SidNi FF : Mil Gaya Mera pyaar!!! - updated final part in page 87) - Page 57

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: skinnypal

abi!! sorry for late reply.. but i read this part the moment u updated it!! Poor sid everyone is irritating him.. not fair..it was supposed to be sid v/s roshni not sid v/s everyone else!! hehe... i liked the family scene in the breakfast table... but the best part was the party... how sid entered and then sidni dance.. the song... its description... it was all perfect... and u wrote it well... how they forgot that they were dancing in front of all and just got lost into each other... i loved this part... update the next one soon abi ❤️🤗




no need to sry Pal... I know ur exams are nearing😛😊
Sid Vs Roshni only... What can we do, they all Roshni's drum beaters😆😆😆
Happy that u loved it Pal... Thank u so much 🤗❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mybelovedsidni

awesome dear!!!
i loved it,how you have written...


thank u so much dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 18:

"U came here for me na Siddharth?" she asked cupping his face.

"Who said? I came here for Yash" he replied with a smirk holding her waist.

"I know well that u came for me only and very happy too. But I'll be EVEN MORE happy if u confessed that u came here for me" she said looking at his eyes holding his shoulders.

"Achha... then be happy EVEN MORE" he winked and left the place leaving a happily stunned blushing Roshni behind.

She spent her happiest time with her friends and reached her home soon while Yash also followed her.

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In Roshni's room...

It was almost mid night and everyone went to sleep while Sid silently sneaking towards Roshni's room, "She might be slept now" he speaking to himself and opened the door. "Why she is sleeping in so dark? Not even a night lamp is ON?" he wondered worriedly and switched on the night lamp that was in corner of her bed. He saw the kid Sid also sleeping there. "Yeh choto bomb ya Roshni ki chamchi... kabhi dekho Roshni ke sath, Roshni ke sath and leaving no space for me" he said silently sitting on her bed. "Aaj tum kitni sundar thi Roshni!!! Wish I could spend some more time with u there but I came back soon whether I'ld get defeated in that challenge... POOR ME hai na" he whispered near her. "But why are u closing ur face with blanket and sleeping my love... my Roshni is getting so many new habits now - a - days" he sighed caressing the blanket that covered face area. "I wanna see ur beautiful face again" he said smilingly and slowly uncovered the blanket... Within a second, he shocked and shouted, "AA AA HH HH HH" seeing the person inside it... "BOOOM" shouted Yash and came out of the blanket and laughing uncontrollably. Roshni who was standing watching everything hiding behind the shelf also came out laughing madly holding her stomach. Yash gave her a hi5 and she too gave him back. Siddharth who was still sitting there was blinking in shock that he has been fooled by these friends...

"Aww SO POOR ME" said this Yash teased him more seeing a happily laughing Roshni. "Tum dhono ko bahut maza aatha na mujhe thang karne se" he said angrily. "Aley hum kya karo Siddharth? U came urself and get trapped into a lioness's den" she said sweetly with a puppy face. He got up frm the place angrily and left the room. "Roshni... dekho na isse" said Yash seeing Sid going out from the room. "I know how to handle him... Acha, u sleep here with this baby itself Yash, I'll take another room after getting him back onto my TRACK" said this she left the room...

She was searching for him all over the house and saw him walking near the swimming pool tensed... She slowly walked behind him and hugged him from back, "Isme tension hone ki kya bath hai?" she said pressing herself tightly resting her face on his shoulders from back. He pulled her hands and made her stand before him, "Don't talk to me... U and ur gang always having fun and ragging me altogether anytime" he said angrily looking at the other side but not her face.

"Arey? Is this called ragging? Yash was just playing with u. And u taking kid's words so seriously? He is so childish and sometimes will behave like that only. Ab mujhe dekho na" she said cupping his face.

"No... u go and spend time with them alone. Leave me" he said taking her hands frm his face and walked.

She interrupted his way, "But I wanna spend time with u now. See, I was waiting in my room without even changing this party dress planning to take a selfie with u in this suit, but u ignoring me" she said cutely circling her hands around his neck.

"U always care about that mini bomb and ur BESSSTTT friend Yash only... Jao na, they'll be waiting for u. Take selfie, groupie and enjoy with themselves" he said and again walked ignoring her.

"teek hai... jao but I mistakenly locked ur room and took the key also" she winked showing the key to him rotating on her fingers playfully. "Kya... Roshni give it to me" he said.

