wonderfull 👏 👏 👏 ..don't know which one to pick 😭

*goes inie minie mo* 😆 It's Entry no.1 😃
momogrl21 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
@Vimz: u may vote, but not for ur own ofcourse 😊
@blyti;inbox cleared, sorry 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow gr8 job ppl..
i will go for 1 😃😃
veekay thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: laddoo598

I think you can,but not for your own entry😈😆

I was not going to vote for mine-as it is😆

I find entries other than mine too good........just wonderful👏👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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VERY NICE WORK EVERYONE!!



I vote for #1
Edited by mermaid_QT - 18 years ago

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