Vignette Mini Series : Memories in the Rain ... Part 2, page 6 THE End - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ha ha Narges, Shikha, Sukhs
I am sure he is more interested in the journey ... celibacy is getting to him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And her getting more beautiful as she ages is definitely not helping him one bit.. in his words, she's still beautiful and sexy! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

And her getting more beautiful as she ages is definitely not helping him one bit.. in his words, she's still beautiful and sexy! <3


She is aging in reverse order - not helping him definitely 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic


She is aging in reverse order - not helping him definitely 😆


Your siggy and the way he looks at her..
she's his treasure..

tera ishq main kaise chod doon,
meri umra bhar ki talaash hai 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan


Your siggy and the way he looks at her..
she's his treasure..

tera ishq main kaise chod doon,
meri umra bhar ki talaash hai 😳


I know. Sigh! Bless this two. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Ha ha Narges, Shikha, Sukhs

I am sure he is more interested in the journey ... celibacy is getting to him



The journey of love and to be loved 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic


I know. Sigh! Bless this two. 😳


*BIG HUGE SIGH*

Sudh budh khoyi ha khoyi maine...
Ha jaan gavayi gavayi maine.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was gorgeous in its simplicity (the simplicity being someone comforting their loved one) and still you were able to explore so many emotions and the push and pull between Nachiket and Ragini.

One of my favorite parts:

My eyes are shut tight and I'm biting down on my lip just to try to stop myself telling her I love her. Telling her my need of her. My muscles tense in trying to contain myself and she releases me gently. I expect she believes that I'm in control again and have no further need of her. She couldn't be further from the truth.

How they're both so reluctant to think the other one cares or wants or needs the other is heartbreaking. But you brought them together in a beautiful way, where his words whispered to her are just as healing as hers to him.

Beautiful stuff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another beautiful piece❤️ I actually felt Nachiket's fear... You explained it so wonderfully😊

She was and she was not. What was I to believe?
Poor poor Nachiket💔

I couldn't lose her too.
The fear of losing someone we love💔

She'll fade away again
His refusal to believe💔

Could I dare to hope that she means those words for me?
The inner pain in this statement💔

As special as I am to you I wonder?
His hopes❤️

I don't dare to hope that she loves me, but I know she cares deeply for me
He settles for the only thing he can see with his eyes💔

This was like seeing deep into his mind.I loved it😊 Truly wonderful😊

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