SidNi Drabble: Improving Perfection Is Tough!

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SidNi Drabble : Improving perfection is tough!


"Siddharth!!" her voice made him get up furiously and he wiped the sweat that had come up on his face ,he looked around.


She was nowhere as he scanned the room ,he became frightened. Where had she gone? He wasn't going to lose her like his dream ,or rather nightmare.


"Roshni!!" he called out ,that was when he realised he wasn't in his bed anymore. He glanced all around ,freaking hell it was an hospital.!


His head felt dizzy as he tried recalling how he ended up here in first place. A hand came up on his forehead and he felt all his worries going away.


"Siddharth how are you feeling now?" her cute face came hovering over him and he tried to pull her face down to kiss her.


"Mr. Siddharth ,please behave yourself. Just because I am talking nicely doesn't mean you can do anything on my place of work." she said rather threateningly.


He backed out while she checked him and turned to the nurse asking her to leave the two of them alone.


As soon as the nurse went off she turned to the girl standing across her. "Ma'am your husband is fine now ,you can meet him."


Siddharth looked rather amused ,he started to laugh his head off as Roshni started to talk with her mirror self.


"Oh thank you Dr. Roshni. You have been a constant support!" Roshni spoke looking in the mirror pretending like the patient's wife.


"It's nothing really ,as they say you have to love your patient to believe him to be completely fine." Roshni said leaning in to kiss her husband.


"Uh-uh. Don't you think I maybe cheating my wife standing in the same room if I kiss you?" he asked cheekily looking at the mirror.


"Well you see this kiss is just your medicine. Let me do my job." she said finally and their lips met finally. After around 48 hours of struggle Roshni felt free.


Her tears made way to his mouth as they were kissing pouring their love and pain. Siddharth broke the kiss upon feeling something salty on his lips.


"Baby ,I am fine now. Please don't cry! I am not gonna die as long as my hot-shot sexy doc wife is here to save me." he said half-joking and half-thankful to have her in his life.


"I was so scared Siddharth ,my hands were shaking while operating you. You have no idea how I.." she choked on her words as she remembered his unconscious state again.


He gathered her in his arms preventing her to go back through the same pain. She sunk deeper in him ,trying to calm herself down.


"You were quite a good joker sometime back when you were talking to your mirror self. " he said and she smiled through her tears.


"Quite a nice way to ease out the tension of your lover getting up from the clutches of death!" Roshni said slowly and a bit embarrassed.


He laughed and pulled her up on his lap. They kept on talking ,joking and nudging each other ,not really caring how much time passed by.


He had her and she had him ,they both knew any other situation just didn't work!!


Afterall improving perfection was tough and they were perfect.!


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Hope this one made sense and wasn't all nonsense. Also I got no better title😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice atleast it is better than the crappy storyline we seeing right now
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Originally posted by: stephie34

Nice atleast it is better than the crappy storyline we seeing right now


Thanks..ya I atleast know it is better than the current track!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was nice nd sweet nd short too..I liked it...roshni s doc..sidni r cute..it was cute..
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Originally posted by: Purni12

It was nice nd sweet nd short too..I liked it...roshni s doc..sidni r cute..it was cute..


Thank you!!😊 glad u found it cute ,yup it was short and sometimes they should be kept short..😉
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Thank u so much!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww Aayu this was so cute.. 😊
Its a million tines better than the current track..
Roshni looking in the mirror to ease her pain is so cute.. and Siddarth laughing at her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was so sweet. Enjoyed it a lot!
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Originally posted by: ChejalMerai

Aww Aayu this was so cute.. 😊
Its a million tines better than the current track..
Roshni looking in the mirror to ease her pain is so cute.. and Siddarth laughing at her


Thanks alot yaar!😊 glad you liked the mirror scene ,I thought it was stupid..😆
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Thanks!😊

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