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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Chaitali for the update.
So a new angle creeps in - now this is becoming interesting indeed.

I also liked the introduction of Pam and RK back to the story.

@Loveleen - pl write
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Chaitail for the update. Very interesting angle
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am caught up in work, Rachna. You guys write please. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Writing ... Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow Chaitali..
That was really nice..
Interesting ho gayi hai totally story :D
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Ragini woke up the next morning to find him on her side of the bed, his arms loosely draped across her waist. She remembered him being withdrawn and forlorn the previous night, and hoped that he would finally choose to share what was bothering him.
She eased herself off the bed, careful not to jolt him out of his slumber, and walked over to the balcony. It was a brilliant morning; the combined blue of the sea and sky took her breath away. It was peaceful all around, and from where she was standing, she could see children playing in the water, at a distance. She felt contented, yet there was something that was nagging at the back of her mind. It was almost as if her sixth sense had myriad premonitions and she was clueless. She turned towards a sleeping Nachiket, he had now pushed the comforter off the bed and seemed to be sleeping peacefully now. She walked inside and sat beside him. He looked at peace, the lines on his forehead have now receded. She lovingly pushed the hair back from his forehead, when the phone chirped quietly.
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It was Ranbir.
'Mom, how are you both? How's Goa?' he asked.
She was startled. He started laughing softly at the other side of the phone,
'Mom, there's no Doctors Convention in Delhi. Dad needs to plan better.'

Ragini felt embarrassed. Ranbir could almost feel it.
'Mom, you don't need to feel embarrassed. You both deserve this time out. I won't breathe a word of the same to these monkeys here. I just wanted to check on both of you.'

His Mother started laughing at her side of the world at her son's words, the children have indeed grown up.

'But how Goa? she asked.

He replied instantly - Dad seems to love the place. We are all coming there next vacation. And Mom, he continued - I love you. We love you.

Love you too, Ragini whispered back lovingly, her eyes misting over.

As she disconnected, she went back to the balcony. Everything seemed perfect, but something was still out there, nagging her. She tensed up.
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By the time Nachiket woke up, Ragini had already freshened up. As she combed her wet tresses, he slipped his arms around her waist and pulled her closer, her back flush against his chest. He kissed her cheek and then hid his face on her clavicle, gently biting the skin there.

'Nachiket' she gently pushed him away.

'You look amazing', he responded, his eyes taking in her entire countenance, his hands still holding her waist loosely. Their eyes met through the mirror and he whistled softly. She blushed but then shrugged jovially. She was dressed in a blue chiffon churidar, as blue as the sea itself, with spaghetti straps framing her delicate frame.

They had once gone shopping together and his eyes had caught the sight of this dress, and she had known.

And this time his phone rang. It was Pam.

Ragini pushed him towards the washroom as she picked up the service phone to order breakfast. He returned after a while and Ragini's heart skipped a beat. He looked extremely delectable in his chinos and white half sleeved shirt, and he walked upto her, the towel in his hand, urging her to dry his now wet hair. As he settled down in the bed, pulling her in between his legs, and her hand busied themselves with towelling his hair, he looked up at her face. She seemed happy and content - in fact, almost happy and content, and he could recognise the slight tick at the corner of her mouth. She was deep in thought.

'Nachiket, what did Pam say?' she asked after a while, as she went to the washroom to deposit the towel.

He started buttoning up his shirt - 'Nothing serious. There are some changes in their plans They will be reaching Goa tomorrow.'

'Ok, did you tell her we are here?' she asked.

'Yes. She laughed for almost five minutes at how we fooled the children.' he added

She smirked as she remembered her talk with her elder son. But she was in no mood to destroy his party.

She now walked over to him and stood in front of him
'So does this mean Nachiket, that today you will tell me what has been bothering you since last evening? Since you met that lady by the beach?'

And he visibly froze in front of her, warning signals going off in his head. He took a few steps back and all light seemed to vanish from in front of his eyes. He gingerly sat down on the sofa and looked down, deep furrows etched on his forehead.

Ragini stood there surprised, trying to understand him and gauge his reactions. Something was seriously wrong and she didn't know what. And now Nachiket was looking everywhere, but at her.

She moved back to the balcony and stood there, looking out at the sea, giving him precious time to collect himself together. And talk. As she waited.




Edited by poetic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
For the love of god, WRITE THE NEXT PART RACHNA!!!!! :D :D
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: loveleen3

For the love of god, WRITE THE NEXT PART RACHNA!!!!! :D :D


I second that

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