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@PavanMalhotra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng

accha 😆 Sanam Listening?

Now I am so scared, happy?

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Vidya

@Vidya.CV

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ronitfan
VIDYA YOUR SIGGY!!!!! <3

😳 Raw passion and endless love... Take me now!

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...
Loved the OS😊It was emotional and sweet😊
Nachiket's POV and his inner doubts and thoughts were very well described😃

I loved these lines specially😃

She was and will always be the only woman in his life who could make his heart at peace
So true😳

He tried to close his eyes and wanted to dream all the stress away
Poor Nachiket😒

if destiny wants this then who are they to fight it?
Right😳

Their hearts are broken, but can be put back together. They need to take slow small steps and should be careful. He was on his way to love her again and she was on her way to love him again...
Perfect😳

Loved the OS very much😳

Thanks Tiana!

I like to read your detailed comments, shows you pay a lot of attention 😊

Glad you liked it!

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Rahul.Sharma9
Hey Narges,
Nicely crafted words and emotions.What a beautiful portrayal of life. True, Life has many masks, some worn and some remain veiled yet...no words for your words.

After a long and cumbersome journey I'm sure getting to the destination gives you a whole lot of satisfaction and some kind of peace.

Hey Rahul!

Thanks a lot buddy for your very kinds words. Makes me really happy you liked it even though I was so unsure about this myself.

These two have a long way to go, but will conquer their love once again.

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Khushi.Verma
Narges🤗
Beautiful ... Beautiful as always,You present it so beautifully ! Its always a great reading experience when one lands on your OS.😃

has that certain transcendental feel ...ethereal .. just like you :)
maybe only I felt that😛 ..but I loved it even better for the life and bliss in it ..the emotional side of it ...You have conveyed the sentiments beautifully😳

Khushi! 😃

Thank you SO much! You are too kind yaar, itni tareef 😳 It was seriously some randomness and how it ended up that way, no idea! 😆 Good you liked it. We have read many sides of Ragini so I wanted to bring out some real and raw emotions of Nachiket. I guess it worked 😉

Thanks again! 🤗

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng
Narges😳could feel the passion oozing out of each word..Hats Off!!😳 Shoni Moni
your writings always strike a chord in my ❤️ and soul :) Need I say more?

Well, only you could capture immense and immeasurable love through your words. Simplicity, pure, and just love. Love it! Each line is powerful

but I just couldn't sway my eyes off..."He was on his way to love her again and she was on her way to love him again..."

Vidi!!! I'm just happy to see you hear...bas!🤗

We had our share of ups and downs the past few days But your Shoni Moni could make you smile again!

Jokes apart... you liked it that? Oh wow...thank you so much! It was a first attempt you see 😳

Joyride is next, hopefully not that sad and dark 😉

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Narges,

This is so beautiful ... I was at peace after reading a OS, after a long time. Thank you so much. 😆

So true - one bad chapter doesn't mean that the entire story of life is over.

I wish and hope that you will sincerely consider writing more, in addition to the Joyride.

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goldstar678

@goldstar678

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Finally finally I'm here though late as usuall.

Nargis,you scored a century with your first solo attempt itself.I just liked the way you potrated his feelings,his realisation that there is no place for anyone in his heart except her,the fact that he made mistake too during that divorce phase and the most important realization that just like he,she too suffered a lot because of this divorce.

Its overwhelming to see that he is ready to give one more chance if she too is in favour of it.

Its one of the best OS that I read for sure.I request you to continue this good work from time to time so that we all can have the previlage of reading your creativity.

Thanks a lot.

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: PavanMalhotra
wahhh... aaffreen... aaffreen... its wonderful .. kya kahe aapki tareef main ..shabd nahi milte, aap jaise dost baar baar nahi milte..
wonderfully written :)

I think, its never ending word !! I loved it and thanks, Beautifully penned. Such beautifully woven words,Deep sentiments from a passionate lover...

Very touching and profound. emotions flowing through. Awesome Narges. Loved it to bits

Love..yes it leaves us many times but then we wait for it to come back...not losing hope...Very deep! And I am still very curious to know how love leave people. How can people fall out of love when they were so much in love once? I hate to admit it, but this is one true fact - people do fall out of love- and it makes me sad.

Song was icing on the cake

Pavan...don't embarrass me with so much tareef 😳 I don't even know what to say.

Happy that you liked it 😊

Even I'm unable to understand how people can let go of love so easily and soon. I'm definitely not one of those!

That song is one of my all time favorites and was actually a trigger to write this OS. I used the lyrics to bring out Nachiket's feelings and emotions.

Thanks again 😊

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Khushi.Verma

Vidi...it really needs courage to comment on a legendary piece like this. Narges has taken love to another level and Narges,It's your one of the Best

Khushi...too much yaar 😳😳😳

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