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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!❤️

This scene is out of the context. This is a scene I so wanted to see after Atharv recovers and Vividha is free from the forced marriage. It's after they come back to Ajmer and their marriage preparations are in full swing. They have been engaged for over a month now and their love has only grown by leaps and bounds!😳

Regarding the pain and memory in the last paragraph, it was how disgusted Vividha felt after being molested. That pain and sorrow was there, which I had to mention.

ViTharv OS- The Attic

Vividha was done with the final touches of the attic situated in the uppermost corner of Atharv's factory. She had given this a lot of thought and had come with this idea. Everytime she came to meet him, there would be his employees and his staff. Atharv didn't believe in the whole boss- employee relation. For him, his staff was his family and hence he didn't have his own cabin. Though everybody knew about their relation and the upcoming nuptials, there were times when she wanted some privacy for themselves which was nowhere to be found since he was always surrounded by his family.

Vividha was impressed with the way he treated his staff, with love, care and utmost respect. She had fallen in love with this man, but she respected him equally as much as she loved him. For him, his staff's problems were equally disturbing as his own, which made her respect him immensely.

She had told him to wait back in office as she had planned a surprise for him. These both, madly in love souls loved giving each other surprises. It kept the magic alive in their relationship.

She went back to time, when she used to fight her feelings for this very man! She went back in time, when she listened to her heart but couldn't decipher the depth of her feelings for this very man!

Today she was a proud girl, who had finally accepted her feelings, inferred the calling of her heart and wholeheartedly admitted that she is irrevocably in love with this very man, Atharv Sujata!

She smiled remembering their confession, it was beautiful and the kiss, the most passionate. There were few words spoken, but both knew the gravity of the love! The despair in her voice, the longing in that kiss and the yearning to be with him. She loved him heart, body and soul!

She had fallen in love with his each of his virtues. She loved how he lived life in the moment, she loved how he lived life to the fullest, she loved how compassionate he was, she loved how hardworking he was, she loved how respected women! She freaking loved his every habit too!

He was flawed, to the core of it. At first he turned out to be broodish, moody, and arrogant yet he was pleasantly lovable, funny and passionate. There was something that connected these two beautiful souls in an undying bond of respect and love!

Vividha was getting restless now, her excitement knew no bounds. This was her dream surprise she wanted him to see, know his reaction and his happiness. She knew he was going to love it, how could he not? She came down from the attic and saw him dedicatedly working on his economic projects.

Vividha: "Atharv...chale?"

Atharv: "Hmm...bas 15 minute aur...ise khatam kar loon."

Vividha was in no mood to listen to him whining about the work. She literally grabbed his arm and pulled him out of his chair.

Atharv: "Kya kar rahi hai aap?"

Vividha: "Tumhe kuch dikhana hai...kitna natak karte ho?"

Atharv: "Haan, chal raha hoon."

As soon as he said that, she placed her long, slender fingers on his eyes, clasped his right palm and was instructing him to walk with her.

As they reached the attic room, she led him inside and gently removed her palms. It took him a moment to soak in the happiness seeing this beautifully decorated room. The room was done in pale creamy yellow shades, with traditional Rajasthani painting adoring the small walls. The curtains were simple white and were swaying to the tunes of the wind flowing in through that one single window. There was a small bed, enough for two of them.

In one corner of the room, lay a small table and on that sat a beautiful vase with white lilies. Atharv loved white lilies. But the image that caught his eyes was their engagement photo, beautifully framed in a brown, rosewood frame. That was the moment both were lost in each other and Guddi had clicked it unknowingly. He had loved the photo for the purity and divinity of their love. It was a simple picture, but for both it meant the world.

He hugged her tightly, nearly crushing her. She hugged him back. They stayed there, in complete silence; she rested her head against his chest, listening to their hearts beat in rhythm with each other. He could clearly hear her heart racing, her beats getting faster, all he did was crush her against his chest, tighten his grip around her waist, and stood still until, her heart was back to normal. She slowly raised her head from his chest while they stood there, their eyes speaking. Speaking a thousand unsaid words, a thousand unsaid feelings and countless days of feeling of betrayal, he spoke first.

Atharv: "Aapne ye sab kab kiya?"

