Hum Saath Saath Hain - Part 10 - Page 20 - Jan 10 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ht312

Wah deepu mera toh weekend bana diya tumne...😃was wondering when you will update and here it is...good one, nice veesha moments...😳.that cup searching was funny...oh toh badmaash bunty ne yahan pe entry maar di...is bunty going to cause more trouble ya veer uske kaan khichega?


hiiii di..
thanks a lot.. mein bhi wahi chahti thi.. hehe.. kal raat ki update kar diya hai maine.. yeah.. i know.. joh cups bahar ki pade hue the, hamara hero usko doondh raha tha. 😆😆 well, lets wait and see what is going to happen. mein app hi ki comment ke liye itnzaar kar rahi thi... ab dusri update likh rahi hoon. kuch der mein woh bhi aajayegi 😃 i am sure that, you are gonna love the update.

keep reading and commenting.

loads of love
deepu 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
pammi: ayesha, phir se uss bunty ne, hamare nihal par haath utaya. iiss baar toh, mein hi uss bunty ko sabak sikhane waali thi. lekin nihal ne mujhe rok diya. warna ab taw.. uss bunty ka..

she then realises the presence of veer and even realises that, bunty is the son of his sister and stops

pammi: sorry sir.

veer: pammi, first of all, you are ayesha's best friend, so, you are my friend also. aur tumhe mujhe sir bulane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. just call me veer. okay. aur tumhe shayad, nihal ke wajah se rokna nahi chahiye tha. you should have given those people some piece of mind. but anyways, i will talk to the principal of the school tomorrow and assure about nihal's safety. thanks a lot.

pammi: its okay................ veer...................

pammi: ayesha. ab mein chalti hoon. kaam hai hotel mein. bye.

bye nihal..

nihal: bye pammi maasi..

ayesha: bye pammi..

as ayesha leaves the vardhan's mansion, veer and ayesha tush to nihal and look at his knee and elbow. they notice that, the school people have done the first aid but was not done properly.

veer: doctor ki zaroorat hai kya ? mein abhi phone kar ke bulaoonga.

even before ayesha says something.. nihal starts shouting...

nihal: chachu.. lahi (nahi) pleachh.. doctol nahi.. mujhe doctol ke wajah se bohot dald hoga.

he runs towards ayesha, who will be sitting on her knees inorder to reach him. he hus her tight.

veer: maasi.. sorry chachi. please batao na chachu ko ki mujhe doctol ke paash jaana achcha nahi lagta. woh mujhe injectiols (injections) ke saath darayega. please. aise chot ko hum bhi theek kal sakte hai na. jab bunty ne mujhe pehle baal (baar) push kiya. app le (ne) theek kiya na.

veer and ayesha's heart melts at his sweet and cute talks. veer also bends to nihal's height and both of them try to kiss nihal on the either sides of the cheeks, unaware of the other's action. at the same time, nihal finds something on the carpet and bends down to pick it up. while on the other side, veer and ayesha end up in pecking eachother. ayesha immediately stands uo, blushing like a red cherry, while veer has a million dollar smile on his face. she immediately catches nihal's hand and takes him into his room. she ensures that, he is comfortable on his bed. veer also follows the cute duo..

ayesha: veer, hans na band karo and please pass that first aid box.

veer: okay. sorry. lekin yeh first aid box kahan pe hai ?

ayesha: oh my god veer, whats wrong with you ? subah se koi bhi cheez tumhe nazar nahi aaraha hai..

veer: (whispers so that, it is not audible to nihal) kya karein, kal taq, sirf office mein ki, aise dhoob gaya tha. ab toh, meri chaand mere saath rehti hai.. kya karoon, uske ilava, mujhe aur kuch dikhta hi nahi. sapnon mein bhi wohi rehti hai. din mein aur raat mein bhi. meri chaand bohot khoobsurat hai..

saying those words, ke makes fall in his love all over again. yeah, he always makes her love his more and more with his sweet little talks. she moves past him, and fetches the first aid kit.
she cleans the improperly applied medicine on his wound, while veer keeps brushing nihal's head with all the love he had for him. he keeps murmuring
sweetnothings to nihal so that, he wont feel pain.

veer: chalo buddy. lets go.. and get clean now. phir hum game khelenge. okay !!

nihal: okay chachu.

