OS: Family - Page 3

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Ok well first dear Sanam I don't know why you thought it was silly...if the show does even half of what you've accomplished here we will all be happy and satisfied viewers!

These are some of the many things I loved about this story:

1. Pam trusting Ragini to help Nachiket - it's nice to see that as Ragini trusts Pam with her kids, Pam finally trusts Ragini with her brother...the top three things I want in this show besides N/R getting back together and Ranbir forgiving Ragini is for Pam and Ragini to be BFFs.

2. Pam figuring out (finally!) that Nivi was behind the domestic abuse scandal.

3. Ragini talking some sense into Nachiket - and him listening!

4. Ragini confronting Pam (finally!) about her apparent hatred for her...this was very well done and I appreciated how you brought it back to Pam's regret that she was not there for her Dadaji's final days (which the show conveniently forgot in the flashback).

5. Everyone kicking Nivi out 🥳

6. Pam ripping up the contract - good riddance!

7. Ashaben putting her foot down (finally!)

8. Someone slapping some sense into Aarav (finally!) - and Pam's speech was wonderful

I could go on and on but please know I enjoyed reading this very much, thank you for this! 🤗

I hope you will share more with us on a regular basis ❤️

Originally posted by: neiralove

SANAM!😃

I'm sorry that I'm late and that I took so long to write this out. I just loved so many parts!

First, Pam and Ragini's emotional conversation was just lovely. I liked how Ragini offered financial support despite what little she has to give. And that Pam understood her when she explained that she wasn't behind the whole media scandal. Their relationship is one that is so under-explored, so I'm glad that you took the initiative to tackle that.

It's okay Ragini. I think is sub ke baad itna tou mein samajh gayi hun tumhe ke I can trust you.

Absolutely! Der aaye durust aaye.😊

I enjoyed that Ragini runs into Nivedita on the stairs and gets a little worried, but Nachiket never even brings Nivedita up once he sees Ragini. All he's concerned about is that she left without telling him with her fractured arm.😳And the way that he drops his anger when she drops the glass--he cares so much for her; the little cutie pie.😳

He turned around and walked to the window.. Ragini saw the defeat in his style.

This was beautiful. Ragini understands him so well and she knows just what to say to make him feel better:

"We're together, sub theek hojayega."

Everything is better with her by his side. Especially now that he has a shoulder to cry on, he can handle any problem.And at the most perfect of times too, she's there to help him get through this crisis.😊

And when Nivedita plays all of her cards to try and separate the beautiful couple, who better to protect them than Pam!😃

Tumhare jaisi ghatiya aurat meine kahiin nai dekhi!! Now get the hell out of here!! Aur dubara mere mere bhai ya meri family ke aas pass bhi dikhi tou tum acche se jaanti ho mein tumhara kya hashar karungi!

FINALLY someone showed this little witch her rightful place! And in the best of ways!👏👏👏

And I loved how you tackled all of the complicated emotions and problems between Nachiket, Ragini, and Pam. Each sentence here flowed so beautifully into the next. I don't know how you came up with the idea for Dadaji being the reason that Pam hates Ragini, but it was spectacular! Everything was so true to their characters; Pam's sensitivity, Ragini following her rules and doing what Dadaji asked her to do, and Nachiket listening to his Dadaji and his wife. You blew me away with this part--it was gorgeous!😳

And Pam tearing up the contract and Ashaben finally putting her foot down!

Hum dono tumse bade hain aur humne decide karliya hai." Pam adds.

Too cute!😳

The ending with Aarav and Ranbir was phenomenal! I've been waiting for someone to give these two a piece of their mind and I'm so happy that you chose Pam to do the honors. She's the one that poisoned Ranbir against Ragini and added fuel to Aarav's hatred, so it's only fitting that she be the one to rectify her mistake. That entire paragraph was marvelous and her lines were perfect!

But my absolute favorite part was the very end!

She breathed a sigh of relief, "Mein coffee bana rahi hoon. Kisi ko peeni hai?"

It's so Pam to just brush off everything that happened and take everyone to something as simple as coffee!😆I could totally imagine Ashwini in this whole story--she would nail it thanks to your amazing lines!

You really outdid yourself with this one, Sanam! Thank you SO SO SO much for writing such an amazing piece!😊This story is like a perfectly wrapped gift--beautiful and exciting all at the same time!

