JPSYA - FF - Episode 2 - Pg 2 - New Part Up..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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JAANE PEHCHANE SE YE AJNABBI

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episode 1 - pg 1
episode 2 - pg 2

EPISODE 1

Daadi: Ayesha, meri bahu kitna sundar lag rahi hai iss normal si chudidaar mein !! Haaye.. Kinni soni lag rahi hai. Pata hai tumhe ayesha, ki tum bilkul ek pari lag rahi ho.. Lo... Mein ab bataa hi rahi hoon.. Ayesha sirf meri bahu hai. Sirf meri. Koi nahi rok paayega ayesha aur dhruv ki shaadi ko.

Kamini: Yeh kaise ho sakta hai ? Aur yahan yeh kya ho raha hai ?

Daadi: Aap kaun hai ?

Ayesha and nihal are shocked to see Kamini there. Veer is having a disgusted expression on his face, while avni and kay, along with daadi looked confused, with Dhruv shocked.

Kamini: Yeh mera ghar hai. Shayad mujhe aap se poochna hai ki, aap kaun hai ?

Dhruv: Kamini ji, yeh meri daadi hai.. [gets angry to see kamini talking roughly to daadi]
He turns back to daadi and starts talking to her, controlling himself.

Dhruv: Daadi, yeh veer ki mom hai.

Avni, out of the blue, gets all hyper active and hugs kamini immediately, making kamini burn with anger. Kamini decently unhugs avni. But avni is avni. She opens her good for nothing mouth even before Kamini starts talking..

Avni: Maa ji, mein aap ko yahan dekh ke bohot khush hoon.. Yeh achcha hua ki aap shaadi se pehle hi aagayi... [She was about to continue but kamini cuts her]

Kamini: Look Ms. Mujhe nahi pata aap kaun hai ya kiss ke rishtedaar hai. Magar mein aap [daadi] se yeh poochna chahti hoon.. ki.. aap ne ayesha ko apna bahu kyun kaha ?

Avni is shocked to get such a reply from kamini. For the first time in her life, she is not the one behaving with load a hell of attitude. Somebody else is talking to her in that way.

Daadi: Lo ji.. Ab mein apni bahu ko apni nahi kahoongi toh aap ki thodi kahoongi. Hai na.

Kamini: Dekhiye, shayad aap ko koi galat fehmi ho gaya hai. Aap ayesha ko shagun nahi de sakti... [Daadi cutting inbetween]

Daadi: Arey kyun nahi de sakti ji, arey.. Maine toh aap ka mann pad liya hai. Aap ko jealousy ho rahi hai na.. Aap bhi apni bahu, avni [pointing towards the lambi chudail] ko shagun dena chahti hai na ? Dont worry ji. Mere paas extra shagun hai..

Kamini [Laughing sarcastically] [pointing towards avni] Yeh aur meri bahu ? Hahaha.. Yeh toh MERI bahu nahi hai. Naa kabhi bann sakti hai.. Meri bahu toh ayesha hai. Aap ayesha ko issiliye shagun nahi de sakti kyun ki, maine sirf shagun hi nahi, balki apni kaandaani kadi aur payal bhi ayesha ko de diya tha. Infact, veer aur ayesha ki sagaayi bhi saare rasmon ke saath saath hui hai. Aise, do, teen logon ke beech mein nahi.. Poore shehar ke saam ne hui hai. Maafi chahti hoon.. Magar aap mere bahu ko aur bilkul tang nahi karenge. Aap ka pota dhruv bohot achcha ladka hai. Mein chahti hoon ki, usko ek achchi si dulhan mill jaaye. Filhal, mein itna chahti hoon ki, aap sabhi log mere bete aur bahu ko naa tang karein. [moving closer to ayesha] dekha aap ne, ayesha kitni pareshan ho gayyi hai. uss ke aankh bohot laal ho chuke hai. mujhe lagta hai ki uss ko ab aaram karne ki zaroorat hai.

Daadi: Toh woh sab sach tha.. Joh aap log uss din keh rahein the !!

Dhruv: Haan daadi. Sab sach tha. Magar aap uss avni ke baaton mein aa kar, aap ne sabhi logon ko dhuk kiya.

