SS New Life Part 11&Last Part PG 16,17 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ronitfan

YAY!

Part 2 was great as well..
HAHAHAHHA sooo cute - cannot even imagine Ragini as we see her now in a jeans and a white shirt. She'd look so cute! <3 Just like you've written..

Waiting to read where N is taking her <3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: neiralove


Oh absolutely--it's perfect! Can't wait to see what you do next 😊

Glad u like it hope you enjoy the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different but very very very nice! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

Different but very very very nice! :D


Different suprise altogether
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Refreshing... it has the much needed change of scene that everyone was eagerly awaiting on the show (at that time). Loved to see the imaginations put into perfect words.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: imagine43

Refreshing... it has the much needed change of scene that everyone was eagerly awaiting on the show (at that time). Loved to see the imaginations put into perfect words.


Thank you for reading and liking and welcome to the forum
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaaay I'm so excited for your new story Shabz, love the premise and everything so far :)
Of course Nachiket would tell her she looks good in everything 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Yaaay I'm so excited for your new story Shabz, love the premise and everything so far :)

Of course Nachiket would tell her she looks good in everything 😆


Thank you reading and liking and of course he does 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Part 3

He walked upto her and grabbed her hand and led her to the drivers side opened the door and "get in ragini" she just looked at him "come on sit down" she sat down he closed the door and went to the passenger side and sat down. She just looked at him he gave her the keys "what you doing" "this is your first driving lesson" "what" "you need to learn how to drive so this is your first lesson" "nachiket" "what ragini you work so you need a car i don't like you taking the bus or taxis i didn't like it in india but i had no right to say anything then but i do now" she just looked at him he loved her so much. He showed her how the gears worked and what the pedals did. "Right start the car" "but nachiket what if something goes wrong" "nothing will go wrong the road is empty no one is around its just us" she started the car "right put the clutch down and put it in first gear" she did it "now speed it up a bit and put it in second gear" she put in second gear she had both hands on the wheel she was driving. He looked at her he was proud of her "stop looking at me nachiket" "what i am not doing anything" "you are distracting me look i am driving" "yes you are now put it in third gear" she tired but she stalled the car "whats wrong what have i done" "nothing the car stalled it happens when you are learning" "just start it again. They drove around the empty road until ragini was more comfortable with the car and gears. They sat in the car "do you want to drive us back" nachiket asked "no way" he laughed they swapped places nachiket was driving them back to the city. "I did not need to wear jeans just for that" "well they more comfortable then a sari and i wanted to see you in them" he smiled at her she blushed and looked away. They stopped for lunch at a small deli on the way ragini was fidgeting and looking around "whats wrong" "nothing" "you look beautiful stop worrying ok" she relaxed and they had a lovely lunch.

Evening
They had finished dinner and they were all just sat chatting it had been a few days since the whole family had been together when pam asked "so what did you two get upto today" nachiket looked at ragini "well i took ragini" she shook her head no "i took her out for lunch" "thats all" pam said "yes thats all". Ragini got up to go the kitchen nachiket followed "why did you stop me" "i don't want anyone to know just yet" he smiled at her ok and went back to the living room.

Bedroom 10.30pm
Ragini was just getting her nightie out when he grabbed her hand "leave that you don't need it" "why not" he put his left hand around her waist while right hand held her hand he moved closer and whispered in her ear "because you have some making up to do" "i do i don't remember" "is that right" "yes" he kissed her on her neck "you remember yet" she smiled "a bit" he kissed her behind her ear down to her neck she moaned a bit. "You remember yet" she turned around to face him her left hand around his waist and right hand on his chest "i think i need a few more kisses to fully remember" "is that right" he held her hand and moved closer and kissed her on her lips and moved down to her neck she had her hands in his hair he moved back to her lips and then broke the kiss and looked at her "i remember now" "good" he smiled at her she smiled back "anyway why did you change out of the jeans" "i did not want the kids to see me that is only for you" he kissed her again he had his hands on her back when his phone rang she broke the kiss "your phone" "ignore it they will leave a message. He started kissing her again when the phone rang again he broke the kiss she just looked at him "answer it" "no" he was about to kiss her again when there was a knock on the door it was ranbir "dad are you awake" he looked at her she stifled a laugh. She pushed him to open the door "i will wait". He went and opened the door "yes ranbir what is it" "dad i need to talk to you urgently" he followed ranbir out. He came back into the room 15 mins ragini was sat on the bed he went straight to the cupboard and grabbed his jacket "nachiket".
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Now this is exciting Shabz. The story has picked up very nicely and has all the elements in the right dose. ❤️
Loved the scene where Nachiket teaches Ragini how to drive.
PL do update soon.

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