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Just then the woman who was talking to him all the while comes out..she looks at Ragini with a hint of familiarity..and then "I noticed, from a long time you were staring at the man exercising beside me through the window". Ragini is surprised and shy hearing that, after all she shouldnt have stared at him so shamelessly. "You dont have a chance girl!", the woman continues, "He told me, that he has a very beautiful wife, and loves her madly". "So dont even try! if you dont want your heart broken!", saying that with a smile she walks away..
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Posted: 9 years ago


Ahaa... Zuss that was really nice... Loved it... Looking forward to read more from your end...

Btw feelings ki ahmiyat hai... Continue Plz I am engrossed😉
Edited by MansurKhan56 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: imagine43

Just then the woman who was talking to him all the while comes out..she looks at Ragini with a hint of familiarity..and then "I noticed, from a long time you were staring at the man exercising beside me through the window". Ragini is surprised and shy hearing that, after all she shouldnt have stared at him so shamelessly. "You dont have a chance girl!", the woman continues, "He told me, that he has a very beautiful wife, and loves her madly". "So dont even try! if you dont want your heart broken!", saying that with a smile she walks away..


The woman returns after a minute and looks at Ragini intently
'BTW, you are beautiful too. And I get the positive vibes from you, hence my advice. Look for somebody else.'

Ragini's surprised eyes followed the woman's back who now made her way to the reception; she then turned back to her husband, who continued packing heat on the treadmill. 'So cheesy' she thought as she grinned and opened the door of the gym.

A hush descended as she took a few steps inside. She realised belatedly that this section of the gym was for men, and more than that, she was still dressed in a saree. She had not bothered to change before rushing over here to meet Nachiket.

Ragini was mortified. She turned away hastily and decided to wait for Nachiket outside.

As she retraced her steps, she suddenly felt a hand closing on her wrist, pulling her back. A second later, she was safely nestled in her husband's arms, his heartbeat thundering beneath her ears.

The hush descended once again as Nachiket pressed his lips on top of her head. Somebody coughed stealthily somewhere and they broke apart.

'Sorry' Nachiket grinned. 'My wife, guys. We will go. Enjoy.'

He waved at the others apologetically and pulled Ragini back to himself, his arm now wrapped protectively around her waist.

As she glared back at him, he started laughing.
Edited by poetic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Zuss - That was good, you should write more. 👍🏼 Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: imagine43

Dont worry so much Zuss.. it was really beautiful.. Nobody here cares much about the spelling or the grammar or the words used.. All that matters the feeling behind.. and your writing had so much of that..it described Ragini's state and nervousness so well... I am very happy that you wrote..



Thankz imagine for your kind words 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56



Ahaa... Zuss that was really nice... Loved it... Looking forward to read more from your end...

Btw feelings ki ahmiyat hai... Continue Plz I am engrossed😉


Glad that you like it Mansur
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

@Zuss - That was good, you should write more. 👍🏼 Thanks a lot.


Thankzz Rachna it means a lot 🤗


Writting of this toke 1:30 hour it is very defficalt to writte😕 didnt know how can you guyz mange to come up with new ideas and discrab it so beautifully 👏

No ways yaar writting is not my cup of tea 😆 i know that now

But i am always ready for reading your wonderfull OS😉😳
Edited by zuss - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zuss


Thankzz Rachna it means a lot 🤗


Writting of this toke 1:30 hour it is very defficalt to writte😕 didnt know how can you guyz mange to come up with new ideas and discrab it so beautifully 👏

No ways yaar writting is not my cup of tea 😆 i know that now

But i am always ready for reading your wonderfull OS😉😳



🤗

You write tomorrow, now sleep tight.

😳
AsEnAth thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic



🤗

You write tomorrow, now sleep tight.

😳


I woke up now yaar and Its 9:10 am in my country
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zuss


I woke up now yaar and Its 9:10 am in my country



😆 Then you write today

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