This comment is way too long, but I loved every last bit and I wanted to share that with you. My comment didn't go through the first time (😡) and so it took me a while to write it all out, but it was all worth it! A beautiful story to end a super long and busy day with and a great bedtime tale.

Thanks again love! ❤️

🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

Sanameyyy You are a Magician😃 because i so wanted to see this happening in the show. Don't know kab aayega yeh scene khair apne script kar diya. Thank you i can assume PKN, RR and Ash Kalsekar doing all this.

Isse zyada aur nahi quote kar sakta else bahut lengthy ho jayega. Overall i loved how all the main leads shouted at each other😆😆😆

This O.S was very very fantastic and Pam was awesome, stand out star and was very perfect in scolding everyone from Neil to Aarav who deserves a slap too

I can all imagine this happening in the show and thank you so much for sharing such a perfect O.S.

Rotten tomatoes your way for calling this O.S as silly😆😆😆. It certainly deserves 5 Stars rating⭐️

Thank you for such a wonderful treat😳😉😃

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

Hamna, a big Huggie to you too! 🤗

Well, too many confessions in an OS so it could have gone wrong. Isliye I said it could be stupid 😆

Yaar..the show makers don't even remember that Dadaji wala scene. And we have to make up the stories ourselves but they are thousand times better 😆

About Pam and Ragini's relationship..the CH's always ruin it. Remember preleap when Pam opened up to Ragini and shared her insecurites? I was expecting something good after that. And then the Arav walah scene. They always do this 😕 Nevertheless, I love these scenes ❤️

And Thank you so much darling for reading and loving it. ❤️

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

Shikha!!! 🤗 🤗

First you stop with your sorry's! 😡

SHIKHAAA!!! A BIG BIG HUG for you!! 🤗 I loved your comment yaar..it made me senti 😆 😳 I wanted to send you an image but something's wrong with my PC or internet..couldn't attach it. So imagine a Big cute HUG! 😃

About that dadaji wala scene..you don't remember it kya? Pam did share that with someone, I think it was Nivedita whom she shared with. But like everything else the showmakers have completely forgotten 😕

Thank you so much yaar for loving it!! And itna bada comment likha..love you loads! ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

MAKWAY!! 😃

Thank God kisi ne tou note kara shouting shouting part 😆 isliye you should be knowing why I called it silly 😉😆

Shouting already ziada nai tha ke mein ek aur thapad bhi daalti 😆 Thank you so much dear for your detailed comment! Even I imagined Ashwini saying all those words while writing. She would have nailed it! 😃 Thank you again Makway! 😃😳

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

I think it's silly 'cause everyone is shouting at each other and enters the scene at the right moment 😆

Nidhi, I was just visualising this scene in my head when Pam would ask R to talk to N..that's the perfect moment when R can clear her position about the jail thing. I believe Pam would believe in her. Also, it is a good time to expose Nivedita's intentions off. But if the show makers show this tou for them this show will be over. 😉 And that's when I decided to write. I wasn't sure if I would be able to pull this off in an OS. But I wrote and it came with the flow.

I also wish to see Pam and Ragini joining hands to bring their family back together. Not BFFs but they can be good friends atleast. And I think only Pam can slap some sense into Aarav and Ranbir too.

Thank you so much for your detailed comment, Nidhi! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: metoyou

Sanam jaan! 🤗

Yaar, I know you are busy so please don't feel bad about it. If you keep giving is such lovely OSs then you please be inactive for a few days 😆

Okay jokes apart, I really didn't expect this one from you. I mean that in a good way! You really covered all the main things and issues that need to be cleared for NeiRa, so that they can make a fresh start.

I do understand why Pam asked Ragini to tell Nachiket, because yes only she can handle him. His outburst to Pam was too good - I think we haven't seen him THAT angry yet (at least, I haven't).

Thank God, Naagin is out of the picture too and luckily it was Pam who showed her the way to hell. And and and...last but not the least; the kids and Pam. GREAT! Both Ranbir and Aarav needed this reality check and that slap in the face in order to wake up and see what Ragini as a mother has done for especially Aarav.

And then she just walks away by saying she wants a cup of coffee...so much attitude, too good! Well done Pam!

Yaar Sanam, to be honest, Pam was the heroine of your story. You really put her in the limelight and did a great job. If someone can bring this family back together, as in taking the first step, then it is her. Because she plays a major role in this family and can make the kids understand, because she has that power.

Thanks a lot for this OS. Very well written dialogues and good flow of scenes 👍🏼

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