Daadi: Mujhe maaf kardeejiye ga. Mein ek ghar ko todne jaa rahi thi. Aur iss ladki avni, sach jaante hue bhi, besharam jaise, mujhe galat raasta dikha rahi thi.

Daadi leaves uttering this and dhruv follows her. Avni remains shocked.

Avni (Maine kyun sach ko nahi maana. Pagalon ki tarah, mein veer ke paas baar baar kyun gayi thi ? Jab ki woh, kyud mere paas nahi aana chahta tha ?)

Kamini: Ms. Avni, I guess, aap ne bhi sunn liya.. Mera beta aap se nahi, ayesha se pyaar karta hai. I am sorry agar aap ko iss sach sunn ke bohot taqleef pohonchi hogi. Sorry..

Avni storms away, taking shocked kay along with her. Nihal is scared at the sight of his once, scary daadi and has hid behind ayesha's dhupatta all the time.

Ayesha: Kamini aunty...

Kamini: Kuch mat kaho beta. Aaj mein kehna chahti hoon. Mujhe pata hai ki mere kiye hue kaam maafi maangne ki layak nahi hai... Mein ek khooni hoon. Magar maine apni galti realize kar liya hai. Veer, please apni maa ko itna nafrat se mat dekho. Mein tum logon se bohot pyaar karti hoon. Please mujhe maaf kar do.

She falls on her knees. Veer turns away, remembering about all the things she has done to ayesha, his brother and bhabhi.. and indirectly to nihal. His jaw tightens at the thought of forgiving her. But ayesha moves towards kamini and catches her by her shoulder and stops her from collapsing..

Ayesha: Kamini ji, please control yourself. Joh hamare haathon se hat chuka hai, hum uss ke liye kuch nahi kar sakte, joh beeth chuka hai, woh beeth chuka hai. Magar future important hai. Aap ko apni galti ka ehsaas hua hai, aur aap sorry feel kar rahi hai. Ab isse jzyada humein aur kuch nahi chahiye.

Kamini: Ayesha, tum ne mujhe maaf kiya na.. Naajaane maine tumhare saath kya kya nahi kiya ? Mein bohot galat thi.. Please mujhe maaf karo beta..

Ayesha: Sirf maine nahi Kamini ji.. Veer aur nihal ne bhi aap ko maaf kardiya. Aur agar nahi kiya, toh zaroor karenge..

Veer gets angry at ayesha too and walks away.. Kamini gets tears seeing her son walking away getting angry at her.

Kamini: Ayesha, thanks for forgiving me beta. Shayad mujhe ab yahan se jaana chahiye..

Ayesha: Kahan jaana chahte hai aap ? Yeh aap ka ghar hai. Aap yahan hi rahengi. Aap mujhe apna bahu maante hai na.. Toh yahi sahi.. Aap ki bahu chahti hai, ki aap apne kamre mein jaa ke aaram kare. Okay.

Kamini nods and ayesha escorts kamini to the room in which she used to stay. She tells kamini that, she will be back in a few moments.

VEER'S ROOM:

Ayesha: Veer !!

Veer: Ayesha, tumhe pata hai tum ne kya kiya ? Tum ne USS AURAT ko yahan rokne ko kahan.. Tum itni asaani se usse kaise maaf kar sakti ho ?

Ayesha: Veer, first of all, cool down. Please yahan baito shanti se..

She makes veer sit on the corner of the bed and settles herself on the carpet, and kneels down infront of him.

Veer; AYESHA..

Ayesha: Chup.. Bilkul chup ho jao ab.. Chup chaap meri baat suno. Veer, mein maanti hoon ki, she is not someone we can forgive easily. She has infact spoilt all our lives. She is the sole reason why we and our hotel was in debts. But veer, ek baar socho.. Woh tumhari maa hai. She made you big. She was there by your side every moment you wanted her.. needed her. Veer, mujhe nahi pata ki aap donon ke beech mein rishta kitna gehra hai. Magar jab bhi jeeju apne maa ke baare mein baat karte the, unke chehre par ek smile aajata tha. Woh kamini ji se bohot pyaar karte hai. Veer, agar maine aaj unn ko maaf kiya toh, woh sirf issiliye kyun ki, she bought you and jeeju up with great values, love and extreme care. You should not forget those years veer. Meri mom meri birth hone ke 1 hafte ke baad guzar gayi thi. Maa ke bina mein kitna akeli thi, yeh toh sirf mujhe pata hai.

