Baatein Ye Kabhi Na - OS (Part 3 - Last Part)

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Sid and Roshni both are at the airport. They both are returning back to Mumbai. Roshni is a supermodel for Dev's company. She went to France for the show. Sid had also gone to France for a concert. But SidNi are not aware of the fact that they were in the same city at the time. Anways, as Roshni waits for Dev to come pick her up, Sid spots her. He knows its her. He has the biggest smile on his face.

S - Roshni? What she is doing here?

Sid runs towards her and is about to touch her shoulder when she gets up aburuptly and walks away from him. Dev has arrived to pick her up. Dev puts his arm around her and they are talking about something. Sid watches them from afar and tears come rolling down his cheeks. He is unable to fathom as to what he witnessed.

S - Roshni? How is it possible for you to forget our love? Everything we went through? Ok fine you are mad at me and have stopped loving me, but what about your family? After saasumom's death did it not ever occur to you as to how your family will be dealing with all? You left all of us...

Sid wipes away his tears and becomes adamant...

S - Fine. If that is how you want to play it then I too will see how long you are able to stay away from me and your family. But this time you will be the one to come to me. I will not chase you...

Days went by...Dev comes to Sid for a favor.

D - Mr. Khurana, I am having a party for the successful completion of my company's fashion show. I want you to be my guest of honor at my party. A business tycoon like you is very much needed at my party.
S - Mr. Dev, I am not much of a part of the business anymore. My jeejaji, Bunty handles the business now along with my dad. If you want I can ask them to attend the party.
D - Oh. I would love if your whole family comes to the party then.
S - Sure. I will let them know and we will be there.

That night Sid shares everything with his family. They agree to attend the party but to act as they don't know anything.

Party:

D - Welcome Khuranas.
S - Thank you!
D - Please come in and help yourself.

Roshni is a beuatiful white gown. Dev introduces her to everyone as his fiancee. They both smile at each other while Sid is completely shattered upon hearing it.

S - She really is moving on...I lost her for good this time.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SOessajf_Ik {With a glass of wine, Sid goes near a piano and sings this song}

R - This voice? Who is singing?
D - Oh that's Siddharth Khurana!

Upon hearing his name, Roshni's face is shocked, She did not expect to hear that name again. She finally comes face to face with the love of her life who she was ready to keep in her past and move on with Dev. All those memories of their times together came flooding back to her. Tears were welling up in her eyes. She saw her family, his family as well. At that moment she wanted to run into his arms. She wanted to go and get the blessings of his parents. But she knew she couldn't. Then she recalled the reason she had left everyone who she loved so very much, especially the love of her life.

FB:

A - You foolish girl. You seriously believed that your precious Sid killed your mom? No...Yash bhai did it but made it seem as Sid did. Now my bhai is no more either but he has successfully separated you two love birds.
R - You dog...no one can separate Sid and Roshni. No one, you understand!!
A - Wait and watch!!

Amol shows a video where it shows, Sid in danger.

R - SIDDHARTH!! What do you want??
A - If you want to save Sid then you have to go far far away from him and your family. You can't have any relation whatsoever with him. Bhai wanted him to suffer so he has to suffer one way or the other. Death or loss!!
R - (with tears in her eyes) Fine. I will leave him but you have to promise that no harm will come to him.
A - Deal! Just sign this agreement paper...

Roshni walks away.

R - I am sorry Siddharth. I love you so much. You have done so much for me and for my family. Now its my turn. I have to do whatever it takes to protect you and everyone. I hope one day you can forgive me.

Roshni leaves without informing anyone, not even Siddharth.

FB ends:

Roshni gathers herself and tries hard to control her feelings. Dev comes to her and asks her if she is ok. She says she is fine. Party ends...Sid leaves without Roshni but he leaves his heart with her.


Edited by ChurriCreationz - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very beautifully written👏 U could write this well, and till now didn't write FF or SS😲😲 Continue this one soon😛
And edit ur title and add SidNi SS/ FF/ OS, so that it doesn't get unnoticed in the crowed of other posts.. waiting for the next part and I really wish this happened in the show
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..u write brilliantly..
Y don't u continue this into ts or ff it would be awesome..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You guys are so nice...I'll try to continue it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this is so emotional and cute😛I never read anything by you before..This is amazing and you are a very good writer to be honest! Please continue soon..Poor SidNi❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2: (NOT SURE IF IT LINKS WELL WITH THE FIRST PART; Let me know if something is off & I will edit it)

Roshni goes to the home she knew in search for her family and get information about Sid.

