Ravish/Vividha/Atharva FF: Riddle of Love (Chapter Four Updated)

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Kanak-123
I didnt received it

Did you commented before? Or asked for PM?

Edited by EshaalYousufzai - 9 years ago

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Ilovecoffee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Eshu now I'm having mixed emotions whether to applaude you or to beat you 😡 I was reading it for first time was in flow starting from prologue then after such amazing chapter 3 was craving for 4 then saw ur that pm post 😭 broke my flow of such an amazing story so you better PM right nowv 😡 otherwise will write another FF for you 😆

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Ilovecoffee
Eshu now I'm having mixed emotions whether to applaude you or to beat you 😡 I was reading it for first time was in flow starting from prologue then after such amazing chapter 3 was craving for 4 then saw ur that pm post 😭 broke my flow of such an amazing story so you better PM right nowv 😡 otherwise will write another FF for you 😆

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Ilovecoffee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Chapter 4 turned out as emotional rollercoster for me. Such sharply defined emotions of Ravish brought tears in my eyes 😭 😭

Brilliant Eshu 👏 👏 👏 looking forward for update 😊

Edited by Ilovecoffee - 8 years ago

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tia2105

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

eshu...i want the chapter 4 too...pls PM.

btw i read today only.u r such amazing story teller. loved the 3rd part and the poem 👍🏼

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mridula28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Won't you continue with the next chapter?

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: mridula28
Won't you continue with the next chapter?

Course not! My writings are my babies! And I am especially connected with this particular one.

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tia2105

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

interesting...i liked kalindi here.

like how u introduced new character...really diff and i really enjoyed...vivi n K bonding over K's pain.

cant wait fornthe nxt part.