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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: poetic
SN, this is such a wonderful story. This is how it should have been - so sensitive, emotional and filled wiith love.
How beautiful you write! My God! Where have you been for so long?

I loved the way they relate to the dream which could have been their future. Deferred dreams indeed!

And the poem by Lanston Hughes just fits in.

You should seriosuly consider professional writing! 😆👏

Thank you poetic! 😳

I'm glad the poem didn't seem out of place - its feelings are universal. As far as professional writing goes, all the writers on this board could do a better job than the so called professionals on the show!

As always, i appreciate your kindness and encouragement, it keeps me writing when i haven't done so in years.

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Tiana.Disney
Loved it ⭐️ . Loved the way you have written. If only they had shown this in the episode. It would have been mind-blowing. Really nice 👏

Thank you Tiana! It seems we are both trying to fill in things the show should have given us 😃

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shabz50
Loved it ur writing is wonderful this is hearbreaking tho they love each other so much

Thank you shabz...it is so sad how much they care but can't be together, maybe one day.

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Changa
Great 😃 writing. As an American I can relate to the deer in the yard eating the plants. She has nothing to worry about as he promised her a whole farm.😳

Thanks Changa...I do love how THAT was her major concern about moving to America 😆

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I keep wondering why I haven't given my comments on this one yet...

This is painful yet beautiful. Her pain, his grief, her love, his passion, her memories, his past...very very very well written.

You have covered up so many things in just one OS which is really commendable and a tough job to do! Well done!

Thank you :)

Have I welcomed you? If not, welcome to the forum! 😃

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: metoyou
I keep wondering why I haven't given my comments on this one yet...

This is painful yet beautiful. Her pain, his grief, her love, his passion, her memories, his past...very very very well written.

You have covered up so many things in just one OS which is really commendable and a tough job to do! Well done!

Thank you :)

Have I welcomed you? If not, welcome to the forum! 😃