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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update Imagine.
Its sweet and poignant at the same time.

Nice turn to the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago

His face lost some of his cheeriness as he held her hands - 'I know I'm not on the right age of 40, Ragini.. you don't have to keep reminding me of that', he said and let out a big sigh .. as he lazily picked up his laptop and exited the room to slump on the sofa..

This was a difficult topic to broach and she knew her overthinking mind was going into territories that were going to hurt the both of them.. she wondered when her rational mind would let the romantic in her come to the fore and guiltily sat besides him on the couch.. he avoided her gaze for the time being..
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Posted: 9 years ago
There was still an hour left for them to go home when Nachiket called Ragini to his cabin.
"What happened? Dard ho raha h?" A concerned Ragini rushed to side and placed the back of her hand on his forehead. Nachiket smiled assuringly and took her hands in his. "Nahi. Main theek hu. Tumhara kaam ho gaya?"

"Kyu?" Ragini asked.

"I wanted to know if you can leave with me right now?" He asked.

"I have a call that I can take care of in the car," she said, "Tum theek ho na, Nachiket?" Her eyes searched his face for any pain for discomfort. He looked fine to her.

"Haan main theek hu. I'll see you near the car in 10 minutes,"

Ragini's call took longer than expected. They were trying to hire the best doctors for their hospital and she was talking to one of the top neurosurgeons of Mumbai. She was so engrossed in the call that she didn't realise when they reached the place. Their place! Fortunately, the call got over at the same time. She hung up the phone and with a wide smile, looked at Nachiket, "I think he is going to say yes,"

"Good job Madam!" he smiled and removed his seat belt.

"I thought we were going home. We've come here after a long time," Ragini said, as she got out of the car. There was a chill in the air and she quickly took out the shawl from her bag. He had come to her side and helped her in wrapping the shawl around her.

"Thank you. I can say chivalry isn't dead yet," Ragini teased him, bringing a smile on his face.

"C'mon. Lets sit there," They walked to the bench on the cliff, facing the sea.

"This is beautiful, Nachiket," It didn't matter how many times Ragini had come here, she was always in awe of the view. They stayed like that for a few minutes, not talking, just admiring the view until Nachiket spoke.

"Ragini, what age are you feeling right now?" Nachiket asked, making Ragini look at him instantly. She hadn't expected such a question from him. Or any discussion on this topic so soon. Then she remembered their morning conversation...

"Nachiket, I didn't mean to hurt you in the morning. I was only saying that.." Ragini said but Nachiket cut her off.

"I know Ragini. Just answer my question. How old are you feeling right now, at this very moment?" He again asked. He was serious. Ragini was quite familiar with this side of her husband. He rarely brought this side out. He wasn't going to stop until he gets his answer.

"I'm sorry darling," Ragini attempted to drop the matter but failed when Nachiket insisted, "Answer my question, Ragini"

"I don't know. I am not thinking about my age right now," Ragini answered.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww Loveleen!
That was gorgeous <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
"exactly" he said instantly
"let me explain, jaan i want every minute...no, every second of our lives to be like this, sirif tum or mai, with no complaints, just with each other"

ragini felt the emptiness that he was feeling and that void in his heart because she felt the same way

she realized this honeymoon was just an excuse to fill that void and to in fact enhance their relationship even more, so she decided to make it up to him

"ok teek hai baba, mai ganti hu tum yeh sab kyu karhe ho, aur mujhe iss jagha kyu lakai ayai...sooo just for you, we can go to that honeymoon!"

nachiket was over the moon!!!

"LEKIN!!!! i get to chose the date and i get to chose the place...ab tum batao manzoor hai?"

"of course jaan, anything for you" nachiket said

"ALSO, the kids dont need to know where and why and what we are doing, IF they find out...especially the girls they will never stop taunting me" ragini said blushing as she remembered her GNK convo

"teek hai, teek hai, teek hai! ab batao bhi kab gana hai?"

"welll" ragini said teasing him "tumhara 3 weeks khatam hora hai on feb 12 sooo, maybe we can go on feb 13 AFTER we talk to the doctor and Sameer...teek hai?"

