SS in Progress : Mrs and Mr Khanna ... Update on pg 275 - Page 93

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Posted: 9 years ago
Someone update please while we wait for rishab to write the neira conv
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Posted: 9 years ago
I don't know rishab if you have already started to write.. If you have not then here is the start for you. I will be more than happy to delete this for you.

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After silently finishing their breakfast, Nachiket said, "can we go for a walk? I want to take you to this place I often visited when I was in college". "Hmm? You visited Delhi when in college", ragini asked surprised, that she didn't know this fact about Nachiket until now. " yeah I never mentioned before.. I used to attend a regular scout camp in the woods near by.. I stopped after I joined med school. Would you like to go with me?", Nachiket sounded nervous like a college boy asking his girlfriend on his first date. ragini could not refuse.. They drove for about half hour , Nachiket talking about his scout camps and experiences he had.. Both of them completely avoiding the issue that was constantly bothering them. They reached the woods, and started walking.. Ragini clinging on to Nachiket arm as she walked. she was holding him tight, as if the woods were to take him away... They walked in silence for a while, not knowing where to start, Nachiket wanted to say so many things, but his words remained unspoken, he wasn't sure what would make her trust him again. He had committed too many mistakes lately and apologized way too many times.. He didn't want make it worst by apologizing again.

" I know Sameer was lying", ragini said out of the blue, breaking the silence, looking at him.. Still walking hand in hand.. Nachiket turned to her surprised, he definitely didn't see it coming.. " he knows me well, for he wanted to make it easier for me by taking the blame..but unfortunately I know you and understand you way too well, to know how you would have handled such a situation" Nachiket was dumbfounded as Ragini continued.. " we were on a trip then, and you didn't want to hinder the enjoyment of the kids, or my happiness by bringing this up. You feared that, if you told me I wouldn't be able to enjoy freely.." She paused.. Nachiket wanted to nod, but he didn't.. He kept staring at the path they were walking on.. " but that still doesn't justify you not sharing with me" she said rather softly, almost choking on the last word.. This time demanding an answer..
Edited by imagine43 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Perfect, Imagine! :D

Rishab, please continue! <3

P.S. You guys are so much mature than me. I am so glad to be here! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello everyone,

Thank you for appreciating my feedback.

Much as I would like to write, firstly I have never given it a try and secondly (and most importantly) I really enjoy and look forward to reading every update to see what our leading pair is doing now.

Just goes to show that even daily family interactions are enough to carry a story further. They each have a lesson to learn.

At the risk of repeating myself, I am now waiting for the next update. You all write so well.

Rishab.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one imagine and rishab just try please no one is a expert we just love neira and write.
Please continue rishab
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Posted: 9 years ago
He kept staring at the path they were walking on.. " but that still doesn't justify you not sharing with me" she said rather softly, almost choking on the last word.. This time demanding an answer..

"Ragini, I was scared. Scared that now that I do have you with me, I may not have the time with you. I cannot even imagine losing you again, even to death. Ragini, I was just very very scared that maybe life had shortchanged me and my time was running out. I did not know what to do. This is my only defense."



I have to leave for work just now, so looking forward to reading Ragini's reply.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Rishab, Rachna, Sukhi or Imagine would have to continue.. I can't write..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Darlings, I cannot write.
I do not have the flair as you all do!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rishab

Darlings, I cannot write.

I do not have the flair as you all do!!



You wrote beautifully please continue with their heart to heart please
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Rishab, Rachna, Sukhi or Imagine would have to continue.. I can't write..


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