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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 14 B

Nihal: mein kabhie kabhie massi aur kabhie kabhie chachi. Hehe.. Mazaa aayega bua aise massi aka chachi bulate hue.

Everyone laugh at that, with ayesha still blushing.

Veer: ahem.. Di, mein soch raha tha ki, pundit ji se baat karne ke baad, kyun na hum sab kahin bahar chalein ?

Nandini: kahan jaana hai veer ?

Veer: kahin par bhi.. Aise hi ghoomne ke liye.

Nihal & arnav: wow..

Nandini: theek hai.. Chalo bachche bhi wahi chahte hai. Zaroor chalenge.

Veer and Ayesha will be sitting opposite eachother and veer will start eyeing ayesha while she makes a blushy threatening face asking him to look at his plate and eat, but finally gives up when he doesn't stop. She adjusts to his gaze and she suddenly feels a foot kicking hers.

She definitely knew who it is and due to sudden nervousness and jerk, her throat gets choked and she starts coughing. Veer immediately gives her a glass of water and makes her drink it, when nihal clicks the photo of veer patting ayesha's hed through veer's mobile.

Veer: sorry !!

Nandini: sorry kyun bol rahe ho tum ?

Veer: aisa hi di.. Bolne ka mann kiya toh bol diya..

Veer gets back to his place and ayesha gives him a look of,"tum kabhie nahi sudroge", for which he returns a naughty smile..

They finally finish their lunch and the pundit also arrives. Everyone sit together and the pundit studies the kundli's deeply and silence filled the hall.

Pundi: arey waah.. Ladke ke kundli ke har gun ladki ke kundli se milta hai aur inke rishta naseeb mein bhi pakki hai. Bhagwan ne tey ki hai iss rishtry ko aur yeh ek doosre keliye hi bane hai..,

veer and ayesha get extremely super happy listening to the pundit with nandini and kids overjoyed.

Nandini: toh issi khushi mein engagement aur shaadi ke dates bhi pakka kar deejiye na pundit ji.

Pundit: ji nandini ji. Mein ussi baat par aa raha tha.. Ek cheez hai.. Iss kundliyon mein. Inn donon ki shaadi 10 din se pehle ho jaana chahiye. 10 dinon se leke ek saal taq koi aur shub gadiyan nahi hai. Yeh saare 10 din bohot hi anukul aur shub hai. Khoob rahegi inki shaadi shuda zindgi.. Kyunki yeh 10 din ladki ke liye zindgi ke sab se shub muhurat hai..

Nandini: pundit ji, itne jaldi toh shayad nahi ho paayega.. Par aap keh rahe hai na ki achche muhurat hai.. Toh aise ki tey kardenge hum. Aaj se 9th day engagement aur 10th day shaadi rakhlenge.

Yeh sahi rahega na veer.. Ayesha..

Veer and ayesha look at eachother and acceptence seen on their faces.

Veer: haan di. Humein koi problem nahi hai. We are fine with it.

The pundit takes his shagun and takes leave.

Nandini: wow.. Vardhan parivar mein phir se dhoom dham hoga. Har jagah phool, golden lace, lighting, decorations, log. Wow.. Veer tum ek kaam karo. Ayesha aur tum, kapdon ke shopping kar ke aayiye. Mein cards shop mein wedding card samples laati hoon aur shagun ke liye orders bhi deti hoon.

Veer: theek hai di.

Everyones voice had cheerfullness in it.

Arnav: aur mein aur nihal guests ke list banayenge. Aap hamare banane ke baad, usko correct keejiye.

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thanks for all the previous comments. please press like and do comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome dear............. that kick scene was great.......cute...😉😉😉.......loved it wholeheartedly........

Waiting for their mairrage.......😛😛😛 & obviously ur next update😛😛

love

tanvi




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Posted: 15 years ago
m a new comer i had missed all the previous parts and want to read them too. i am liking thz fan fiction.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Friends,

thanks a lot for your concrete feedback. Would like to announce that, the next update will be extremely huge and large and special shaadi episode too. But it will be coming on JULY 1st. I will be temporarily inactive on IF from now, till the above mentioned date. Hope u won't forget me. Hehe. Just kidding. But inbetween, i will be giving you a promo for the part. So, no disappointments.. Okay :)

love you loads :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
we won't forget u dude
just keep ur promise and update on july 1st
loads of love

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Posted: 15 years ago
Will be missing your updates. Plzzz do update soon. Waiting 4 30 june yaara.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Sorry late comment.I really likeeeeee ur ff as usual.Waiting till july for ur next update.Not to worry i will never forget u.

fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago

Amazing ff yaar ⭐️👏⭐️ All the scenes are so gud. The creatives should take some ideas from you.