Veer, maine unn ke aankhon mein gulit dekha hai. And dont forget, she saved us from that chudail and dhruv's daadi. She returned me back to you. Unhonne aaj hum donon ko officially accept kiya. Can't we make a happy family ? Can't we forget everything and live to the fullest ? Nihal aur Arav ko daadi ka pyaar milega, Tumhe aur nandini ko mom aur kya pata.. mujhe bhi unn mein ek maa mill jaaye ? Veer, rishte todna bohot aasaan hai magar unka asar bohot hota hai.. hamare life par.. Veer tum samajh rahe ho na..

Veer: Ayesha, na jaane mere dillodimaag mein yeh pehle kyun nahi aaya tha ? Maine unn ke saath kitna rude behave kiya tha ? Gosh.. Mom kahan hai ?

Ayesha: Apni room mein fresh ho rahi hai..

Veer: Theek hai.. Tum un ko dinning table taq lao.. Baaki ka mein sambhal loonga.

Ayesha: Good.. Achcha hua tum samajh gayye. Ab mein chalti hoon..

Ayesha will be leaving to make nihal fresh up but veer holds her hand and pulls her towards himself. He holds her tight in his arms and whispers..

Veer: Ayesha, thanks.. Agar aaj tum nahi hoti toh.. Dont know what i would have done..

Ayesha; Yeh tum thanks thanks kya laga rakhe ho ? Haan..

Veer: Okay sorry..

Ayesha: Ab sorry kyun ?

Veer: Thanks bolne ke liye..

Ayesha: Veer.. Maaroongi tumhe.. Din pe din badmash hote jaa rahe ho..

Veer: Love you..

Ayesha: Love you too..

END OF EPISODE 1

PRECAP: Kamini discloses about how she realized and when. A cute family patch up at the dinning table. Kamini to announce veesha's marriage. Some VeeSha moments..
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Its superb !!! So cute !!! I wish CVs thought like this !
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alice this FF is superb your story is better than cvs
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superb !!!! I wish the cv's had read ur FF n saved us frm Avni-Daadi torture .
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Thanks a lot for the comments friends. Updating soon. Stay tuned..
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kamini: yeh meri bahu ayesha???????
avni: maa ji?????????

how is it?😕

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Originally posted by: Alice.Cullen

Thanks a lot for the comments friends. Updating soon. Stay tuned..



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Originally posted by: sddh

kamini: yeh meri bahu ayesha???????
avni: maa ji?????????

how is it?😕

lol😆



LOL.. I was pretty angry with avni while writing.. Just to show her dumbness. I was so tired to see her not accepting the truth. Issiliye thoda dumbness dikhaya uss ki. Her desperateness to get good remarks from kamini.. the killer.. LMAO..
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KAMINI'S ROOM:

Ayesha: Aunty, dinner lag chuki hai. Chaliye.

Kamini: Thanks for everything beta. Chalo.

DINNING TABLE:

Ayesha (shouting): Nihal !! Veer !! Khana lag chuka hai. Jaldi neeche aajao please.

Nihal: Mein aagayya massi. (he then keeps his face down when he looks at kamini. he remembers all the events and each and every word she spoke to him. he was scared to see her there. he was insecure because, he is thinking she wants to seperate his chachu and massi. the feelings are still fresh in his young heart and mind and ayesha notices this.)

Ayesha: Pata hai nihal, aaj tumhara favourite gajar ka halwa bhi hai.

Nihal: wow massi. aap best ho.

Ayesha: pata hai.. magar tumhara chachu abhi taq aaya kyun nahi ?

She shouts his name again and veer appears. He keeps fiddling with his hands until he reaches the table, with discomfort written on his face. Kamini looks up to him with an apologising face. While he decides it is the right time to talk to her.