Vividha: "Kuch din pehle...usi din se jabse tum mujhe avoid kar rahe ho..."

Atharv: "Main aapko avoid kar raha hoon?"

Vividha: "Haan..."

Atharv: "Waise aapne ye kiya kyun?"

Vividha: "Kyunki jab bhi main tumse milne aati hoon, tumhare office wale hamesha waha rehte hai..."

Atharv: "To usme kya problem hai aapko? Aap mujhse waise baatien to karti hai na...aur sabko pata hai ki hamari sagai ho chuki hai..."

Vividha: "Kuch cheezien sirf privacy main ki jaati hain..."

Atharv: "Mujhe aapke iraade neik nahi lag rahe hai..."

Vividha: "Bade sanskaari ho..."

Atharv smile wholeheartedly in the entire week that had passed. She knew something was eating him up. Something was troubling him; usually he would share everything so his, this behaviour was unusual for her. She had decided to give him the time and space, eventually knowing he will discuss the problem with her, but this time he didn't. It was irritating her too. He was ignoring her, mechanically performing his duties and living a life like a robot.

Vividha: "Kya pareshaani hai Atharv?"

Atharv: "Kuch bhi nai..." he said trying to smile.

Vividha: "Atharv, aajtak tumne aisa kabhi nahi kiya...koi baat hai jo tumhe sata rahi hai..."

Atharv: "Wo bank loan reject ho gaya...sab khatam ho gaya..." he said now tears trickling down his cheeks.

Vividha cupped his face and gently wiped his tears. No matter how much pained she was because of his sheer ignorance, he needed her more than ever. She slowly took his entire being, his eyes were red and brimming, his body was shivering, and he was hurt beyond words. She gently pecked his lips, he surrendered to her love. She broke the kiss to see him faintly smile, acknowledging her presence around her.

Vividha: "Koi baat nahi...ek bank ka loan reject hua to kya hua?...Hum aur banks main bhi apply kar sakte hai na..."

Atharv: "Haan...par usme aur time lagega na...aur mujhe abhi wo zameen saste main mil rahi thi...sab barbaad hua hai..."

Vividha: "Kuch nai hua hai...kuch nai bighda hai...aur kuch nai badla hai..."

Atharv: "Sab to kharab ho chuka hai..."

Vividha: "Kya kharab ho gaya hai...aur kya badal chuka hai Atharv?"

Atharv sat down on the bed. Vividha sat down facing him. She gently took his hands in hers and entwined their fingers.

Vividha: "Kuch nai badla...na hamara pyaar, na hamara saath aur nahi hamari kismet..."

She gently caressed his face and continued speaking.

Vividha: "Atharv, kayde se mujhe tumse naraaz hona chahiye...lekin main jaanti thi ki tumhe koi baat pareshaan kar rahi thi..."

Atharv: "I am really very sorry..." he said tears clouding his vision.

Vividha: "Koi baat nai..." she gently wiped his tears.

Atharv: "Maine aapko bahut takleef di na?"

Vividha: "Haan, Atharv tum mujhpe gussa karo, mujhe taane maro par aise ignore mat karo na please. Meri bhi sab kuch bardasht karne ki limit hai...main insaan hoon bhagwan nai..."

Atharv: "Aage se khyaal rakhoonga...gussa sehen kar payengi mera..."

Vividha: "To ek week se kya kar rahi thi main..."

Atharv smiled genuinely, a smile that was missing. A smile that reached his eyes and made them sparkle.

Vividha: "Acha ab to batao kaise laga?"

Atharv: "Aap badi forward hai..."

Vividha: "Hmm..."

Atharv: "Bahut sundar hai...special!"

Vividha: "Ab ghar chale..."

Atharv: "Are...aapne hi kaha na ki hamain privacy mile, isliye ye room hai...to kuch karte hai..." he said with a glint of naughtiness in his eyes.

Vividha blushed a tomato red.

Atharv: "Aap sharmati bhi hai...hamesha to mujhe sharmana padta hai...aapke boldness ki vajah se..."

Vividha smiled and hugged him tightly. She broke the hug. He in one swift move lifted her and placed her on the bed. He took her lips in a passionate kiss; slowly easing them open as they both drowned themselves in each other, their tongues fiercely battling, their love shining through. They parted to breathe, staying in the embrace feeling the emotions running high in both of their hearts.

