ViTharv OS- Incomplete!

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Shweta13

@Shweta13

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Another beautifully written piece Mayu ... this Vividha we would ahve liked ro see instead what makers throw at us... and Last two paragraphs are so beautiful, Everythinf in that tabela seems incomplete without Atharva.

Whatever seems happy on the surface but empty inside would have been real happiness filled family if he will be there.

Just waiting for the day patiently.

Quote

basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Reserved!

- assignment due in an hour and a half, and a test to prep for

- but here I am, reading your OS and soaking in all the cute feelings <3

Great job Mayu! But proper comment tomorrow :)

Unres'd!

Hiii girl <3

Wow you are so quick with these OS' 👏 It's starting to condition me to check my inbox everyday and see if you'd PM'd or not 😆

Anyway, coming back to this. You've done it again!

Though this time I loved it more because she is mad. And because you brought up the fact that he became the one he loathed. I don't know what the reason for him leaving is, or why whatever is going on is actually going on, but your OS was the way they should have shown it!

Sort of reminded me a little of the song by Gnash

I hate that I love you
Don't want to, but I can't put
Nobody else above you

This is for Vivi 🤗

Her courage and resilience was portrayed so well! Always a pleasure reading your OS

Take care and keeep writinggg 😃

Lots of love,

Hinal 😳

Edited by basket_101 - 8 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

At first when I read no atharv I thought: wait! Why am I reading this without atharv!

Then like usual your writing takes us to another place

The story was so endearing and sweet
Poor vividha can never hate him
She'll always be incomplete without him

Thanks so much for the pm this morning
Always looking forward to lots more stories from you :)

Quote

taraka2005

@taraka2005

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

awww...Love u Mau 🤗

now this Vivi m craving to see on my Screen...hopefully my wish will be fulfilled soon ...

Thank you for lovely OS !!!

Quote

Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: fusilli

You would have made a great script writer for our show. 😳

You flatter me girl!🤗

Love,

Mayu

Quote

Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: harmanjot
Mayu 🤗

Once again beautiful & well written OS❤️

In much needed time this OS was just treat for us. Your OS is heart touching & all three Sujata , Vividha & madhav was incomplete without Atharav.

Vividha can never erase Atharav from her heart & mind. Her hearts still yearns for Atharav but her hatred suppresses her love. Makers should take some knowledge from your writings & give some interesting things.

Atharav completes Vividha & same Vividha completes Atharav. Without each other they are incomplete.

Keep writing dear 😃

Jottie🤗

Thankyou so much😳

So aptly put Jottie, everything is incomplete without Atharv, Vividha can never ever stop loving Atharv, but his ditching her and Sujata has made her cold and kind of emotionless. Even in the show, she has kind of kept her distance from Madhav. Maybe she only remembers his abandoning her and hence the distance from the kid. Its really painful to watch him call R papa, but I guess we have to tolerate that for a few more episodes before the face-off.

In this story telling I will have to keep writing more OS to keep my sanity😆

Love,

Mayu

Quote

Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: prabharajani
mayu beautiful OS

it was very heart touching, the mere idea of vividha single handedly raising her son and managing diary is a very beautiful thought.. this is essence of jana na dil se door, the empowerment

madhav has same qualities of his father, he haa named after his mother madhav vividha too good mayu

the fact that atharv & vividha ate soulmates and even though vividha hates him now she can never forget him, he is in her thoughts always

i hope cvs read this OS

lovely mayu

i loved it

Prabha Di🤗

Thankyou so much:)

Kitne wait karwaya aapne😭 I am glad that you finally commented! 😳

Yes, I would have loved to see Vividha being a single mother and managing Atharv's dairy business. That would have been true empowerment! But I guess she is managing some kind of business, only if R wasn't around I would have loved it more!

Its heartwarming to see Madhav share so many traits with his father, the very reason Vividha is still alive and wants to wait for Atharv to return and complete their family!

Love,

Mayu

Quote

Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Shweta13
Another beautifully written piece Mayu ... this Vividha we would ahve liked ro see instead what makers throw at us... and Last two paragraphs are so beautiful, Everythinf in that tabela seems incomplete without Atharva.
Whatever seems happy on the surface but empty inside would have been real happiness filled family if he will be there.

Just waiting for the day patiently.

Shweta🤗

Thankyou😳

Exactly! This is the Vividha I had imagined post leap. Independent, single working mother, who also takes care of Atharv's mother. Who manages business as well as house and their son. It would have true empowerment. I have no problem with the leap as well as her characterisation, its the dependency she sometimes shows on R that puts me off. 🥱

Yes, its all happy and shining on surface, at superficial level, but deep down everything is broken. She is broken and only Atharv can heal her. 😳

I am waiting for their reunion now. Their happiness and their togetherness is what is keeping me hooked to the show.

Love,

Mayu

Quote

Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
At first when I read no atharv I thought: wait! Why am I reading this without atharv!

Then like usual your writing takes us to another place

The story was so endearing and sweet
Poor vividha can never hate him
She'll always be incomplete without him

Thanks so much for the pm this morning
Always looking forward to lots more stories from you :)

Pinky🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Yes, a ViTharv OS without Atharv is weird but he will always be omnipresent!

Its like these two complete each other in each sense!❤️

Love,

Mayu

Quote

Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ..sairat..
awww...Love u Mau 🤗

now this Vivi m craving to see on my Screen...hopefully my wish will be fulfilled soon ...

Thank you for lovely OS !!!

Tupe🤗

Seriously man! Ashi Vividha baghayla kiti majja ali asti na! Independent, single mother working and raising her son!😳

I am eagerly waiting for this day now! 😳

Love,

Mau