"catch me if u can and get the keys" she said and started to run around the pool. He also running behind her but poor boy can't catch her so easily. He stopped running and smirked looking at her, "I know how to get back the key" he mumbled and, "ROSHNI" he shouted. She slowly turned to look at him falling into the pool in backward motion stretching his arms freely in air. "SIDDHARTH" she shouted worryingly and jumped into the pool without thinking twice.

They both swam around each other for few seconds till Roshni caught his hands inside the water. She pulled him and they paused near the clamp holding each other's hands and resting their head side ways in the clamp breathing heavily. After few seconds, he started "pagal hoon tum, I know swimming then why u jumped into it?" he said winking at her with a smirk.

"Ur head is already injured and moreover, the crack in ur right hand is still not cured properly. U can't be carefull uh?" she burst moving lil close to him. He went silent and his smile vanished in a second... He covered the very least distance between them cupping her face, "u know how badly I missed and missing all these? No one can be more caring and aware of every single bit of mine like u do... even I forgotten about this injuries and all"

She pulled him into her embrace tightly circling her arms around his neck, "I missed u too Siddharth" she said kissing his cheeks and hugged him even more tightly again. "I luv U Roshni" he confessed finally...

Her eyes went moist hearing his words... He parted frm the hug and looked at her face. "I don't want to see these tears. I want to see you happily smiling and laughing any time. And that's why I came to party. Only for U ROSHNI" he said and pulled her waist to seal his lips with her. He kissed her lips so passionately and she closed her eyes enjoying his kiss. His hands were roaming all over her body and their burning desires for each other growing high with every second. She also started to kiss him back reflecting the same intensity and passion pulling his face and pressing him more into her. After a few seconds, they parted frm each other to catch some breath. His lips travelled lower to her chin... he kissed her neck and nuzzled. Breath hitched in her throat and she held him tightly stretching backwards giving him proper access to his kiss. His lips travelled down to her upper breast while his hands slowly unzipping her dress frm back. He buried his head into her breast and they both sinking into their love increasing the temperature of water in the pool where they still standing inside. She lost her strength to stand properly and clutched his shirt more tightly when his hands caressed all over back restlessly. He saw her finding difficulty to stand and noted her shivering lips. He caressed her lips, "hum andar jana hai" he whispered and took her into his arms. She burried her head into his chest blushing hardly. He was enjoying her flushed face, "U look so hot now" he whispered in her ears, looking at her dress and carried her to their room. He placed her softly on the bed and they made love the whole night as they themselves were unknown when fall asleep.

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Early morning rays of sun fell on his eyes and he woke up first to see his angel sleeping in his arms. He leaned forward and peck her lips softly, "This is the best morning in my life Roshni. Too see u sleeping next to me when I wake up every morning was like a dream for me till yesterday. Thank u so much for giving me this happiness" he whispered and pushing the hair strands behind her ear as that disturbed his view to see her face fully. Suddenly he felt someone jumping onto the bed and felling on him, "Ssshhh... Don't disturb, Roshni is sleeping" whispered chota Sid removing his fingers that was playing with her hair. "Arey... when u came here? And why?" he asked. "Roshni left me alone with Yash and he is snoring urr urrr' mujhe bahut dar laga" he said in a very low voice.

"this 2 boys na!!! always there to spoil my romantic life readily" he thought. "Ok u sleep here itself" said Siddharth and made the kid to lie next to him. "I won't sleep Siddharth. Now only I wake up na" replied the kid. "arey meri mini bomb see me and Roshni still sleeping na, u also sleep" he said. "U are so lazy & so sleeping till 8. I am a busy boy. Roshni said to me, only lazy people will sleep till 8. U r lazy U r lazy" said the kid clapping his hands and giggled teasing him. "Acha? Mein lazy hoon? Then ur Roshni? She is also lazy" he said sarcastically. "Roshni was so busy yesterday. She went to party, did so many works and she is very tired also. That's y she is sleeping. U only lazy boy" the kid giggled again. Roshni woke up already hearing the kid's clapping sound and enjoying their morning fight silently. "Oh!!! Ur Roshni is busy and tired but mein lazy hoon. Wait wait I'll let u sleep with Yash today night also" he fight with him back. "NO... Yash scaring me. I won't sleep with him" said the kid hugged him out of fear. He laughed hugging him back and kissed his cheeks. "U guys started in morning itself?? Give some break na" she said stretching her hands and yawning.

"He only started to fight with me yaar" complained Siddharth. "No Roshni... he only. See now also I said don't shout, but he talked so loudly and u wake up" the kid also complained back. "Acha!!! U only giggled & clapped soundly and now complaining me?" he said.

"AAHHH... Can u guys stop it? Finger on ur lips and lie down silently" she ordered and went inside bathroom angrily mumbling, "GOD!!! Save me na... How I am going to live between this two loud speakers?"

