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poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: loveleen3
I am always scared of saying anything about Ronit here because of... You know... :P
But I am not liking his beard at all! He doesn't have to celebrate No Shave November here! :(
Rachna, your story's Nachiket is clean shaved right? :D

Just a one o'clock shadow, Loveleen 😳

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Rachna, honestly the nuance and the beauty in this is amazing... It really speaks to the depth of their relationship and the obstacles they've overcome.

Please let Mr. Khanna continue soon :)

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imagine43

@imagine43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

speechless... lost in their world, lost in this scene..

I will keep myself right where you left off, until the next update...

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Santosh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Such a gorgeous update Di, but you ended the update at the wrong moment so pleej update soon! 😆

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Uff! Ab kahan se shuru karoon mein?! I'm totally fida

Pehle toh I'm terribly sorry for being so late with my comments, Di! I've been reading this as you update but I've been so swamped lately that I'm only getting around to commenting now. 😛

Clad in a bright red and deep cream brocaded silk, her hands filled with red bangles, she looked like a quintessential bride. Nachiket didn't need to see her face to know she would look beautiful. He knew instinctively. She was ethereal.

And this is why I call you a wonderful ball of magic 😆

Both of them are so tired, so done with this pretense. You can see and feel the toll that the separation has taken on both of them and how the thought of separating again is wreaking havoc in both of their minds.

'I know for sure that if we eat from the same plate, our love will become stronger and withstand the travails of time.

Can their love get any stronger? Beautiful! 👏

Only to find herself gazing into a vortex of emotions, swirling in his eyes - hope, love, joy, ecstasy and passion. She felt as if the room was suddenly flooded with sunlight, after a dense, cold spell.

She did it! Oh, I'm so happy for her and for them! ❤️

You better continue this soon! I'm dying to see Nachiket's reaction and see how they finally come back completely into each other's lives, reminding each other of the little things that they still remember and have cherished for all these years. Rachna Di, you're a rockstar! ⭐️

🤗

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Oye Rachna! Where's the update? :D

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Thanks Shikha.

Still a ball ... No curves 😆

Thanks for the awesome review. I will update soon. I just don't know what to write next.

@Loveleen - Thinking and thinking

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: poetic
Thanks Shikha.
Still a ball ... No curves 😆

Thanks for the awesome review. I will update soon. I just don't know what to write next.

@Loveleen - Thinking and thinking

Arrey, don't take it so seriously na! Curves are definitely beautiful 😉

Think think think 😳

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imagine43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Logics.. Not particular to this post.. may be this is the wrong place.

"Ragini had already accept that she had kept the KC vrath in the interview.. and given a bhashan about KC to Nivedita and others", then why does Nachiket say, "I know you were lying..that you didnt keep vrath for me.." etc etc.

Rachna, better update soon, if you want to avoid such comments!! 😉

Edited by imagine43 - 9 years ago