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Posted: 19 years ago
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Lolz thanks to your encouragemnt i decided to carry on my story of when dimples finds out!-its a load of crap compared to enigma bcoz i can never write like Mary!!!!!!😳..

..Armaan drives frantically with a million thoughts racing through his mind, he cannot believe that even today after all that has happened Jassi is still his-he needs to speak to her,he needs to tell her how he feels and that his marriage to Mallika meant nothing to him..he decides to phone Raghav to try and see if he can speak to Jassi:

Armaan: Hello..haan Raghav main Armaan bol raha hoon..dekho shayad main jho tumse pooch ne jaraha hoon tumhe woh thora ajeeb lage, lekin kya main Mrs Oberoi mera mathlab Jassi se baath kar saktha hoon?..

Raghav: Armaan,,his voice breaks slightly..Jassi yeh ghar chod kar challi gayi hai,aur mujhe batha kar bhi nahin gayi ke who kahaan ja rahi hai,maine uske ghar ko phone kiya lekin vahaan koi nahin hai..his eyes brim with tears and he quickly says his farewells before Armaan can ask him anymore..

Armaan is puzzled as to where Jassi could have gone; a feeling of worry soon starts to overtake his happiness and nostalgia…he receives a call from GM,they want him to go to Goa as soon as possible in order to try and finalise the film deal..He sighs and reluctantly agrees to go,afterall he cant let Jassi down by ignoring Gulmohar..

Back at his home after a heated confrontation with his parents Armaan enters his room and begins to pack...

Armaan: Jassi main tumhe doond kar hi rahoonga,mujhe rishwas hain apne aap par aur apne pyaar par..Jassi tumse hi maine seekha ke pyaar kya hai..tum meri zindagi mein aayi aur meri zindagi hi badal gayi aur kab tum meri zindagi ban gayi mujhe patha bhi nahin chala..Mujhe poora yakeen hai jassi ke tum apne armaan ko zaroor maaf kardogi…

Meanwhile in a quiet caf in the beautiful surroundings of Goa, a person sits all alone…tears falling endlessly from eyes which reflect sheer determination-determination to destroy those who took everything from her…Her heart aches, and a sharp pain stabs at her chest as the sadness she feels almost chokes her…

'Armaan Suri,main tumhe barbaad kar ke hi chodoongi..aaj tak har kadam par maine hi tumhe har moseebath se bacchaiyya lekin ab nahin..'

With a pained expression which only those who have lost in love can relate to, she gets up and slowly makes her way back to her hotel room, back to her loneliness to once again try to win her battle…

Armaan approaches Goa and is astounded by its beauty..a strange feeling makes him feel alert for a second..

Armaan: Na jaane kyon,lekin in khoobsurat nazaaron mein mujhe apna pyaar diktha hai..

Ab kya hoga aage?..lolz anyone can continue!!..rubbish i know!-but an excellent way to pass time!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

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Sharmii thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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šŸ˜› what is this aisah....goa aakhar you stopped..
plzconinue..cant wait.... šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Congratulations Aishah, You are on the right track. You go Girl.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Normally good things happen in three. On your Third Attempt, JandA should melt. You know, all of us from Besharam Gang are waiting for some "Huttke Stuff". So please pleaseeeeeeeee complete your fanfiction, before Jassi runs away for her next Identiry.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great aishah pls do continue....u ahev left us at a critical juncture where we are desperate for more šŸ˜‰
besharam gang zindabad
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😃 šŸ‘ šŸ‘ good job..keep on writing
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwww thank you!!-i thought it was crap-tastic personally so thx for all the kind words and appreciation!! 😳 😊 ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was awesome aish!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ You write soo nicely šŸ‘ šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Arre! Why did u stop writing??? I was all in the mood for reading more and then you left me hanging! 😔 šŸ˜†...in honor of Asha Bhosle Ji...ahem...my own rendition of "Aao Na, Gale Lag Jao Na"

"Aao na, fan-fic continue kareyega"
"Agar shuru ki hai to, end tak likho"
"Tumne jo humare dil dhadkai hai"
"Tho phir udas bhi math, hume karo"

"Dekho, seene main jaisi"
"Hulchul machi hai, Oh Aishaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"
"Padadabdab, dekho T_D_GK to dumb hai, par tum nahin ho...Oh Aishaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"
"Oooohooo Oooohooo...Aao na, hume tadpao na, fanfic continue karlo Oh Aishaaah!"

šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

I hope that after reading this...you'll at least continue your fan-fic now!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†


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Posted: 19 years ago
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aishaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh
my god u write as well as enigma
wow
now u left everyone gasping and waitin for more
pllssssssssssssssssssssssssssss continue
want to see now jassi melt
damn thats why i watched jjkn
i want jassi's dreams to come true
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwww...that was sooooooooooo...touching aishah..please continue..yourself..please..

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