Atharv wanted to take this act forward, as much as he was consumed by her love he knew that she had asked for some time. He wanted it to be a memory for both of them, to cherish! A memory that would bring a smile on their faces and their bond of love strengthening.

He asked for an inaudible nod from the woman he loved mind, body and soul. As she gave her consent, there was nothing stopping him and her today!

He kissed her again, almost wanting to get over with, but not daring to yet, not sure which way to turn; and he didn't want to hurt her feelings. It was all a little more difficult that he'd thought. But as they kissed, he forgot about everything; and the ugliness of her past slipped slowly from her. There was no memory, no time, and no other person; there was only Atharv and his incredible gentleness, his endless passion and love for her, as he moved ever so gently toward her, and they moved closer and closer, until suddenly they became one and she could feel herself melt into him and she could bear it no longer. It was all so exquisite, and then suddenly they both exploded in unison and Vividha lay in Atharv's arms in complete amazement. She had never known anything even remotely like that. There was no similarity at all with what had happened to her before, no memory, and no pain, there was nothing but Atharv now and the love they shared!

Vividha finally spoke in the entire moment!

Vividha: "Thankyou for being so gentle Atharv!"

Atharv pecked her forehead and pulled her closer in his embrace. They snuggled closer to each other, to feel the love they had for each other and the promise they had given each other, to stay together in health and sickness, in sadness and happiness.

As they had promised each other, a relation of equality, a relation of love, a relation of respect.

The End!


I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳


Positive criticism welcome!


Love,

Mayu

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prabharajani thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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my wonderful mayu,

thks for this emrom OS

this was much needed at the moment

i can spend my life happily reading ur OS
our atharv is so senti and sensitive , he could never hurt vividha , he keeps all his sorrows with him and shares his joys and happiness with her

vividha knows how to make her man happy , how to bring him out of pain and she could in an instant findout if he is in tension.

attic is the best place to spend some quality time for both of them and i can say atharv can be naughty at times

they started from where they had left behind in ang lagade, she was not ready then, but now everything is perfect, mauka, dastur and all

vividha never needed a marriage to authentify their relationship , she always thought atharv as her husband , so a real start to their beautiful relationship

i would always love to see this part of their relationship , their marriage , their joys and struggles which they have to face jointly and their children too

yesterday princess in twitter was asking about names of vitharv children and i gave them names , if its boy then vivaan and girl its athiya

waiting for this time to come

love u mayu
Edited by prabharajani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu 🤗 God bless you girl !
After reading this I have tears in my eyes not because there is something sad in this OS but because this is exactly what VITHARV love is, it is so divine and so soulful that u cant help but love them more n more, I exactly had a same feeling as I felt while watching haldi romance and thinking of seperation at that time tore me, here union after seperation gave me such a wonderful feeling.

I am so desperate to see old Atharva, carefree Vividha and our Vitharv with their love for each other back, donno if we will ever get to see that without this pathetic tracks baggage.

But thanks to you for writing this 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu🤗
I'm so waiting for this phase of their life to come soon. It's all a mess atm...the freedom, the happiness it's all missing.

ViTharv's understanding was beautiful as always. Even though Athaev was angry, Vividha knew she had to give him time and eventually she would make him share his problems. I always say I love their communication the most, just like Vividha said. He can be angry, shout at her..she would take all of that. But not his ignorance or silence. That's the beauty of their relationship.

The surprise was so beautiful..I could visualise it.
Again it's beautiful how intimacy was never a big issue for the wrong reasons. If there was a hesitation, it was for the right, genuine reason. And they won it over.

Till the last line, you see their true line shine through in every bit of their conversations and actions. You've written it so so well, you make their love come out beautifully! Thankyou so much for yet another amazing OS!!!


Edited by baubles - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu🤗

The os is beautiful.I love everything about it.I love how you bring out their love in your words.They have an understanding that gives every couple relationship goals. Their love, so true..Their passion,unmatched...I love Vitharv more and more...