They both followed her order and lied silently keeping fingers on their lips. "Bcoz of u she scolded me" said the kid in very low voice without removing fingers frm lip. "No... that's bcoz of U" replied Siddharth the same way.

"What noise again?" she shouted frm bathroom. "No Roshni... this Siddharth only talking to me. I am sleeping already" the kid replied covering himself under a blanket and Sid was laughing at the kid's insensible lie.

Hope u enjoyed it frnds😃😳 If I can manage with a longest update, then probably next onw would be the last update of this FF I think😊 Now waiting to read ur reviews and suggestions now

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yayyy...i m firsttt😆 abi how can yu write this cute nd romantic update...how???? It was da,n cute nd most romantic update...😃 No words...i m running short of words😃😳 ur writing was brilllaimt...n magnificent..,😳 loved it to d core...starting frm how sid sneaked inti d room...ragging,.how cute angry sid was...awww...rosh also...she wanted a selfie..awww...it was damn cute,,...,d way sid fell...rosh went inti d pool...nd rosh was angry on sid,..aww..it was damn cute,,nd sid dialogue that u r sucha caring person ..i love u...was so cute...md d hot romance after that...awww...we all wamted a poolside romance ..nd we git one,,..i m so happy😳😳
Though we didnt get in jr...i could visualise this...d last convi was damn Hilarious...d way sid says yash nd u always come in betwwen sidni romance...😆.so next wil be last update...hm..wil miss this one..😭😭.anywaspys..all has a end..waiting fir d next update...😳😳
Edited by Abinaya12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Last update ,how can you do this Abi??😭😭 think about me how will I live without chotu sid😳
The update was Fab ,the way they resolved the fight was so so awesome and amazing..in the pool
Before that also yash and chotu sid again teasing him lol ,the crazy group of friends..😆 and siddharth getting angry saying u take selfie ,groupie anything with them haha he is such a kid sometimes😉
And then the morning scene aww that was wonderful ,finger on your lips🤣
Sid and chotu sid ke banters are so fun to read!
Don't end it na abi..🥺 you are taking my love away from me!❤️
Waiting for next BTW and hoping it won't be last..!
Edited by Starsfireflies - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow abhi finally sidni tashan ended here at least😆 best part was it ended with blanket word in it😛
enjoyed it a lot abhi superb👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏...brilliant as always finally they are back together and I'm finding little Sid quiet entertaining
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Posted: 9 years ago
FANTASTIC UPDATE DEAR.
LOVEE IT.
IT WAS SO SO CUTE , ROMANTIC AND SWEET UPDATE.
REALLY ENJOYED THE WHOLE UPDATE.
ONCE AGAIN FULL OF ENTERTAINING AND PAISA WASOOL UPDATE.
LOVES UR WRITING SKILL.
WOW THE TRICK WHICH ROSHNI AND YASH PLAYED WAS SO FUNNY AND POOR SID FALL INTO IT.
LOVES HOW SID GOT IRRITATED BY YAH AND SMALL SID AND COMPLAINED ABOUT IT TO ROSHNI JUST LIKE KID.
WORDS WHICH HE USED FOR SMALL SID WERE AWESOME AND FUNNY CHOTA BOMB AND ROSHNI KI CHAMACHI HA HA.
LOVED ROSHI AND SID CONFESSION.
POOL PART WAS REALLY SUPERB AND LOVED SIDNI ROMATIC MOMENTS.
THEIR MORNING WAS BLISSFUL IN EACH OTHER ARMS.
LOVES SMALL KID CUTENESS SO MUCH. REALLY HE IS VERY POSSESSIVE OF ROSHNI AND CALLED SID AS LAZY. HAHA.
LOVES THE WAY HOW ROSHNI MADE THEM BOTH KEEP QUIET.
DEAR PLZ DONT ENDTHIS STORY SOON AS EVERY PART I AM ENJOYING A LOT.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 🤢
Edited by sandhYA_123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg Abi such a romantic update! And you fulfilled our long pending wish and gave Pool romance and that was really hot! I am thinking of going back and read the part again 😆 It was so romantic. Yash and Roshni teased him and the way Sid was behaving like a Sid infant of Roshni was hilarious. Both of them are cute. Last part was cute! Chotu Sid coming in and disturbing Roshni lol 😆 You are gonna end the story 😭 I will miss the story but you have to start a new story 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
really nice update.
Sidni reunited finally.loved how Yash and Roshni teased Sid.
and little Sid also disturbed their romance.

continue soon please.

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