Person - yes? May I help you? Who are you looking for?

Roshni shocked to see an unknown person at her house.

R - Um. This is my house. Who are you?
P - Are you Roshni? Roshni Patel?
R - Yes. (With a confused look)
P - Sorry but the Patels don't live here anymore. They live with Sid Khurana, your ex-husband.

Roshni shocked to hear her family have sold their house and are living with Sid.

R - oh um, do you have the address?
P - yes, one second.

The Person gives Roshni the address. She goes there and hides herself when she sees Sid coming out and leaving. She goes in afterwards. Kesar Chachu opens the door.

K - Roshni, tum? What are you doing here? Oh Sorry I should Ms. Patel.
R - Chachu? Why are you...um...can I come inside.
K - come.
Resham - Kesu...who came? It's a Roshni.
R - haha! Chachi you have not changed.
Rm - but you have. You left all of us, you left Sid.
K - you didn't do right by him.
R - I...I should go.

Roshni runs out. Knowing she can't say a word as to why she did what she did. She walks on the street alone. She recalls all that Sid had done for her family. How he never thought about himself, only thought about others.

R - I can't put Sid or my family in anymore trouble. I have to keep my charade on. If I re-enter Sid's life, I'm afraid Sid will suffer more. Amol is out of the picture so is Yash. But there is Dev...yes he has been a great friend to me and helped me deal with being away from my love. However, he told me...

FB:

R - (looks at an old pic of SidNi) I am so sorry Sid. I know I put you through hell. But seeing you tonight was like I could breath again. You have not changed. I hope one day you are able to forgive me. I truly love you Sid. I never stopped.
D - Roshni?

Roshni wipes her tears away.

R - Dev, I...
D - That's enough Roshni. I understand your pain. Please get some rest. Don't worry about all this. Everything will work out.

Dev leaves. Later, Roshni hears Dev talking to someone on the phone.

D - I don't care what you do, but Sid and Roshni can't be together. Roshni is now my fianc. She is mine...keep an eye out for Sid...I'll kill him if he comes anywhere near Roshni.

R - OMG! No, I can't let anything happen to Sid. I left to protect him from any and all harm. I have to keep my distance.

FB ends:

R - I wish I can hug him again and tell him everything.

Days went by. Dev takes Roshni out on a date in an expensive restaurant. She sees Sid from afar. She acts as if she didn't see him. He sees her. He looks at her with love in his eyes. A song plays and Roshni dreams of dancing with Sid. The dream breaks with a scream.

R - Sid!!
Bartender - Sir? Someone call an ambulance.

Sid is taken to the hospital. He is given tests. Roshni is there worried with Dev with her. The families come and get totally angry on her, even Mr. K. Roshni is asked to leave.

Mr. K - You have done enough damage already, please don't do anymore.

Roshni thinks to herself.

R - I left to protect him but he is still suffering. I stay with him he suffers. I leave him he sufffers. What am I going to do?
K - Roshni?
Rm - You still love him, don't you?
R - Chachi...yes...no...I...
Rm - Please tell us what happened.
K - We know you can't be like this. That to for such a long time.

Roshni tells everything to Kesar and Resham. How Amol threatened her and now Dev is threatening to kill Sid.

K - But Sid is already dying.
R - what are you talking about?
K - Ever since you left and Sid found about your supposed death, he lost his mind. He concentrated on DD Jewelers and SR Jewelers. He looked after all of us. But he also sunked into alcohol. Then he saw you at the airport and you totally ignored him. He had fainted after you left. We took him to the hospital and then we found out about his...
R - what happened to Sid? Kesar Chachu please tell me...
K - Sid has cancer. Which is why he wanted to see you at the party. He then drank much more that night knowing you are not his anymore.

Edited by ChurriCreationz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG! My poor Sid has cancer😲😒Poor Roshni
Continue soon,really excited for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChejuuSidNi

OMG! My poor Sid has cancer😲😒Poor Roshni

Continue soon,really excited for next part


Got the idea seeing him in the kitchen bar in the promo...it looked as if there could be a possibility of him drinking excessively due to the loss two most important people in his life...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg lovely story
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Both d updates r fabulous continue soon

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