OS : I Hate to Hate you - Page 2

Originally posted by: JB-US

Really this is a well thought out OS. It definitely plays with the idea of misunderstandings however the way it all leads down is truly beautiful. The escalation of events and the flow is very appealing. The way the misunderstandings were cleared was emotionally packed but not unwanted and the nokh jhok afterwords was adorable. Finally they were able to get the words out, to finally say what they were desiring. The possessiveness and the claim of one another was just amazing, it was an emotional OS and it really took you along for the ride and you made the characters very realistic. Please continue to write. I enjoy reading your works.😊

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Zainab!

So emotional this was.. finally she confessed to all the feelings that she had been hiding from him all this time... and I loved his response to those too.. taking everything in his stride and then teasing her about it!! lovely really :)

Now he's so assured that she's not going anywhere.. could feel the happiness through your writing.. thanks for this <3

kyu sirf tumhari baato se mujhe farak parta hai, kyu sirf tum he mujhe dominate
kar sakte ho? Aise kyu hai?

If only we could have them speak so honestly on the show! Looking forward to more 😊

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

mai kuch bolun??? 🤪

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Zainab,

Aise kyu karte ho Nachiket, kyu aaj bhi iss dil pe sirf tumhara he raaj hai,

kyu sirf tumhari baato se mujhe farak parta hai, kyu sirf tum he mujhe dominate
kar sakte ho? Aise kyu hai?

If only we could have them speak so honestly on the show! Looking forward to more 😊

aise kyu karte ho Nachiket, kyu aaj bhi iss dil pe sirf tumhara he raaj hai,
kyu sirf tumhari baato se mujhe farak parta hai, kyu sirf tum he mujhe dominate
kar sakte ho? Aise kyu hai?

These were my favorite lines😳

Please continue!

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Arre waah! Awesome Zainab ;) Reconciliation kar diya tumne..! Loved it !

(holding his collar)

aise kyu karte ho Nachiket, kyu aaj bhi iss dil pe sirf tumhara he raaj hai,
kyu sirf tumhari baato se mujhe farak parta hai, kyu sirf tum he mujhe dominate
kar sakte ho? Aise kyu hai?

These were my favorite lines😳

Please continue!