"yesss, by the way jaan it just so happens to be valentines the next day" he whispered into her ear and she blushed!!!
(continueee plzzz!)
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Posted: 9 years ago
"I want you to understand something, Ragini. You probably know this already. But I think you should hear this from me too,"

"Nachiket.."

"Don't interrupt, please. Hear me out," he kept a finger on her lips to stop her from speaking. They were now facing each other on the bench. Ragini nodded and he took her hands in his before continuing.

"Today, I am not going to tell you how much I love you and how much I care for you. I know that you have full knowledge of your importance in my life. But one thing that I want you to know today is: I love your body. I am attracted to you now more than I ever have been. I crave your touch. I need it to survive."

The sincerity with which he said those words, brought goosebumps all over Ragini's body. And the intensity of his gaze made her shiver under the shawl.

"I want to kiss you all the time. I want to do it so badly I can barely think of anything else. When you enter a room it's my only thought. I can't help it," he paused for a few seconds, giving her the time to process his words and then again continued, "I have a hard time keeping my hands to myself when I see you. I want to touch you, feel your skin with my hands, hear you say my name, see your blushed face and then I want to kiss you. I want to kiss every inch of your body and then do it again and again and again,"

Ragini felt she was in a daze. She very well knew the effect she had on him, but hearing it from him felt incredible. She looked at his mouth. His lips were not moving now. She wanted to kiss him now, she started to lean in but then he started to speak again.

"Now, regarding our age," he started speaking. Ragini wanted him to stop. She didn't want to hear anything else. Right now, she just wanted to kiss and be kissed. She shook her head and cradled his face in her hands. Nachiket gently removed her hands and held it in his, again.

"I know we're not 25. I know we're not even 40. We have five grown-up children. Our daughter is married. And we'll be grandparents soon. Those are the facts. But when I'm with you, I do not think about it. I can not think about it. You are the mother of our children, yes. But you are also my wife. And I want to make love to my wife because I think she is the most beautiful person in this world and I love her absolutely," by the end, Nachiket was smiling. Ragini was sure her face was red. What am I supposed to say to him now?!?!? But then he started speaking again and Ragini thought, Oh! There's more!

"I am going to kiss you anytime I want. I am going to touch you anytime I want. I am going to wake you up in the middle of the night, if I want. You tell me right now. Do you want me to not do it?"

Ragini didn't trust herself to speak. She shook her head in negative.

"Use words," Nachiket said.

"No.. You can ..do it" Ragini said, stuttering.

"Good. Lets go then. Karan and Dimpy are waiting for us at home. They've brought dinner from the new chef they were talking about," Nachiket said and stood up from the bench. He was sure Ragini hadn't heard him properly, but she took his offered hand.

The first thing Ragini did when she settled down in her seat was drink water. And then she directed the AC fans to her face. Nachiket noticed that but didn't comment. He was smiling internally. They were going to reach home when Ragini spoke, "We're not going to tell the kids we are going on our honeymoon,"

Nachiket nodded, "You take care of it. Just tell me what to say, I'll say that. We're going on 13th for four days and we'll be back on 17th evening,"

Ragini nodded. They had turned in the last lane to their society when Ragini spoke again, "That was good, by the way" Nachiket saw that she was smiling.

"I know," he said, smiling himself.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Likho ab!!! Sunday h aaj to..
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Posted: 9 years ago
AWWW LOVELEEENNN!!!
That was just so beautiful, so dreamy.. so perfect!
Thanks for writing this <3


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

AWWW LOVELEEENNN!!!

That was just so beautiful, so dreamy.. so perfect!
Thanks for writing this <3



Thank you. Now write, please. :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its incredible
The way he said "I lov ur body n want to kiss every inch and do it again" was so real n innocent. It shows the purity n truthfulness of his love towards her.
And more than that it is u loveleen who described the situation so perfectly that every word has made sense and an ambience around it.
You r a lovely writer.
Edited by jagrawal - 9 years ago

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