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ShyNomad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

This is so beautiful Rachna... Not just the imagery and the words you use to paint a picture for us but the emotion. I loved feeling their joy as Ragini drank from the rain, relishing their moments together from something as simple as a rainstorm.

I am not just happy after reading this but content because this is the NR I will remember.

Thank you so much ❤️

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Santosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Di😊

Absolutely amazing😃! Such a mesmerizing and romantic🥱rain sequence. I'm awestruck! The way you described dose few moments was breathtaking😲! Excellent OS. Thanks for this i got my niera 😳dose of this week all because of you😎 though i'm small to read romantic kind of stories par kabhi-kabhi chalta hai 😉 ! And happy ending no way you can't do this😒 please write more you can't stop writting 😭

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ShyNomad
This is so beautiful Rachna... Not just the imagery and the words you use to paint a picture for us but the emotion. I loved feeling their joy as Ragini drank from the rain, relishing their moments together from something as simple as a rainstorm.
I am not just happy after reading this but content because this is the NR I will remember.

Thank you so much ❤️

Thanks a lot Nidhi 😛

While I was planning to make it a sad one, I realised that we have never seen them happy at all. And that's how this Vignette came to being.

Wanted to hightlight that our NR is much more than the couple that keeps on cribbing all the while. 😳

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Santosh99
Di😊
Absolutely amazing😃! Such a mesmerizing and romantic🥱rain sequence. I'm awestruck! The way you described dose few moments was breathtaking😲! Excellent OS. Thanks for this i got my niera 😳dose of this week all because of you😎 though i'm small to read romantic kind of stories par kabhi-kabhi chalta hai 😉 ! And happy ending no way you can't do this😒 please write more you can't stop writting 😭

Thanks a lot Santosh 😃 You are such a sweet boy.

I am glad you liked the sequence. And that's whatj exactly was in my head - our weekly dose of NeiRa

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Santosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks a lot Santosh 😃 You are such a sweet boy.

I am glad you liked the sequence. And that's whatj exactly was in my head - our weekly dose of NeiRa

Yay but di you can't stop writting ha abhi ke liye toh bilkul bhi nahi😊

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Sure Santosh, I will try.

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: metoyou
Okay... Let me come back and read this with full attention ...

Intezaar hain 😕

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ShyNomad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Once again your gorgeous writing reminds me of another poem...it came to me the third or fourth time I read this...

"Late Night"
Margaret Atwood

Late night and rain wakes me, a downpour,
wind thrashing in the leaves, huge
ears, huge feathers,
like some chased animal, a giant
dog or wild boar. Thunder & shivering
windows; from the tin roof
the rush of water.

I lie askew under the net,
tangled in damp cloth, salt in my hair.
When this clears there will be fireflies
& stars, brighter than anywhere,
which I could contemplate at times
of panic. Lightyears, think of it.

Screw poetry, it's you I want,
your taste, rain
on you, mouth on your skin.