Veer: Mom, aap ne joh kiya soh kiya. Mein past ko wapas kar ke bhaiyya aur bhabhi ko wapas nahi la sakta na aap la saktey hai. Lekin sab se achchi baat yeh hai ki, aap ne mere aur ayesha ki relationship ko dill se accept kiya. Aap ko yeh ehsaas ho gayya ki, aap ne joh kiya woh bohot galat tha. Mein aap ko forgive kar raha hoon aur ummeed karta hoon ki aap aage kabhie bhi aise kaam naa karein. Agar aap kissi se bhi galat pesh aayenge, shayad mein aap ko phir se kabhi maaf nahi kar paoonga.

Kamini: Thank you so much veer. Thanks ayesha. Mein aap logon ko deserve hi nahi karti.

Ayesha: Aunty, aap please aise baatein mat keejiye. Lets forget everything now. Hum phir se sab kuch shuru karenge. sab theek hoga. Past ko bhool ne ki koshish karenge.

Kamini: Meri ek sharat hai.

Ayesha: Kaun si sharat ?

Kamini: Tum mujhe aunty nahi.. Maa kahogi. Kyun ki kal tum donon ki shaadi ki tareeq nikalwa rahi hoon mein. Bahuein apni saas ko maa hi keh kar bulati hai beta. Ab se sirf nandini hi nahi... tum bhi meri beti ho. Okay.

Ayesha: Ji maa.

Everybody have their dinner. Ayesha allows kamini to sit beside nihal. Kamini tries to interact with nihal but he maintained distance and did not respond in a normal way.

MORNING, AYESHA'S ROOM:

Kamini: Ayesha, beta utt jao. Subah 6 baj rahi hai.

Ayesha wakes up, still with sleepy eyes..

Ayesha: Arey maa aap.. yahan... Mein.. Woh..

Kamini: Arey... Tum safayi kyun de rahi ho ? Ab chalo.. Jaldi jaldi nahaa kar, yeh joh saree hai na table par, usse pehen lo. Aaj hum tumhari aur veer ki shaadi ke liye date nikalwa rahein hai na, pundit ji 8 baje aayenge.

Ayesha: Ok maa.

Kamini: Aur haan.. Tum veer aur nihal ke liye chinta mat karo. Mein unhein uthaoongi.

Kamini wakes veer up and goes to nihal's room.

NIHAL'S ROOM:

Kamini: Nihal, beta utho. Aaj massi aur chachu ki shaadi ko pakki karne ke liye pundit ji aa rahein hai. Tumhe ab jaldi tayar ho kar unke saath rehna hai, unn ke liye wedding card bhi toh tumhe hi choose karna hai na..

Nihal wakes up when he hears his daadi's voice. He finds himself alone in the room, with his daadi beside him which scares him the most but he feels better to hear about his massi and chachu's wedding.

Nihal: Aaj massi aul (aur) chachu ki wedding date set hoga ? Phil (phir) toh mujhe sab se pehle tayal (tayar) hona hai.. (sleepy voice)

Kamini: Bilkul sahi kahan beta tum ne. Chalo mein tumhari madad karti hoon. Pata hai, maine tumhare liye naye kapde bhi laaya hai. Woh dekho, tumhari favourite colour.

Nihal (calming down a little) Thank you daadi.

Ayesha gets dressed in the saree (click to see image of the dress) given to her by kamini and goes to check on nihal. She gets surprised to see kamini getting nihal out of a tub full of bubbles. she never imagined kamini could behave so friendly and lovingly with anyone. but she was wrong. she could see the level of effection in kamini's eyes for nihal and she is also happy that, nihal is now, feeling relatively comfortable with kamini around than before. She smiles to herself and goes to veer's room.

VEER'S ROOM:

She knocks the door twice but does not get any reply. She keeps waiting for another couple of minutes and then enters the room, since she finds the door unlocked. She realizes that, he is in the washroom and sits on the bed and waits for him to come.

Veer: Ayesha..

She turns backwards and gets mesmerised to see veer in his new suit (click here). Veer on the other hand keeps staring at ayesha. Ayesha closes the distance between them. She moves her finger on the edge of her eye and takes a bit of kajal. She presses her finger on the nape of his neck while he smiles at her.

