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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Narges,
Tu mujhe aaj finally batade Hrithik ya Fawad๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: metoyou


Me? Romance? I can think romance yes but writing...no yaar ๐Ÿ˜†
BTW, is that Fawad in your avatar?


I am talking about overall writing, you are amazing. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ no doubt about that and Yup that is Fawad. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ MY LOVE ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: metoyou


Me? Romance? I can think romance yes but writing...no yaar ๐Ÿ˜†
BTW, is that Fawad in your avatar?


Why are you even asking her whether it's FK or not? You are 101% sure it's him ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng

Narges,

Tu mujhe aaj finally batade Hrithik ya Fawad๐Ÿ˜‰


I'm curious to see who's next, I hope hrithik doesn't get hurt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hamna19khan


I am talking about overall writing, you are amazing. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ no doubt about that and Yup that is Fawad. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ MY LOVE ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Oh overall, accha...thanks that's sweet ๐Ÿ˜ณ Fawad is my love too so sorry to disappoint you there ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl


Why are you even asking her whether it's FK or not? You are 101% sure it's him ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†


Yaar Sanam, I wasn't for 0.01% ๐Ÿ˜› my dil said that it's him only though ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Hamnu!

You and fantastic piece of writing is like hand in glove๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


Feedback time:

Why'd she smiled at me? Does she want me to join her the way I used to? But aren't things different now?
All of these thoughts crowded my mind. I was about to get up when she leaned a bit forward and stretched her arm out of the window catching some droplets on her palm, she always did it *I smiled as I remembered her doing this*

I finally got up and walked towards her, I was standing right behind her, my chest was almost touching her bare back, she turned back and she did one more thing she always did, she threw those water droplets on my face and laughed, her laugh sent tremors through my body, it was the most beautiful sight, the sight I was longing to see, the sight which always made me happy, no matter what the problem was her laugh was the solution... This is the best narration that i have ever read๐Ÿ˜›


she slowed down the motion of her hand and now her hand was just resting on my face near the lips, I saw the same desire in her eyes which were begging me to hold her close to my heart... Flame on Hamnu๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

There were a lot of questions in my mind but I ignored them because I didn't wanted to miss this moment, I wanted to feel her breath, I wanted to listen to her uneven heartbeats which were no less than a rhythm of love for me... Neira ka Dil se Dil ka connection. Superbly written๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘


I realized our relation doesn't need any words to express what we feel; our eyes can do a much better job than our words, and they were delivering much more than our words could ever do... I hope NB takes a cue out of Hamnu's talent๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› & do something nearby๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

We enjoyed the moment being this close to each other after a long time,
she slid her hands down and wrapped them around my back, I was running my hands up and down her back, I knew she liked it...


She closed her eyes and tightened her grip as if she always wanted to do it, I also closed my eyes placed my chin over her head just feeling the cold air on my face which at times brought some raindrops making my face and her back a bit wet, well it was just beautifying the moment and we were loving it... Neira's cute moment๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰

I realized that the person who resisted getting close to Ragini was Neil who never belonged to her, it was Nachiket who loved her, loves her and will love her always.

I rediscovered Nachiket that day and one thing was very clear to me that it's not who you are that holds you back, it's who you think you are not... The best one๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


NB Ko bhaagao, Hamnu Ko Lao for the job๐Ÿ˜†

This OS is so awesome, i was imagining RR & PKN completely as it was so apt, perfectly scripted & explained point by point. Hamnu you are the best talent that i have ever seen on IF...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


Keep everyone floored with your skills๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ





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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awiiieee,, Makwaaa it means a lot to me...
I am Blushing :P :P
Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜†
Oh God so much tareef ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

For what ๐Ÿ˜†

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