Can u please pm me when u update the next part?
Luv_Sakshi
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Posted: 15 years ago
Update Dedicated To Romaila and Nehara [sara] for giving me that wonderful B'day present and also to my Loyal Readers especially [veervardhan]

-- UPDATE --

Veer and ayesha look at eachother and acceptence seen on their faces.

Veer: haan di. Humein koi problem nahi hai. We are fine with it.

The pundit takes his shagun and takes leave.

Nandini: wow.. Vardhan parivar mein phir se dhoom dham hoga. Har jagah
phool, golden lace, lighting, decorations, log. Wow.. Veer tum ek kaam
karo. Ayesha aur tum, kapdon ke shopping kar ke aayiye. Mein cards
shop mein wedding card samples laati hoon aur shagun ke liye orders
bhi deti hoon.

Veer: theek hai di.

Everyones voice had cheerfullness in it.

Arnav: aur mein aur nihal guests ke list banayenge. Aap hamare banane
ke baad, usko correct keejiye.

Nandini: good. Aap dono apne doston ko bhi invite kar sakte ho.

Nihal: thank you bua :)

Veer and ayesha head towards a shopping mall. Silence prevailing
between them. As the mall arrives, they park the car and make their
way inside, holding each other's hands while a few couples waiting out
of the basement lift look at them and think such an adorable pair they
are. As veer notices everyone glancing at them and ayesha getting a
bit uncomfortable and nervous, he clutches her in to a firm and a
protective side hug.

Ayesha looks at him instantly, and thanks the god in her heart for
giving her such a good and an understanding life partner.

They make their way inside and ayesha pulls him in to a suiting store.
Veer looks at her in awe. He thought they are here to shop something
for her. He basically hated ahopping for himself. All the shopping for
him is generally done by Nandini. He gave her a confused questioning
look, when she pulled him inside.

Ayesha takes him section where, a wide range of shirts are stacked.

Ayesha: veer, yahan par toh itne saare shirts hai.. Mujhe toh sab
pasand aaye hai. Tumhe kaunse achche lage ? Help karo naa choose karne
mein.

Veer: ayesha, mujhe ab kapdon ki kya zaroorat hai ? Hum tumhare
shopping karne aaye hai na.

Ayesha: ab maine kaunsa bola ki mein tumhare liye shopping kar rahi
hoon ? Mein toh apne hone waale pati ke liue shopping kar rahi hoon
aur mujhe help ki zaroorat hai toh tumhe leke aayi.

Veer was relatively surprised because, there was full nautanki on in
her voice and he never in his dreams expected ayesha refering him as
her hone waali pati, without blushing.

Veer: achcha.. Toh aap ke hone waali pati kaise dikhte hai ? Zara
vistaar se discribe karenge toh, selection mere liye easy hoga.

Ayesha: hmm.. Bohot hi tall hai.. Uska height 6'2 hai... (she covers
the distance between them and whispers something in his ear) bohot hi
smart, handsome, brainy, cute, naughty aur sexxy bhi hai. Aur
description chahiye kya ?

Veer's mouth drops in surprise. He was on the top of the moon and is
extremely happy that, ayesha is now becoming as naughty as he is and
is really glad to see the other side of her. He tires to say
something, but already finds her picking a few shirts for him.

She catches a load of shirts and approaches towards him and starts
placing them on him and check them. They keep shopping and soon, she
buys a whole lot of clothes for him.

Veer: ayesha, agar shaadi se pehle yeh haal hai, toh pata nahi shaadi
ke baad kya hoga. Agar mein har roz ek naya set pehnoonga na, phir bhi
yeh sab kuch pehan nahi paoonga. Waise toh hum ab itne bags ke saath
goom nahi payenge. Tum yahin bench par baitho. Mein samaan gaadi mein
rakh kar aata hoon.

Ayesha thinks this is the chance and lets him go. As she notices his
retreating figure, she walks into the shop, which is quite opposite to
the bench she was sitting on. It was a watch shop. She looks at load a
hell of brands and finally buys a very expensive watch, which looks
cute and radiant indeed. Just inorder to confuse him, she also gets
into the toy shop and picks up two extremely huge teddy bears, one is
brown and the other is blue, for nihal and arnav.

She places the small watch box into one of the teddy's bag and as she
keeps walking out of the shop, veer spots her at an instant. He did
not search that much because, she was right infront of his eyes as he
entered the mall.

Veer: ayesha, mein toh bass 15 mins ke liye gaya tha aur tum ne phir
se extra weight shopping kar li..

He chuckles at her pouting face and they share the weight. Finally,
they reach a designer store, and this time, veer starts the choosing
thing. He buys sarees for her.

Veer: pata hai.. Tum inn mein bohot khoonsoorat lagogi.

Ayesha blushes and veer laughs as he is seeing her blush again.

Ayesha: veer, humein nandini ji ke liye bhi sarees lena hai. Atleast
10 or 15 lena padega. Mehndi, sangeet, haldi, sagaayi, shaadi..
Reception.. Bohot occassions honge.

