ViTharv OS- Main hoon na...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!❤️

This is a scene that I wish to see, which I doubt we will ever get to see. Its basically after Vividha and Atharv's relationship has been revealed and Vividha finally divorces Ravish and comes back to Ajmer with Atharv!😳

ViTharv OS- Main hoon na

Atharv clasped Vividha's hand as they both made their way back in their sweet, little cozy house in Ajmer. He had been born here, bought up in this very house, the same backyard yet the feeling was different today. He didn't really recognise today, anything. Not the house, the shed, the animals, the bunk bed, the ladder and most importantly his mother and her! A small tear trickled down her cheek.

Atharv: "Tu ro kyun rahi hai..."

Vividha: "Bas aise..."

She smiled seeing him, a bit relaxed that he was in his familiar surroundings, but the saddest part was he couldn't identify anything. She first took him around in the cattle shed, the very place their journey started. Their first meeting, their first eye lock, their very first misunderstanding, everything came back flooding, making her choke. She had to suppress her pain, her anguish, her angst, and her feelings because he needed her more than she needed him.


She looked at him with moist eyes, and held onto his arm

Vividha: "Atharv, ye Gungun hai aur ye iski bacchii Payal...aur main iski mausi hoon..."

Atharv: "Tu...gaay ki mausi...paagal hai bilkul tu..."

She smiled through her tears, remembering how he was few months ago and how he was today. Everything had changed, but not their love or their relation. They loved each other immensely and nothing could ever change that. She was his cure and she would make sure he remembered their life, their relation, their vows and their love!

She led him to his bike,

Vividha: "Atharv, ye tumhaari bike hai. Iska naam Julia hai...tumhe kuch yaad aara hai?"

Atharv nodded in negative. Nothing was really clicking, but his mind knew that he would be safe, he would be okay. He had Vividha by his side.

Vividha: "Koi baat nai Atharv, dheere dheere sab yaad aayega...main hoon na..."

He smiled seeing her, though his brain couldn't really decipher their relationship, the depth of their relation, but his heart knew she was his peace, his cure and he would feel safe in her arms.

She gently grabbed his arm and led him to their house. Sujata chachi had come a few days earlier to clean the house and get back to their normal routine.

Sujata wanted to do Atharv's aarti. He had come home after so many days, his house with his bride. Though they were not legally married, Sujata knew that they were meant to be together. She had initially banned Vividha from having any interaction with Atharv, but only she knew what these two meant for each other. They were in love and all that was what mattered. Nothing else mattered, no societal barriers, no formalities. She had lived life without love, and she certainly didn't want that to happen to Atharv or Vividha. These two poor souls had faced enough in life, and had overcome every obstacle destiny threw at them.

Sujata finally accepted that Vividha still immensely loved Atharv, because she was the only one who made Atharv call her Maa. She had been longing to hear him say that. She realised the gravity of their love, that even in this state, Vividha loves him the same way, with the same passion and intensity. Nothing had changed, and nothing will ever change as long these three were together.

Sujata: "Are ruko tum dono..."

Atharv: "Sujata ye nahi..."

Vividha: "Atharv...Sujata nai...Maa bulana hai..."

Atharv: "Theek hai...Maa..."

Vividha and Sujata smiled wholeheartedly.


Atharv was not interested in having lunch. But Vividha made his favourite vegetable, kathal.

Vividha took him to the bunk bed in the cattle shed, in a hope that he might remember some moments, have some kind of flashback. But her plans were not yielding any results, but she kept trying.

Atharv: "Yeh kitna mast hai...upar upar...yahan se main sab dekh sakta hoon...tumhe bhi..."

Vividha: "Haan Atharv...yahan se tum sabko dekhna...mujhe, Sujata chachi ko, Gungun ko aur Payal ko bhi...chalo ab ek bite khao...aaa karo..."

Atharv opened his mouth and relished the kathal. And by mistake he did bite her finger. By instinct seeing her in pain, he did what he did in the past. He sucked on the bleeding finger, soothing away her pain by his touch. She was touched too see his care even in this condition.

Atharv: "Iske pehle maine aisa kabhi kiya..."

Vividha: "Haan Atharv...tum hamesha mera dard bhagate ho..."

He relished every morsel of food she fed him. As soon as he finished, she asked him to close his eyes.

Vividha: "Atharv, mere paas tumhare kuch hai..."

Atharv was getting impatient,

Atharv: "Are jaldi...kholoon ankhein?" he asked with curiosity getting the better of him.

Vividha: "Haan..."

He saw some thread with beads in it on his right hand. He questioned her,

Atharv: "Vividha...ye kya hai?"

Vividha: "Isse rudraksh kehte hai...tum hamesha isse pehente the aur aaj ke baad hamesha pehnoge..."

Atharv: "Kyun...main kyun pehnoon isko...mujhe nai acha lagta..."

Vividha: "Aaj acha nai lagega, lekin jab tum theek hoge...tumhe sabkuch yaad aayega to iski keemat samajh main aayegi..."

Atharv: "Par...nai pehena..."

Vividha: "Atharv ye sirf rudraksh nai hai...hamare pyaar ki nishaani bhi hai...jab hum alag guye the aur jab hum mile, yahi rudraksh gawa hai...sirf mere liye pehen lo..."

Atharv: "Theek hai...tu kehti hai to..."

Vividha smiled at her destiny and thanked her. it had given her another chance to fall in love with this very man. Destiny had given them another chance of falling in love with each other.