nihal was on cloud 9. since veer came in to his life, he started taking care of him. he felt so happy and lucky. he is now, getting the love of ayesha as well as veer. he thanked god for sending him his angels

veer helps nihal in dressing up, while ayesha dresses his wound. soon, both of them will attack on their playstation. on the other side, ayesha will be shouting from the kitchen for both of them.

veer takes the opportunity, and runs into the kitchen telling nihal that, chachi needs help.

as he enters into the kitchen, he finds her mixing some dough for something.

veer: aap ke hukum saraankhon par. how can i help you ?

ayesha: thanks. aur nihal kahan pe hai ?

veer: bahar khel raha hai. woh chahta hai ki, uski chachi uske chachu ke saath thoda waqt bitaye.

ayesha: achcha.. toh bitayiye na.. kiss ne roka aap ko ?

veer was left openmouthed at her response. everytime he tries to romance with her, the only thing that comes out of her mouth is, "veer, please leave.. koi aajayega.." or "veer please leave. mujhe bohot kaam hai yahan par.. tum jao.. bahar baito.. mein jald hi jald aajaoongi"

but now, she was also taking advances along with him. he was completely confused.

she moves even forward. now, there is no place inbetween them. she hugs him while he is still in great confusion. she traces his jaw line with her finger, while veer is left flabbergasted.

ayesha: kya hua veer, tum hi bol rahe the na, ki mein tumhare liye waqt hi nahi deti..ab de rahi hoon naa

veer: ayesha.. tumhari tabhiyat toh theek hai na.. kahin tum ne kuch pee rakhi toh nahi ?

ayesha: matlab..

veer: matlab.. mein.. woh..

ayesha: what ? mein. woh.. batao na.. kya bolne laga tha ?

veer: woh, mujhe ek minute ke liye aisa laga tha ki, tum ne, galti se wine ya vodka pee liya.

ayesha: wine ? mein kyun wine peeongi ? waise, mein poochne hi waali thi. wine kyun laaya ghar pe ?

veer: mein woh.. actually, uss wine aur vodka ka taste achcha hai.. toh.. leke aaya hoon..

ayesha: okay. whatever lekin jzyada mat peeya karo..

veer: mein kahan jzyaada peeta hoon ? you know na, shaadi se pehle hi bata diya hai mujhe kabhi kabhi thoda sa sharab peene ki aadat hai. aur tumne okay bhi keh diya. so, you should not have any probs now.

ayesha: okay baba okay. maine bas bataya.. theek hai.. actually, kal subah, nihal ne, uss wine ko grape juice samajh kar nikal diya. aur haan.. tumhare joh, so called red lable bottle hai na, usko bhi upar kamre mein leke jao. kitchen mein mat rakha karo. chota bachcha hai, kuch bhi peeyega padne ke bina..

sach bataoon toh, mujhe bohot funny lag raha hai... nazaar mat hojao ab.. ulte pulte mooh bi mat bano..

itne saare bottles laate kyun ho ghar pe ? huh ? cuttings toh aise dete ho, jaise ki, tum ek bottle ke baad ek peete ho, lekin ek peg ke liye hi, tumhara bottle band ho jayega. uffooo...

veer: oh my god.. peeyunga toh problem.. nahi peeyunga. tab bhi problem.. yeh ladkiyaan na !!

ayesha: oye.. kya ladkiyan ladkiyan kar rahe ho ? tumhare mooh se mere naam ke ilava, aur koi naam nahi aayegi. got it ? you are only mine.. got it ? ab aap public property nahi hai sir.. sirf mere..

veer: aur tum bhi sirf meri...

their conversations is interrupted when they hear nihal squealing with joy...

PRECAP: Whis is nihal happy and is shouting ? VeeSha - Nihal moments.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
superb work........very romantic.........specially the highlighted part 5.😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
hey!!
just read chapter 2 n 3!!!
they are just awesome...
omg.. u made bunty... the bad boy...
i dnt mind it.... like i said b4 i dnt like him....
yipee!! more veesha scenes......
cnt wait...
pls update soon....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
OMG deepu, double treat today😃 2 updates...love you🤗 and what fantastic updates👍🏼 loved the veesha moments and nihaal moments too...pammi is so sweet...really nice progress of story👏 aur sach mein veer ko kya ho gaya hai, pehle cup ab first aid box🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
great going i have really liked this part of your story.very romantic veesha scenes i don't mind abt them actually i have really loveeeeeed them
waiting for your next part hope it will come soon and will be very good like your other parts of the story
love
fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Oh my god. i just joined this forum to comment on your fan fiction. Me being a silent reader culd not keep quiet after reading such a fabulous and a mindblowing fan fiction. This is for d 1st time i am reading a fiction. The way you describe your feelings are awesome. Please update soon. Cnt wait anymore to read your lovely updates. You deserbe a great round of applause.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Hey dear i luv ur fiction a lot. Sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
deepu ...shweet update....ayesha...loveeeed her and veer...is damn hwuat...Nihaal babay n his cute words...shoooo chuttieeeeee.....sweetieeee emwuahhhhh,...

