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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: loveleen3
One of my closest friend's name is Nidhi and she is getting jealous these days because I can't stop telling her how beautiful you (another Nidhi) write. :D

To the updates, I don't know what to say. I am reading other feedback just so I could come up with words that would do justice to your work. And I have got nothing. I want to say all that everyone else is saying and more. For the third chapter, you used my prompt. And you did complete justice to it. The hurt, vulnerability and then the jealousy that I had imagined, your words made it come out even better. And then the romance, haaeee.. Kya hi bolu.. ! <3 <3

I love your writing. The ease and flow of conversation is brilliant. And your dialogues! And then the imagery you present! I re-read your stories because of that. The teasing is always spot-on. They behave like husband-wife in your stories. More than Nachiket, I like the Ragini of your stories. She is risking too much by trusting Nachiket again. I have always been scared for her. But thank god, Nivedita is out of picture now. I'm just waiting for the next part now. Update soon!

P.S. Reading Glasses! <3 <3 *sigh*

Loveleen,

I'm not even sure how to respond to all this 😳😳😳

Thank you sooo much ❤️🤗❤️ A super hug to you for this!!

Firstly, I am glad justice was done to the prompt - it was a great one. ❤️

You are too kind (seriously). I think I naturally find Ragini to be more sympathetic and at times I have difficulty understanding Nachiket as a character. So she gets all the best lines 😛

I'm so happy you enjoyed these updates (and the fact that you re-read is the best compliment), thank you ❤️

PS. I don't know why but N is adorable in reading glasses 😊

PPS. Your comment is still making me blush (I think I will probably save it for one of those days) 😳

PPPS. Am eagerly awaiting some more writing from you missy, whether it is a continuation of Backseat Now or another OS (or more drunk Ragini )

One last thing, Nidhi's are pretty awesome (I have personal experience with this 😛)

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

You are welcome Nidhi😊 but me talent! No😆, you guys are the best😃

Yes we all are enjoying your work and will certainly wait for the rest of the story😃

You can catch up on my Filmy Neira thing anytime😊. will be waiting for your kind feedback😳

Yes you absolutely...as Sukhi often says all the writers here have such unique talents and styles that they bring to the table. (Thanks Sukhi 😊)

Off to read now! 😃

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Nidhi, pl update .

Please ... For Me

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

YES, an update!

After being offline for a few days, this really brings one big smile on my face 😃

She had found peace in his arms last night as the soft cotton of his kurta caressed her cheek and his warmth eased the ache in her heart

Nachiket and his white kurta - that just fills my heart with love and much more for him 😳

Finally Nachiket kicked that Naagin out of their lives. Good he realized that she is the hurdle in his life. Also, when Ranbir asked if it was good good, makes me start to like him.

The bedroom scene is really so natural and realistic, exactly how NeiRa is supposed to be. She noticed some grey hair here and there - lovely! 😉 Oh and how can I forget the specs! Seriously, two very sexy features of a man who has aged. And Nachiket toh is like wine; he gets better by age

And the kiss was the perfect way to end their long hectic and tiring day. His ever so gorgeous Ragini 😳

Nidhi my dear, this update is a beauty. You make the most simple moments look so special that it just warms my heart with joy and love. You are a very wonderful writer and you have to update this the soonest, please. It is only because of these kind of magical pieces that I am here.

THANK YOU! 🤗

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Santosh

@Santosh99

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#245

I guess i'm to late😔

Nidhi di, there is just one word for you TREMENDOUS!

What efforts you put into your writing...every word is just perfect, just what you want to convey with such clarity and impressive strength of writing and pros👏👏 Just outstanding.

😃😃😃 Looking forward to even more magic from you😊

Please update soon🥱

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Nidhi, pl update otherwise Narges will leave us

We can't afford that. Can we?

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: poetic
Nidhi, pl update otherwise Narges will leave us
We can't afford that. Can we?

Hahaha. You can very well afford it! But Nidhi won't let you wait too long Rachna 😳

Jokes apart, I'm trying to be less active

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: poetic
Nidhi, pl update otherwise Narges will leave us
We can't afford that. Can we?

Nope. We can not afford that.

And neither can you say no to Rachna. You just can not.😳

Update Nidhi! More excited about your update than today's episode. 😳

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: metoyou

Hahaha. You can very well afford it! But Nidhi won't let you wait too long Rachna 😳

Jokes apart, I'm trying to be less active

Why less active ? I know. You are waiting for the other Show ?

I am upset..