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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: poetic

Now this is exciting Shabz. The story has picked up very nicely and has all the elements in the right dose. ❤️

Loved the scene where Nachiket teaches Ragini how to drive.
PL do update soon.


Thank you for reading and liking i always wanted to see him teaching her to drive or something in the show
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Shabz,
Ever since the scene where Nachiket rescues Aman and Ragini when Aman's car breaks down, I have wanted to see a scene where Nachiket teaches Ragini driving, in some or the other flashback. Thank you for writing this Shabz. I am truly happy right now! :D Waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Driving! 😃 I knew you would coming up with more fantastic ideas for this piece; you're nailing it!

I loved how Nachiket wouldn't take his eyes off of her instead of watching the road for any approaching cars as she drives...that's so him! 😆 And that Ragini would feel self-conscious about it 😳 And romance was ☺️ as always! Thank you for writing and updating so quickly!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Shabz,
Ever since the scene where Nachiket rescues Aman and Ragini when Aman's car breaks down, I have wanted to see a scene where Nachiket teaches Ragini driving, in some or the other flashback. Thank you for writing this Shabz. I am truly happy right now! :D Waiting for the next part..


Thank you reading and liking and yes i too wanted that hope i have done it justice next part will be up soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: neiralove

Driving! 😃 I knew you would coming up with more fantastic ideas for this piece; you're nailing it!

I loved how Nachiket wouldn't take his eyes off of her instead of watching the road for any approaching cars as she drives...that's so him! 😆 And that Ragini would feel self-conscious about it 😳 And romance was ☺️ as always! Thank you for writing and updating so quickly!


Thank you so much glad you are liking it. He only has eyes for her i want to see ragini teasing him more when he romances her. Next update will be up soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: shabz50



Thank you so much glad you are liking it. He only has eyes for her i want to see ragini teasing him more when he romances her. Next update will be up soon



Ooh are you going to include her teasing him next?! That would be heavenly! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: neiralove



Ooh are you going to include her teasing him next?! That would be heavenly! :D


I meant i want to see it in the show but will try and put in the upcoming update. Did she not tease him enough in the last update?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Oh no! I hope everything is ok...
Loved this update Shabz, you are absolutely right that Ragini needs to learn how to drive if she is to be independent in the US.
I always thought that Nachiket would enjoy seeing Ragini in jeans 😳
loved how she dressed up only for him.

And the constant interruptions were hilarious 😆
Looking forward to seeing where this goes next!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Oh no! I hope everything is ok...

Loved this update Shabz, you are absolutely right that Ragini needs to learn how to drive if she is to be independent in the US.
I always thought that Nachiket would enjoy seeing Ragini in jeans 😳
loved how she dressed up only for him.

And the constant interruptions were hilarious 😆
Looking forward to seeing where this goes next!


Thank you for liking and yes nachiket does not like the interruptions lol next update be up soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4
He walked upto her and kissed her "I have to go to the hospital they have called a emergency meeting hopefully i will not be long" and he went.

Living Room 2.30am
Nachiket was home with ranbir they were sat looking at something when pam came in "have you two just come in" "yes pam" "whats happened" "dr stevens has had a accident he has broken his leg he is off work for a few months and we need to cover his shifts" "but why did they call a emergency meeting" "he was drunk pam so the hospital needs to protect itself the meeting was to decide our plan" "dad i am tired we will look at this tomorrow" "yeah go to sleep ranbir i am going to bed now anyway" pam went to her room aswell.

Bedroom 3am
Ragini was asleep he got changed and got into bed he was going to kiss her goodnight but he stopped himself she was fast asleep don't disturb her he thought.

Sunday Morning 8am
Ragini woke up and looked behind he was fast asleep he must have come in late. She got up and had a shower and changed she looked he was still fast asleep she left him to sleep.

Kitchen 9am
Ranbir walked in he had the phone in his hand "where is dad mum" "he is still asleep" ranbir turned to walk away "where you going ranbir" pam asked "to wake dad up the lawyers need to speak to him" "don't wake him up he will just shout at you wait till he wakes up" pam said just then nachiket walked in. "Is there any coffee" he looked at ragini "ranbir go get ready" "where you going" "where do you think pam the hospital" ragini gave him the coffee he was angry she looked at pam "later" pam mouthed.

Bedroom 9.30am
Nachiket was getting ready ragini brought him some breakfast. He looked at it "no time" "just a bit nachiket" his phone rang "yes i am on my way" he walked upto her "sorry i was suppose to take you driving today" "its ok another day" he kissed her and he was gone.

Evening 6pm
Pam had told ragini everything that had happened at the hospital ranbir and nachiket had been at the hospital all day. They came home ranbir first "where is your dad" "he is on his way" "i am hungry any food mum" "yes go freshen up i will get you food" ranbir was sat eating when nachiket came in. He looked tired he sat on the sofa "nachiket what happened" "we had to suspend him till the police investigations is over so now my workload doubles" "why" "because its going to take time get a new surgeon in pam" ragini walked in nachiket looked at her "i told her" pam said "nachiket go freshen up i will get ur food ready"

Kitchen
Ragini had laid the food out she sat waiting for him he walked in he sat down. She served him and sat down to eat aswell. "I spoke to nishi today" "is she ok" "yes she is missing her papa she wants to speak to you" "yeah i have not spoken to her for a few days i will ring her" "nachiket" "its ok did you go driving today" "no" "you should have taken pam" "its ok i will do another day"

Bedroom
Ragini had just come out of the bathroom when he grabbed her "i have some unfinished business with you" she was against the wall he was standing in front of her. "Do you" "do you need remindering again" she smiled "no is it something like this" she placed a kiss on his neck then his jaw "yes carry on" she placed a kiss on his chest near his heart he looked down at her and smiled he was just about to kiss her when his phone rang "i am throwing that phone away" he turned away and answered it 10min later he came back she was in bed he took his shirt off and got in bed "you not getting changed" "no need" he kissed her on her lips and moved down to her neck and bosom and kissed her everywhere and made love to her. After they made love she was in his arms he was holding her close "does that make up for sat" he smiled "a little bit" she smiled "are you working tomorrow ragini" "yes why" "keep your lunch hour free" "why" "because your husband wants to take you for lunch is that ok" "the nurses at the hospital love you" "everyone loves me but i only love you" "so filmy nachiket" "its true shall i prove it" he turned and leaned over her and kissed her and made love to her again.

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