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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm sorry I won't and can't read this! The first point is Sid getting a new girl and that too Sam is unacceptable for me. Second that I thought you would write on Sid and Sid alone. His feelings ,emotions , not him moving on with another girl. So I'm sorry for this too , I assumed a different thing and told you I was excited!

Rest the chapter was very well written and it seems like a good story but I can't seem to read ahead of this. Also if the girl would've been roshni it would have held a different charm. That's it! Thanks I liked reading it but I couldn't connect to it.

No hard feelings but I won't be reading further , Thanks!😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I also can't read this as I see show for nia or Roshni...
and in this you separated sidni...
lm in love with sidni only...
Siddhartha with another girl can't accepted...
sorry... its just I cant read it...
story is nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You really write well! 👍🏼
But I am very sorry too, I can't read this..sorry once again😳
But you are a very good writer and thank you for the pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U wrote it nicely..
Just one suggestion change Sam to Roshni did a look alike..of Roshni..😭..Its difficult to.read like sid falling for some other guy...
I can read but can't feel d connect...don't know..
I thought its sid aftermathafyer Roshni death..didnt knew it s totally different... Sorry..no hard feelings..I said its OK..for sid .but I can't see sid with any1 other than Roshni😭😭
Just change Sam to Roshni..and continue it..my suggestion😳😭😭
Sorry for hurtitnh u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow this dark stry is so intriguing and y do i feel there is loads of things hidden in u r stry i mean it has got many layers in it superb👏😉
if i am nt wrng u like intense stories dnt you wat this engagement saga now interesting carry

And i will read u r sty keeping aside JR plot and i really wanna read it more to😳

intense and the new moved on sid😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😭 I guess she got hurt😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot for ur lovely review dear.But I removed it as others are not okay to read a story without roshini as sid's partner.so I don't want to hurt their feeling by writing this story.So I will not write this story.But thanks a lot for the review dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scarlettkevin

Thanks a lot for ur lovely review dear.But I removed it as others are not okay to read a story without roshini as sid's partner.so I don't want to hurt their feeling by writing this story.So I will not write this story.But thanks a lot for the review dear.

U can write ant Sidni na😭 wil miss a awesome writer.. Like u...
Plssw😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its okay dear.No need to say sorry.You just expressed your thoughts.And I respect that.so no need to say sorry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scarlettkevin

Its okay dear.No need to say sorry.You just expressed your thoughts.And I respect that.so no need to say sorry.

Hm..pls pls pls write on SidNi pls😭😭
Mt request..

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