Atharv as a character is what attracted me to the show in the first place.It is so easy to fall for him.I love how you wrote, "She had fallen in love with his each of his virtues. She loved how he lived life in the moment, she loved how he lived life to the fullest, she loved how compassionate he was, she loved how hardworking he was, she loved how respected women!".These are the same reasons why we love him.

Oh...Atharv and Vividha are engaged ...I so want to see this is in the show.Kailash's treachery made everything seem fake the last time.I so want to see them get married. They deserve to live their life...the way they wanted it to be. I am glad that we get to see their life...some moments from your oneshots.We need something to hold on while watching the drag fest that our show is these days.

Vividha being his support...We always know Vividha and Sujatha are the support system he had in his life.There is nothing left in Atharv without Vividha and Sujatha,in his own words.

Loved their consummation scene as well.Loved how Atharv made her feel easy.We know how Atharv is.The start of a new journey...could never be better than this..

My comment seems too random at most places.Excuse my poor writing skills.Loved the os.

🤗🤗🤗

Edited by NimJ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu...🤗
Really loved your OS ! It's superb !
Whenever atharv is in a tension , vv come there and throw away the Denison from his mind ! You really made me remember of those wonderful and sweet days of atharv and vividha! 😳

I always loved your OS , because while reading your OS I've never felt that 'oh ! I'm reading...it really take me to the Vitharv land...their sweet sweet scences...😳


Edited by Ultimatevikku7 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayo love your OS as always plzz continue that Prego vivi OS how Atharv handle vivi in that period i want to live that moment from your OS plzz do continue that OS 😳
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Okay I seriously thought I had commented already... I can't remeber what I wrote the first time... Other than its a blush worthy OS...and I shall forever be begging for additional english
Dialogues...

Thank you...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayuuu...my sweetie ... Please don't be disheartened. I was a little busy with my Uni stuff, hence I got late.

This phase of ViTharv's life...Mayu I am and I know we all are desperately waiting for. Hope it happens soon.

You have portrayed ViTharv's relation so beautifully. Their relation, understanding is so unique, so loveable where they can feel each other, without saying anything and that's what make them so very special.

I love their surprises. In your previous OS it was from Atharv's and this time it was from Vividha's side. Her surprise was beautiful. Their relation is beyond societal norms and Vividha never ever needed any societal rituals to give their relation a name and she herself has said that. And this intimacy will make them and their relation more pure and more strong.

I am desperately waiting for ViTharv's moments nowadays. I want Atharv to recover soon, I want Vividha to get rid of this forced marriage and their golden happy days, joys, little moments, banters to come back, but I know it will take time :(

This OS is beautiful Mayu. You have written it so beautifully. I enjoyed it. It was so so good.

Thank you so much for this amazing OS. A big hug for you. Lots of love my cutie pie... ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabharajani

my wonderful mayu,


thks for this emrom OS

this was much needed at the moment

i can spend my life happily reading ur OS
our atharv is so senti and sensitive , he could never hurt vividha , he keeps all his sorrows with him and shares his joys and happiness with her

vividha knows how to make her man happy , how to bring him out of pain and she could in an instant findout if he is in tension.

attic is the best place to spend some quality time for both of them and i can say atharv can be naughty at times

they started from where they had left behind in ang lagade, she was not ready then, but now everything is perfect, mauka, dastur and all

vividha never needed a marriage to authentify their relationship , she always thought atharv as her husband , so a real start to their beautiful relationship

i would always love to see this part of their relationship , their marriage , their joys and struggles which they have to face jointly and their children too

yesterday princess in twitter was asking about names of vitharv children and i gave them names , if its boy then vivaan and girl its athiya

waiting for this time to come

love u mayu


Prabha Di🤗

Thankyou so much for the really long reply and positive response😳

Yes, attic is such a room that is very comfortable and cozy, and Vividha just decorated for their sake, their privacy and their love! ❤️

I would have loved to see their moments in that room, without any kabab main haddi😆

ViTharv relationship is very mature yet very childlike. They love each other unconditionally. That's the beauty of their relation. The trust these two have on each other. Vividha knew something was troubling him and that's why he was ignoring her, not because of their any silly fight. They would have kissed and made up by then. 😳 I am happy that they separated due to KK's misdeeds and not some stupid, random MU.

Love,
Mayu

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