OS: A Stolen Moment

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shabana

@shabz50

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

If you glued to ur laptop does that mean you are writing aswell

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hahaha glued to your laptop...stay glued and keep waiting forever😛

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shabz50
If you glued to ur laptop does that mean you are writing aswell

Hahaha! Good one Shabz! 😆 😛

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: metoyou
Hahaha glued to your laptop...stay glued and keep waiting forever😛

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shabana

@shabz50

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: neiralove

Hahaha! Good one Shabz! 😆 😛

One can try. We have always only had neira in our minds need to keep them alive lol😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ShyNomad
Aur???

And the rest is history. 😳

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: neiralove

And the rest is history. 😳

Regardless, this was truly beautiful Shikha. A stolen moment indeed and yet one that felt so right.

And as for your use of 2nd person POV, much more scope for the imagination 😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Regardless, this was truly beautiful Shikha. A stolen moment indeed and yet one that felt so right.

And as for your use of 2nd person POV, much more scope for the imagination 😳

Please don't make those faces na

🤗

I'm super glad you liked it honey! ❤️ Yes, much more left up to the readers than usual (and rightfully so) 😛 😳

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: neiralove

Please don't make those faces na
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I'm super glad you liked it honey! ❤️ Yes, much more left up to the readers than usual (and rightfully so) 😛 😳

It so reminds me of that FB scene where she tells him of the magic of his touch...except here there are no words needed, just the way she sighs and blushes, and his ragged breathing, his eyes looking into hers...

Marvelous...but you can't fault me for wanting more 🤗