F.F: Filmy NEIRA Final update (Neil Proposes Ragini on Page 19) - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

I am waiting santosh😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Penultimate update?! 😲 Inti jaldi?!

Well, let me get started with my comments...

Ragini: You are annoying me now. Plz go away before I do something bad to you...

Neil: Kya karlogi tum!

Ragini: Dekhna hai...😡

Neil: Zindagi bhar...

Ragini: Soch Lo...

Neil: Sochna kya hai.

This was too cute! 😳 You totally nailed flirty Nachiket! 😊


Tujhe toh dakshina dena hai. Dekh mere haaton me itching ho rahi hai. Ab le bhi, shayad tu patla hojayega aur Dimpy bhi khush hojayegi" while punching on Karan's belly as if it is his Boxing bag.
I died laughing here! Dakshina! 🤣

Overall, a lovely update to a lovely story! Thanks for this treat! 😊

Oh, and the filmy proposal! I can't wait to see what that entails--I'm sure the finale will be amazing! 😃😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Santosh99


My reaction when you updated!
Sorry bhai for my late comment my laptop broke that's why icouldn't comment typing from phone so ignore misakes!
OK feedback time
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" Neil: Oh Plz do it magar thoda pyar se... But wait pehle Nivi ko yaha se bhagata hun. Plz wait haan...Ragini: Oho Nivi! Itna Pyaar! I'm dying after reading this line itna pyaar hahaha" Neil: Kya karlogi
Ragini: Dekhna hai..
.Neil: Zindagi bhar...
Ragini: Soch Lo...
Neil: Sochna kya hai. Bhai this linesare to cute! And neil and karan convos are damnhilarious
Neil: What do you mean that Mote? Saaf saaf bol" Kaha bhaagta bhaag! Mujhe bach kar Kaha bhaag sakta hai yokozuna?😆Replies Neil while adjusting his shoe laces
Neil: I wish k tu mera boxing bag hota toh tujhe ek din me patla kardeta Aur haan Ragini Bhabhi bol! After getting tired of beating the hell of karan, bhai the kind of words you use in your updates makes your story even more funny!
Neil ask Karan to press his shoulders😆t face Karan: Sure Bhai, I am happy to press your hard shoulders! I feel bad for karan punching bag hi bana dala lol


Thanks a lot Bhai for the kind comments. Filmy FF looks good with funny dialogues😆😆😆

Happy that you enjoyed this FF. Will post the next and final filmiest update soon😃😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neiralove

Penultimate update?! 😲 Inti jaldi?!

Well, let me get started with my comments...

Ragini: You are annoying me now. Plz go away before I do something bad to you...

Neil: Kya karlogi tum!

Ragini: Dekhna hai...😡

Neil: Zindagi bhar...

Ragini: Soch Lo...

Neil: Sochna kya hai.

This was too cute! 😳 You totally nailed flirty Nachiket! 😊


Tujhe toh dakshina dena hai. Dekh mere haaton me itching ho rahi hai. Ab le bhi, shayad tu patla hojayega aur Dimpy bhi khush hojayegi" while punching on Karan's belly as if it is his Boxing bag.
I died laughing here! Dakshina! 🤣

Overall, a lovely update to a lovely story! Thanks for this treat! 😊

Oh, and the filmy proposal! I can't wait to see what that entails--I'm sure the finale will be amazing! 😃😉


Sorry Shikha this was the penultimate update and the next one will be the last

But Thank you for ready and for the sweet feedback😃 i have a huge grin on my face😳

The mentioned parts are my favourite too😆😆😆 and i still grin while reading it😆

Will try my best to get you the best of Finale in the truest sense of filmy way😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
Bhai don't you think shikha is forgetting something!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Santosh99

Bhai don't you think shikha is forgetting something!


Thanks for reminding Bhai. sanameyy & shikha update soon please😕😕😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56



Thanks for reminding Bhai. sanameyy & shikha update soon please😕😕😕


Yes
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Posted: 9 years ago
OHK! I am finally here with my feedback 😆

Sorry bhai I am bit late well actually not a bit but I know I am very late khair ab I am here to tell u how much I loved this update 😉

This update was yet again hilarious as the previous one's or should I say your updates are getting more hilarious by every passing day 😛

This story is getting and better by time and I don't want it to ever end because this story is super cute and hilarious at the same time 👏

Now coming towards the update Hmmm,
So the stupid Nivi strikes again Oh God I just hate her she is intolerable even in the stories 😕 Thank God Neil knows that she is nothing but a stupid girl at least in this story 😛
She kissed him 😡

Her kiss was important for our Ragini Devi to get jealous and it'll only help her understand her love for him so it's OK 😆

Neil and Ragini's conversation was the cutest how he said "Zindagi Bhar" awwwn ☺️

Oh God Karan and Neil's part seriously made me ROFL, Yokozona LOL 😆
but Karan is not the stupid he gave Neil a great Idea FILMY PROPOSAL. Oh I am so looking forward to it 😳

Please Update the next part soon so that I can enjoy the proposal because I can't wait 😃

Superb update 👍🏼

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