Loved it
update the next part soon. Gud luck 4 ur xam on Monday..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
ayesha: okay baba okay. maine bas bataya.. theek hai.. actually, kal subah, nihal ne, uss wine ko grape juice samajh kar nikal diya. aur haan.. tumhare joh, so called red lable bottle hai na, usko bhi upar kamre mein leke jao. kitchen mein mat rakha karo. chota bachcha hai, kuch bhi peeyega padne ke bina..

sach bataoon toh, mujhe bohot funny lag raha hai... nazaar mat hojao ab.. ulte pulte mooh bi mat bano..

itne saare bottles laate kyun ho ghar pe ? huh ? cuttings toh aise dete ho, jaise ki, tum ek bottle ke baad ek peete ho, lekin ek peg ke liye hi, tumhara bottle band ho jayega. uffooo...

veer: oh my god.. peeyunga toh problem.. nahi peeyunga. tab bhi problem.. yeh ladkiyaan na !!

ayesha: oye.. kya ladkiyan ladkiyan kar rahe ho ? tumhare mooh se mere naam ke ilava, aur koi naam nahi aayegi. got it ? you are only mine.. ab aap public property nahi hai sir.. sirf mere..

veer: aur tum bhi sirf meri...

nihal; yaaayyy.... chachuuu.. chachiiii... come here. come here. whoppie. yayyy.

ayesha: yeh kya ho gaya nihal ko ?

veer: chalo.. chal ke dekh te hain.

as they go out, they see nihal jumping up and down on the couch and his every chuckle portrayed the level of his happiness, making veer and ayesha, stare at him with all the love they had for him.

ayesha immediately moves towards him and hugs him tightly.

ayesha: kya hua nihal ? bohot khush lag rahe ho !!

nihal: chachi.. mein yeh game jeet gaya.. yayy..

veer: bass itni si baat. chachi ka chamcha. agar mein competing karta hoga toh, app abhi taq haar jaayenge mere haathon mein. i made you win. so, the credit goes to me. okay. samjhe aap dono ?

ayesha gives him a dirty look, while he grins shamelessly.

nihal: chachu, aap chale gaye the. aul mein baaki computer competitors ke saath khel laha tha. aap game mein nahi the. aap ko kichel mein kaam tha na. chachi ke saath. haan. yeh game maine hi jeeta hai. koi mele rank ko cheel nahi payega. batao na chachi.

ayesha: haan nihal. tum ne hi yeh game jeeta hai. aap ke chachu ne game chod diya hai ne beech mein.
so, mein unko game se legally aur officially disqalify kar rahi hoon. got it you naughty chachu ?

veer: kya ? naughty bola tum ne mere ko ?

ayesha: haan.. jo sach tha, wohi bola na. naughy logon ko sweet thode bolte hai.

veer gives a look telling - "baad mein dekhloonga. ab toh bach gayi"

nihal then turns on his favourite show tom and jerry. veer still memorises the day during which, he saw tom and jerry for the very first time in his life, along with nihal. that day, he was almost asleep.

he felt like, he will be breaking the television set during any moment, but he kept quiet, as he saw the happiness in nihal's eyes, which he valued the most. but today, he got used to the show.

ayesha moves to the couch, where veer will be sitting with his legs wide, and to the side. she settles herself between his legs and rests her head on his chest, while nihal sits on ayesha's lap.

all of them feel contended. they are now a happy family without any disturbances.

PRECAP: veesha moments.

friends, i know it was very small but so sorry. this is for today. will try to update the next part as soon as possible. please do press the like button if you find this update deserving. and please do not forget to leave your comments as they mean a lot to me and are a source of great ideas for the next part.

loads of love
deepu 😃

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