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Vidya

@Vidya.CV

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Narges😳could feel the passion oozing out of each word..Hats Off!!😳 Shoni Moni

your writings always strike a chord in my ❤️ and soul :) Need I say more?

Well, only you could capture immense and immeasurable love through your words. Simplicity, pure, and just love. Love it! Each line is powerful

but I just couldn't sway my eyes off..."He was on his way to love her again and she was on her way to love him again..."

Edited by Vidya_Bng - 10 years ago

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Khushi.Verma

@Khushi.Verma

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng
Narges😳could feel the passion oozing out of each word..Hats Off!!😳 Shoni Moni
your writings always strike a chord in my ❤️ and soul :) Need I say more?

Well, only you could capture immense and immeasurable love through your words. Simplicity, pure, and just love. Love it! Each line is powerful

but I just couldn't sway my eyes off..."He was on his way to love her again and she was on her way to love him again..."

Vidi...it really needs courage to comment on a legendary piece like this. Narges has taken love to another level and Narges,It's your one of the Best

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Narges!!!

Too good dear 😉 SO well you explained Nachiket's POV. Kudos to you!

The long bath she would take, after a hectic workday, allowing herself to relax and release all the stress from the day. Her wet hair and the smell of the jasmine body butter would still drive him crazy.

Wow wow wow! So romantic 😳 She still has that same effect on him, Still is the word.

She didn't only live in his heart; her existence had taken over him too...

I loved these lines, so true and so beautiful 😳

Even without a single touch, he could feel how her fingers would linger on body. How he loved it have her hands around his neck and caressing his face

I'm this ->

Are they finally somehow on the same page? Is she willing to give it another chance too?

Yes yes YESSS!!!😳

Just loved each and every line! You're gorgeous! Thanks for this dear. And that goes to say that you should write frequently okay!😆

Take this🤗

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Rahul.Sharma9

@Rahul.Sharma9

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Khushi.Verma

Vidi...it really needs courage to comment on a legendary piece like this. Narges has taken love to another level and Narges,It's your one of the Best

Agree,Loved your thought process. This was one of the best OS I have read in a long long time. Thank you so much for writing this. Hugs for such a marvelous creation.There are few works which creates an everlasting impact on readers memory which remains forever... and your OS belongs to that category...