Ayesha: Aaj tum itna handsome lag rahe ho.. Ki shayad mere nazar hi lag jaaye..

Veer: Tum mujh se jzyada achchi lag rahi ho..

Ayesha: Yeh saree subah maa ne diya hai.

Veer: Ayesha, i am really happy today. Pata hai kyun.. Point number one, mom badal gayyi hai. Point number two, aaj finally humari shaadi ki date pakki hogi.. and i promise ayesha.. Iss baat koi bhi humare beech mein nahi aayenge, naa hamari shadi postpone hoga.

Ayesha: Haan veer.. Mein bhi bohot khush hoon. Pata hai.. Maa nihal ko apne karne mein poori tarah se, dill se koshish kar rahi hai. Nihal dheere se adjust kar raha hai. Bachcha hai aur time lagega. Mein bhi apne taraf se poori koshish karoongi aur ensure karoongi ki, everything will be set.

Veer: Tum bohot achchi ho ayesha. Vardhan family is lucky to have you.

Ayesha: And I am lucky to have YOU.

HALL (WITH PUNDIT)

Pundit: Dono kundliyon ko mila ne ke baad, maine sab se achcha muhurat nikala hai. Kamini ji, veer vardhan singh aur ayesha sharma ki shaadi aap aane waale monday ko rakh saktey hai.

Kamini: Shukriya pundit ji.

She makes veer, ayesha and nihal give the shagun to the pundit and the pundit leaves.

Kamini: Veer, ayesha, nihal.. Ab aap sab yahan baith jao. Mujhe aap logon se bohot saare cheezein discuss karna hai.

Veer/Ayesha/Nihal: Ji mom/maa/daadi.

Kamini: Pehle hum cards decide karenge. Joh card aap logon ko sab se jzyada pasand aayega, woh hum abhi printing ke liye bhejenge.. Woh kya hai na.. Shaadi ke liye jzyada waqt toh bachi bhi nahi. Humein saara kaam jaldi jaldi niptana hoga.

Veer and ayesha go with nihal's choice.. A gold coloured card with antique fabric inside, used instead of a paper with rich, elegant and a fine finish. (Click here to see the picture)

Kamini: Shekhar (Kamini's Personal Assistant).. Idhar aao.. Yeh wedding card confir karo. I want atleast 1000 - 1200 copies of the card. Okay.

Kamini (turning to VeeNiSha): Ab shaadi ke rasmein tey karenge. Parso ko mehndi rachayenge, agle din haldi chandan waali rasm hoga aur uske baad hoga sangeet. Phir ek reception rakhenge, just for the media people, business friends and all the official invitees. Yeh sab hone ke baad, humare paas shaadi ke liye sirf ek din bachenge and I am sure that, woh waqt kaafi rahega shaadi se pehle. Because, nandini bhi delhi se aa rahi hai arnav ko le kar. Aur haan ayesha, mein aaj subah hi tumhare dost parminder ko bhi invite kiya hai. Woh aaj shaam taq pohonch jaayegi..

Veer: Thank you so much mom. I really mean it. Aap ne inta sab kuch plan kiya..

Ayesha: Haan maa.. Mein toh yahi soch rahi thi ki, paami ko bulaoon. Achcha hua ki aap hi ne usko bulaya.

Kamini: Arey.. Yeh toh mera farz banta hai... Achcha ayesha, aaj shaam ko 6 baje hotel mein ek party hai beta. Mein aap donon ki shaadi announce kar rahi hoon aur ussi khushi mein saare staff ko aap vardhan khandaan ke behalf party throw kar rahi hoon. Hum sab duphair ko shopping ke liye niklenge aur thoda sa shaadi ka kaam complete karenge.

Ayesha: Ji maa..

PRECAP: Veer, ayesha, nihal and kamini go to shopping. Kamini intentionall takes nihal out to the gaming area, trying to give veesha some privacy and ayesha allows that, since she wants kamini and nihal to get gelled in a good way, without any sort of misunderstandings. VeeSha shopping for eachother. Party in the hotel. Avni's presence and her indirect taunts. But you will have to read more about the way she gets a zabardast treatment from kamini. Kamini makes a decision about the hotel's finances. By the end of the day, AAL IZZ WELL..

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