Baatein Ye Kabhi Na - OS (Part 3 - Last Part) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow churri u are super duper awesome writer am sure u will nt ley u r ravi dubey jaan to die continue soon👏😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3: (LAST PART)

Roshni is torn apart & blames herself for putting Sid through so much. She prays to god for Sid's recovery. She realizes that she needs to do something.

R - I have to get him out of this depression. But how am I supposed to do that. Each direction is trouble for him. Damn it!! How many more tests will you take of ours, God?!?!

The next day she goes to the hospital. She tries to see Sid again but no one lets her.

Mr. K - Yesterday, you said you don't know my son. You say you are not Roshni, but are Ragini Desai. Then why come here and make Sid suffer more? Get out!!

Roshni leaves again with tears. She has no idea as what she do. She is lost and right then, her Nani shows up.

R - Aap?
N - Roshni, I don't know why you are again doing this to Siddharth. But I know you have become like my Durga. Have you seriously forgotten everything that boy did for you and for your mom? Have you become the selfish one? Are you even happy without him in your life? I have not been around but I have heard everything from Kesar. I am ashamed to call you my grand-daughter.

Nani stammers off to see Sid. Roshni is left thinking about everything Nani just said.

R - Nani, how I wish I could tell you and everyone what is going on with me and how all I want is to keep Sid and all of you safe. You are right Nani, Sid has done so much for me and my family. I will never be able to repay him for that. I know he is hurting and I too am hurting. I am so alone without him. But I had to do what I did to protect Sid. He is my life, my soul, my world. If something were to happen to him, I would never be able to forgive myself. But now he is in this state and I am unable to figure out what I should do.

Roshni heads back home. Dev questions her.

D - Where the hell were, Roshni?
R - I...I was at the hospital visiting a dear friend.
D - Friend or that bas***d son of *****, Siddharth Khurana?
R - DEV?!? How dare you talk about him that way? He is my everything, I will do whatever it takes to protect him. You know that very well.
D - Is that so? Then I guess something should be done about Sid. If I had known you still had feelings for him, then I would never have brought him to our house that night. I first need to make sure you are never able to leave this house again.

Dev holds Roshni by the hair and drags her into a room. He locks her in there.

R - DEV!!!

The next morning, Kesar shares with Sid that Dev has held Roshni in the house and locked her in a room.

S - How dare he?!?
B - Sid, what are we going to do?
S - Bunty, I want you and Chachu go and call the police. I am going to go to Dev's house.

Sid reaches the house and like before climbs through the window of the room Roshni is in.

R - Tum?
S - Surprised?
R - You are supposed to be in the hospital?
S - Have you not learned anything about me?

Roshni has this confused look on her face.

S - Stop staring at me and first let's leave this place?
R - Fine!!

Sid and Roshni climb out of the window. Then they run and reach Sid's house. There Roshni sees everyone she had missed.

R - Wait!! What is going on??
S - (Laughs) You seriously think I would be drinking and turn into what Devdas? The whole cancer was a farse. I wanted to see how you react and have you tell me the truth. I know you were never Ragini but have always been my Roshni.
R - You have not changed one bit, have you? Who jokes about cancer? You idiot. I almost had a heart attack.
S - Jokes apart. I can't believe you left me like that. How could you do that to me? Was all this a payback for me being Raghu?
R - I...I am very very very Sorry Sid. I had no other choice. I wanted to protect you from all the negativity that surrounds me.
S - I know. Chachu told me everything. You could have come to me and told me. We are a team. We can take down anyone, when we are together. (Pauses and takes a deep breath)
S - Roshni, do have any idea how the last two years were like for me? I thought you were dead. My life had gone to a standstill. Everyone wanted me move on but how could I? You are always in my heart, in my soul and in my thoughts. I am nothing without you. I was living corpse. I would never have really drunk as that would kill your memories from within me.
R - I am so sorry Sid. I will never leave you ever again.
S - Promise?
R - Mein Vaada Karti Hoon.

They have reunited!!

Edited by ChurriCreationz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aw I loved this Churri. You are such a good writer👍🏼
Oh so Sid pretended, mera pagal Sid😆
I loved the SidNi part❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChejuuSidNi

Aw I loved this Churri. You are such a good writer👍🏼

Oh so Sid pretended, mera pagal Sid😆
I loved the SidNi part❤️


S1 he has done it a few times. Played with death...so how can in my S2 story he won't...lol!!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChurriCreationz


S1 he has done it a few times. Played with death...so how can in my S2 story he won't...lol!!😆

Haii😆ur right,in fact I hope he does it in S2 aswell😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChejuuSidNi

Haii😆ur right,in fact I hope he does it in S2 aswell😳


I am sensing that he might as I wrote, to get Roshni's attention. Because no matter how much arrogance she shows towards Sid, deep down Roshni will always love Sid. So if he was in grave danger and landed in hospital, it be impossible for her to stay away...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing story👏.. u really write well, do write more😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosesidni

Amazing story👏.. u really write well, do write more😃


Thanks Rose!! I try based on predictions. I might write one after SidNi finally come face to face or when Sid spots Roshni (Ragini)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dis was fabulous
Sidni together finally
Bt y u ended so soon
Write mre stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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churri l so knew it that u ca never make u jaan to suffer😛😆😉 i love u churrii loads🤗
super awesome end and do write more na whenever u can😳

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