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alien_visitor

@alien_visitor

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Posted: 20 years ago

The second I saw that dearest face

My shackles broke off far and wide...

The moment I heard him say my name

My road ended then and there...

My wings of love

Take me home where

I can live in his arms in his heart...

Each and every mile i cross

Is like a millimetre's loss...

No time to stare or spare

I will reach you oh my dear...

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kdokka

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Posted: 20 years ago

alien, that was great, simply great.

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alien_visitor

@alien_visitor

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Posted: 20 years ago

Thanks Kdokka and Misha...I am sooooooooooooo happy for those lovely two even though they are fictional.

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kisha

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Posted: 20 years ago

that was great alien_visitor 👏👏

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alien_visitor

@alien_visitor

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Posted: 20 years ago

thanx lub_u, Minnie n jingle.

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shiverz

@shiverz

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Posted: 20 years ago

very nice, alien_visitor!!👏

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queenbee

@queenbee

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Posted: 20 years ago

That's a beautiful expression of sentiment, alien visitor!!😳👏

I don't know what's wrong with me😕 .. why I feel like mutilating your poems into something funny that rhymes along the same lines... while one half of me is appreciating it the other half is falling over itself trying to re-compose it😡 ... am I really, as Minnie says, a two-headed Gemini monster!???😭

Alien visitor... (Raj-style), SLAP me!!!!! 😡

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alien_visitor

@alien_visitor

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Posted: 20 years ago

QB I dont mind your twisting my lines. After all everyone puts in their share of fun here, right??? As for slapping, that isnt in my blood. So go on...

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queenbee

@queenbee

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: alien_visitor
QB I dont mind your twisting my lines. After all everyone puts in their share of fun here, right??? As for slapping, that isnt in my blood. So go on...

Nope, Alien.. some things are too beautiful to ruin! (but thanx for the encouragement!😉)