Veer: yeah. Achcha hua ki tumne yaad kar liya.

They both buy sarees for nandini too and on their way home, they also
buy some stuff for arnav and nihal. Ayesha all of a sudden remembers
that, they did not buy anything for avinash but veer says that, he
will give some suits to avinash from his shopping.

Ayesha being understanding, understands and nods with a cheerful yes.

The shiny black BMW owned by veer roars to life and they make their
way.. Oops not to home.. Veer has more plans in his mind.

Ayesha: veer, yeah toh ghar ka raasta nahi hai. Hum kahan jaa rahe
hain ?

Veer: well, ghar toh nahi jaa rahe hai. It's really a pleasant evening
and dont't tell me ki tumhe ab park mein nahi baithna.

Ayesha: wow. Hum park jaa rahe hai ?cool !!

Veer and ayesha approach the park, which had a very dew people in it.
The chose to sit on a rock, which is situated in one deserted corner
of the park and is facing the sea.

They sit close to each other side hugging, with ayesha's head rested
on veer's chest. The enjoy the silence and the protective presence of
the other, as they watch the sea.

Veer turnes back to see the ice cream stall, which is located on the
either side of the park.

Veer: oye ayesha... Ice cream khao gi ?

Ayesha: hmm.. Khane ka mann kar raha hai aur na bhi kar raha hai. Just
wanna eat a little. Agar tum apne liye leke aa rahe ho, mein share
karoongi.

Veer: cool. Kaunsa flavour ?

Ayesha: hmm.. Butterscotch.. Cornetto.

Veer nods and returns with a cornetto in a few mins. He hands it to
ayesha and she opens it and hands it to him.

Veer: tumhare liye laaya tha.

Ayesha: meine sharing ke baare mein pehle hi clear kar diya mr.
Naughty chocolate.

Veer: theek hai..

He takes a small bite and puts the cone forward for ayesha. She takes
a bite too, and he makes her eat her part lovingly and caringly, as if
he was feeding a small child and ayesha loved the amount of pampering
she got from veer.

Ayesha: tum mujhe bohot pamper karte ho na.

Veer: aise bol rahi ho jaise ki tum mujhe pamper hi nahi karti.

Ayesha: veer..

Veer: ayesha..

Ayesha: kya...

Veer: kuch nahi..

They laugh together realizing how silly they were talking. They
finally think that, it is getting late and make their way to the car.
Ayesha inbetween, buys ice creams for nihal and arnav.

Veer thinks about the level of care she takes.. not just about nihal
but also for the other family members. He smiles to himself thinking
that, one day, kamini will realize her mistake and will ask ayesha to
forgive her.

On the other side, avinash enters the vardhan mansion and notices
that, nandini has gone out but finds nihal and arnav doing some work
sitting in the front hall.

Arnav rushes with joy as soon as he sees him.

Avinash: arey beta, yeah kya ghar pe koi bhi nahi hai..

Arnav: pata hai papa, ayesha maami wapas aagayi. Unko kuch nahi hua.
Bass, thoda chot lagi hui hai. Aur oata hai kya, mumma unki shaasi ke
shagun lene ke liye gayi hai. Aap ko phone karne ke liye sab ne bohot
koshish ki hai par aap uta hi nahi rahe the. Aur daadi toh kahin bahar
gayi hai. Unke saath unke saman bhi the.

Avinash gets completely scared and shockes at the sudden incidents and
his brain gets stopped.

Avinash: arnav, nihal, aap dono kheliye. Mujhe thoda kaam hai. Mein
baad mein dinner table ke paas miloonga.

Arnav: ok papa.

Nandini on the other side, orders flowers from australia, switzerland
etc..
She also orders for some personalized shagun, for various ceremonies
including shaadi and selects a few carda basically, for the final
selection by veer and ayesha.

She then makes her way to the hotel and makes sure that, each and
everyone from the staff is aware of veer and ayesha's wedding.
Everyone will be happy to know that. She does not meet kamini and gets
back to the home, only to find avinash pacing to and fro in the room.
Nandini wishes him and when he asks about what is happening, she
explains everything to him and he starts feeling ditched and will be
thinking about new plans.

As nandini was more concentrated on the wedding arrangments, she does
not realize the cruel and cunning expressions on avinash's face.

She just asks him to prepare the list of food to be served and will
ask him to put up all his ideas onto the planner. She also tells him
that, her only desire is to make this wedding the Big Fat Wedding of
India.

OKAY FRIENDS.. I SAID I WILL UPDATE ON SOME OTHER DAY BUT HERE IS
THE UPDATE FOR YOU ALL. HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT. PLEASE DO COMMENT AND LIKE ;)

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Posted: 15 years ago
fantabulous fantastic outstanding overwhelming...
am running out of superlatives.
all i can say is, can't wait for da next part
pls update soon.

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