As he slept without any fears in her lap, she gently kept patting him, playing with his hair and finding the peace they both had been struggling to find! They would fight any battle that lay ahead of them and eventually win it as long as they were together! She protectively placed her hand over his, and made a promise.

Vividha: "Main hoon na..."

She knew he heard in his sleep, as he gently entwined their fingers. Atharv was at peace and so was Vividha.

Sujata who had witnessed this entire conversation, was happy and proud too! She was in peace too!

The Sujata family had finally found their happiness, their journey had just begun and they would reach their destination.

God had blessed Vividha with Atharv and she was going to fight for him against the world and the society. She will win this battle because this was a battle of a woman in love for the man she loved! Loosing was not an option!

The End!


I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳


Positive criticism welcome!❤️


Love,

Mayu

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-Mayu- thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OS UPDATED!😳
Edited by -Mayu- - 8 years ago
prabharajani thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb and fantabulous os

thks for giving us such beautiful moments

thks for giving us back tabela, gungun, payal, they r a part of jndsd and for atharv and vividha, u never fail to amaze me girl, vividhas love for atharv is unconditional and she will definitely wont give up, she would definitely get her man cured, and what better than his treatment start in tabela

tabela is where he spent most of his life and gungun and payal r witnesses to their beautiful and emotional love story

rudraksh is my favourite accessory of atharv, it shows his strength, his power. I miss that rudraksh very much now, vivi again made him wear rudraksh, it would definitely bring half of his sanity back

vitharv and atharv are always magic, and their moments are most enthralling and to be cherished for

sujatha becoming normal again and accepting vitharv relation is good to read and the beautiful little family of three is back again which iam waiting for

i need to see this type of treatment given to atharv rather than making him stay in the cursed vashisht khandaans house, staying in that house itself make any one negative

hope vivi takes out atharv and sujatha from this stupid house and bring him to tabela

thks for sharing and love u mayuuu

keep writing

Edited by prabharajani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Girl 🤗

I seriously have no words for this one, its just beautiful beyond words. And I had tears in my eyes reading it. I miss tabela, julia, payal, gungun , ladder and bunk bed with Vitharv on it.

I so loved this scene and so wish to see something like this in our show.

This is how sujata will definitely accept them back together and this trio living happily.

Please keep writing and continue on this top how he regains memeory slowly and gradually.

Loved it and you too😳
Edited by Shweta13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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mayu...🤗
You really made cry...😒 girl...you are superb 👏 I wanted like this scences...😳
In your OS...you really mentioned atharv's innocence...I really felt his innocence...and his cuteness...
Vividha is always in a hope that one atharv atharv will remember her...their love...everything...
Mayu , you are really a talented girl...love you yaar...🤗
And your OS 😳
Edited by Ultimatevikku7 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayuuu my dearie... ❤️

First of all I am really very sorry for being late.

Your OS...this is so beautiful Mayu, I was in an emotional mess after reading it. The old surroundings, Ajmer, the tabela, the tabela bed, Gungun, Payal, everything---I miss everything and I badly want them back. The dreams which they had seen together, all the little things, the perfect Sujata Family which was their own little world--- I want back and really felt like crying imagining all this.

ViTharv and their soul connection. It has always been a straight line and that is just beautifully portrayed by you. Atharv's world is revolves around Vividha and Sujata and I loved how you have portrayed Sujata here.

You know Mayu the Rudraksh Part, I seriously want something like this in the show. The rudraksh has a major part in their life, in their journey, and it is my favourite bit of this OS.

This OS is not only beautiful Mayu it is emotional as well. Loved it. Thank you Mayu for writing this and please keep writing. Lots of love!! 😃
Edited by Nira_Mukherjee - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I just wanna cry Mayu! I WANT THIS! I want the tabela, the bunk bed, their house, Gungun, Payal, Julia- I want everything back and most importantly I want Atharv, Vividha and Sujata back.

That small little family had seen so many dreams together, had made discussing a simple daily routine so beautiful. I miss their happy little world so much! You literally brought all those memories back, every one of them.

The Rudraksh part is my favourite part of this. It has always had a special place in their life, in their journey and even when they separated. To put back the beads that had broken when they separated was such a beautiful symbolism. It said how they're going to be together again.

He really does find his peace in her, the soul connection never wavers and that's how it's always going to be. He feels the safest with her, as she always did with him. And I'm so glad this Sujata is the one I've always known, not the one I see on the show atm.

Lovely OS Mayu...love you for writing this and keep writing. You know I love to read your stories cos you tell them so beautifully and bring back the old JNDSD. This OS has improved my mood so much! Thank you dearie🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Mayu,
I love love loved it!!!❤️
I want this to happen soon!!
U made me cry with this!!😭
This is so beautifully written.. I can actually imagine them.. it is so heart-wrenching!!
I want this badly now!!!😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu i dont have words to describe my feelings now u the way u describe the whole scenerio with bed,tabela,Rudraksh and Kathal with so much love it seems like that i m watching my old JNDSD that for a while i was like i am dreaming this scene i love u for this these days your OS r more senseable and logical as compared to serial.Love your OS to the core.
But 1 thing which i want to say that Atharv love his rudraksh in this condition too.Remember Ravish give back rudraksh to Atharv in 2 week back ep.Atharv get so happy after that.So why he refused to take it from vividha.

Again Mayu thanx for this OS.This OS from u it made my day.Love u.Keep rocking.👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was so beautiful
After our scene scene today with "tum bin bataaye" song, this story is just perfect
Lovely description
Hope to read lots more
Thanks!
And really hope to see this on the show one day

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